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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vinan2050

woo again awsm update lvd it yarr so Nupur ka divorce bhi ho chuka ???


thanx fr Pm



thanks alot dear...
lagta tu asa hi hai 😆

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

WODERFUL UPDATE! LOVED IT !




thansk alot dear

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

zabardast

tai ami ki tu hun




thanks alot dear



thnk u


Originally posted by: mayurlove

nice update.

Nupur's mom is very strict .I know sometimes parents show strictness bt here i m getting the impression that she does not have trust on her children.Is she her real mother?Bt I m happy that Mayank and samrat are very caring and protective towards Nupur.




thanks alot dear
ya she is .. she i s more irrelevnt i would say... ya unfortunately she is .. thnaks alot for liking MS...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Firstly congratulations for another FF.. :))

Nice title, although I wish title kuch aur hota..

Coming to the story, from what I'ver read from the first chapter its a different genre.. and very unique story the first chapter indicates a college youth story but the second part indicates a family story.. with pricilples, prestige and proudness.. and of course alot of love..
The mix of both is an amazing combination. Makes the story a whole lot interesting.

Nupur's mother is extemely strict.. waqai main... par koi naiy baat nahin, akser log aise hote hain... especially joint family system main.. ek maa ka sakht lehje wali hoti hain aur dusri pyaar karne wali. Iss say bacche ko sahi parvarish mil sakti hai, thori daant, thora pyaar.
Par yeh toh bohat he sakht hain.. Nupur was acutally shivering.. wow.. Yah toh usski maa bohat he sakht lehje ki hain yah to Nupur bohat narm aur masoom hain.. along with possesing other qualities that she showed in the college/uni.
Par haan usski ammi hain to bohat intense... khaas kar k jab unho yeh kaha "apni lagam khud band lay ap... warna us ko humain keechna buhat achay se ata hai... samjhi.." That shut me up... uff yeh toh bohat he sakht hain. Nupur par taras aa raha hain...
Aur haal ne toh hairaan kar diya... Nupur talaq yafta hain... I'm speechless ...

Really nice story Fiza...Its a really intriguing story so far, please continue soon.

Aur urdu main likhne k liye aapka bohat bohat shukriya. 😊
😊
.SilentPrincess




thanku so much dear

thank u glad u r liking the way it is presented...
haan sahi bat hai aur khas ker k woh maa jo bahar rahti hoon aur kafi zayda cosmoplotin ho aur us ki beti as bulkil bhi nah hoo

dono hi baatein hai nupur k case mein ..jasay jasay yeah khani bahray gi..us k is andaz ki wajah bhi samny aay gi
thanks a lot for liking

and thanks for inspring me to write in urdu😊
thnk u

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Posted: 13 years ago
API...aj update milne ka koi chance hain kya...😔
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Posted: 13 years ago

Rplyd to u all

Anila….pg 8

Mayuloveu.pg 9

MistiofMistz……pg 9…welcum to my writings, Ruchi… page 9 n 17

Bhawna, Maria Gopi…Clustersofstar….WHATEVER--SupriyaluvsMN-upriyaluvsMN-shobhakaimal…shafyyy…Gunners-parul_bansal….pag 10

Suja…pg 16

All other from page 17

And

Thanks for liking the previous one, I am trying to make it easier, add more English to make u understand…

Any confusions u can pm … and to those all of my readers who were thinking I might delay or leave this ff… not to worry I wont ever

Thnku and hope u enjoy this ff..

pardon errors..





Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter: 3

Past

Gunjan: nupur asay kasay chaly ga… hum sab jarahy hain

Mayank: yeah behas bekar hai..

Samrat: yaar tu bhi uski side lay rah hai.. asay kasay chaly ga… nupur hum sab sambhal layga na.. tum zara bhi fikaramand maat ho..

( donot worry nupur we will handle every thing)

Nupur: asa harghiz (noway) nhi hoskata aur ap dono is baat se achay tarah waqif ( know it) hain per kyun bekar mein hum sab k liyan musibat ghari ker rahi hoo.. aploog jao na.. hum asay hi thik hain.. aur humain wasy bhi samndar se daar lagta hai… khama ap ki picnic bhi karab

Mayank: Samrat woh thik kah rahi hai.. tai jaan abhi tak gai nhi hain .. hum dono late ho bhi gay tu koi kuch nhi kahay ga… per agar nupur 1 min bhi late hoi tu tai jaan is k liyan ek aur musbiat ghari kerday gi…

Samrat: fine.. tu mein kya kero ga ja ker

Gunjan: tu mein kya akely jao gi.. choro.. she pouted sadly

Nupur: ab yeah kya bekar k tamasha hai… Samrat pls asay bekar ki behas na kerain.. ap teeno ja rahy hain…

Saying so she left for library…

Mayank: tu us ki fikar maat ker mein dekh lo ga.. tum aur gunjan jaoo.. acha hai ek tu hum …ap dono ko akelay janay k moqa day rahy hain aur ap hain k …

Samrat: he smiled.. bekar ki baatein maat ker… aur woh many gi tum rukho gay tu

Mayank: us ko kasay mana hai humain pata hai… tum se zayda janta hoon mein samjhy.. ja gunjan ko yeah khush kahbar suna.. kasay moo latka ker bhaiti hai… mein teri behan ko dekho..

He entered the library and found her turning the pages of book in deep thought.. he sat in front of her and whn her hand was in between the book he close it..

Nupur: ouch.. mayank humain lag jata tu..

Mayank: kuch nhi hota… kaha hai ap..

Nupur: library mein

Mayank: sach mein ,… humian tu ap adhiraj k kayalo mein ghum dekh rahi hain… dekho abhi tum ko ghoor(dekh) raha hai

Nupur: yeah mjhy kyun ghoorta hai.. ajeeb lagta hai .. jaha joo waha ajta hai… ami ko pata chal gaya tu meri PG.D ek semester mein hi kahtam hojay gi…

Mayank: uffu aram se… break lago.. us ko hum dekhy lay gay.. he turned to him and glared and he removed his eyes hurrily . dekho darpook…

Nupur: per yeah thik nhi hai..

Mayank: kya adhiraj k daar pook hona.. hain baat tu apny 16 anay daurost ki hai..( ur so right) .. asay woh tai jaan ko kasay handle kery ga

Nupur: mayankk tum bhi nah… hum tum sab ki picnic per jany gi baat ker rah hain

Mayank: uffu tu ap abhi tak wahin hai.. woh hum ny set kerdiya

Nupur: kya really she smiled fully…

Mayank: hum ny Samrat ko mana liya k woh gunjan k sath jay.. aur woh maan bhi gaya.. us ny kaha apk kiya hoga tu hum ny kaha ek aur din bardhast keraly gay

Nupur: per tum meri wajah se nhi jao gay…

Mayank: haan ,.. kahna chahta hoon… per tum se jhoot bolony ki aadaat nhi hai..

Nupur: bolna bhi maat.. bht boray ho tum us mein

Mayank: mein ja ker kiya kero ga… un ki romantic date mein

Nupur: DATE…

The student at the table looked at hem with smirk.. finding them always together they have a complete believe they are couple…

Mayank: maar do tum.. meray sary maqay (way) jab mjhy koi larki mil jay maar do tum..

Nupur: mein ny kya kiya

Mayank: date tu itni zoor se chilai hoi k sab ko lag raha hai mein poch raha hoon tum ..

Nupur:..aray choro.. tumhain wassy bhi koi nhi milny wali…. tu bhai aur gunjan date per jay gay… really.. kya baat hai mera bhai bara fast hai 3 months mein larki in…

Mayank: nhi nhi uski behan tu us se bhi dast hai.. 1st day se larka in hai…

Nupur: mayank tu mjhy yeah adhiraj se tang kerna band kero… per tum kyun nhi jarahy

Mayank: kya kero ga .. samrat aur gunjan class mein itny busy hotay hain.. tum nhi hogi tu bore hoajo ga.. mera plan kuch aur hai..

Nupur: kya .. she said with a grin.. knowing his plans have always been special.. evrytime when her mom has said no to her, he has made that time so special for her that she never regret going out..

Mayank: movie, phir lunch apni pasand k fast food order keray ga…. Aur phir icecream..

Nupur: per ami k kya kero gay..

Mayank: tum picnic per nhi jarahi hoo.. per tum aur mein library mein notes baan rahy hain.. simple..

She smiled widely..

Nupur: thanku.. ur my best friend.. pata hai mein kitnay din se bahr nhi gai..

Mayank: shukar.. tumhain yaad tu aai yeah baat..

Nupur: tum hona yaad rekhny k liyan.. tu mein kyun rekho.. chalo ghar chalty hain.. 2-3 din ghar on time wanra bhai ko bhi ijazat nhi milay gi…

She said excitedly collecting her things…

……….

Samrat: gunjan ek kam kertay hain hum dono chalein picninc per

Gunjan: really … maagr mayank aur nupur…

Samrat: nupur thik kah rahi hai us k jana us k liyan muskil ban jay ga… aur agar mein bhi nhi gaya tu pora waqt khud ko kossti ( rahy gi

Gunjan: Samrat yeah tumahra zati(personal) mamala hai magr phir bhi.. nupur asa kyun..

Samrat its ur personal matter but still why Nupur is so scared

Samrat: humari ami…. Hitler hai samjh lo… un k huqam ki kihilaf kam kerni ki saaz hoti hai… aur agar nupur ko hi milti hai… bachpan mein woh humain aur mayank ko bacha layti thi… islayn buhat mar ghati thi… magar ab tu woh buhat daar gai hai

Gunjan: nupur wasy tu daar pok nhi hai… ami se itna khauf

Samrat: tum mili nhi hona ami se islayn asa kah rahi hoo…

Gunjan: aur mayank nhi jay ga tu..

Samrat: he smiled… woh nupur k baghir khabi nhi jay ga… aur us k nupur k pass hona zoroori hai.. us ko kisi na kisi cheez mein laga k rekhy ga…

Gunjan: smiled… tu hum chal rahy hain phir…

He smiled looking at her…

Samrat: soch lo humary sath akely jarahi hoo.. ..

Gunjan: bori class hai MR…

Samrat: when u hold me near u can… he smirk

Gunjan: such a flirt u r

……….

At dining table

Mayank: nupur… Samrat tu picnic per ja raha hai.. aur us din zayda loog bhi nhi hongay library mein .. tum humain sari books mil jay gi… hum log waha bhait ker sara notice complete ker lay gay

Tai jan: aur Samrat ko nhi parhna hai… tum kyun jarahy hai phir..

Mayank: tai jan hum logo ny subject divide kerliyan hai… tu woh apny hisa k ker chukka hai

Taya: yeah achi baat hai… ap teeno sath hain is tarah se humain nupur ki fikar nhi hoti aur ap logo ko bhi acha lagta hooga… nupur beta sab acha chal raha hai nah.. khub mazay kero

Nupur: she smile.. ji baba sab acha chal raha hai.. buth mazdar course hain…

Tai jan: university maza kerny nhi jaya jata hai… samjhi ap

Mayank: kahny mein glue mila do moo band… he said under his breath and smart giggle..

Shilpa: mayank… tameez se..

Taya: bhabi… Salman k pass ap jarahi hai kiya…

Nupur: choti ami ap ja rahi hoo…

Shilpa: han beta hum sirf ek week k liya jay gay.. wohi jab ap logo k papers horahy hongay tab…

Nupur: ap sab jay gay…

Shilpa: nhi sirf hum jay ga… thik hai…

Nupur: ji…

Shilpa: bhai sehab bus 15 din baad inlogo k papers hai .. bus tab hi hum jay gay…. Bachay parahi mein busy hongy tu yaha in logo ko koi problem bhi nhi hogi

Tai jan: magar us waqt tu humari bhi conference hai..

Samrat: tu ka ahua .. hum log mange ker lay ga

Mayank: han han… koi masala nhi hoag…

Taya jan: han aur hum bhi tu hongay nay aha.. so ap dono jay… bacahy mazay bhi mhi kersakty papers jo hain…

Tai jan: hmm

……

Samrat: yupi…kitna maza aay ga….

Shilpa: shabash kitni batemez bachy hain aplog..

Samrat: aray choti ami apk jany ki thori hum tu ami k jany ki khsuhi mana rahy hai.. agr ap aur woho dono nhi hotay tu kya hota…

Nupur: ap jadli ajay gi nah

Shilpa: han beta… agar apk papers nhi hoty tu apko hum sath lay jatay

Mayank: wah wah.. wasy hum apky sotualy betay hain kya… in dono ko hi ghod( adopt) lay lay app

Nupur: han aur is ko ami ko day dain.. buhat banti hai..sarya jawab ami ko yeahi dayta hai… mayank tumahri tu life ban jay gi…

Samrat: ap log chutiyon mein jatay.. hum Karachi ki kuch rangeenya dekh laytay..

Nupur: jasay ap buhat masoom hai dekhti nhi hai

Mayank: ami apko pata nhi hai yeah club bhi jata hai

Samrat: mayankk

Shilpa: aur jasay humain yeah nhi pata k ap bhi is k sath gay hain….

Samrat and nupur laughed ….

Mayank: han tu nazar rekhni parti hai is per.. wasy Samrat hum log combine studies per gunjan ko bola sakty hain…

Shilpa: acha .. yeah gunjan kaun hai…

Samrat: kcuh nhi .. dost hai choti ami… he was actually feeling shy

Nupur: sharam tu tum asay rahy hoo jasay bahu se mil wa rahy hoo

Shilpa was smiling

Mayank: han bol nah gunjan kaun hai.. sirf dost…he put his elbow on his shoulder wch Samrat removed glaring at him…. . ami akelay picnic per jaraha hai us k sath

Samrat: bekar ki baatein maat ker tu ny hi kaha tha

Mayank: mein tujhy ghatay mein khodny ko kaho ga tu tu khood jay ga…

Nupur: han bolo bolo… woh udass hogai thi koi picnic per nhi jaraha hai

Shilpa: ohhh… tu nobat yaha tak agai .. ab udasi bhi nhi dekhi jati… Samrat kab mil wah rahy ho…

Samrat: ap sab ko pata nhi kiya hogaya hai bekar ki batein kertay hai.. mein ja raha hoon.. bye…

He left the place hiding his smile and they all burst into laughter…

Present:

Tai jan: ap k kayal mein kitni percent chance hai k yeah hosh mein aay gi

Doc: kuch kah nhi sakty Mrs.ahmed… 100 bhi hai aur koi chance bhi nhi hai…dekhiya ap log yeah baat samjh nhi rahy hai .. k un ki yeah halat emotional truma ki wajha se hoi hai. Na k kisi physical truma .. tu emotional trauma k elaj sirf emotional

Tai jan: wht rubbish ap ek doc hoker asi baatein ker rahy hai… donot worry mein do din mein is ko is hospital se hi shift ker do gi.. bulkay abroad la jao gi..

Doc: as u wish… per ap ko koi faida nhi hoga…plus ap us ki jaan ko aur khatary mein daly gi

Gunjan who was listening to all the conversation was stun to se a mother still acting so stubborn… but than her stubbornness has cause the damage that is..

Taya jan: kyun zid ker rahi ho tum.. beti ki halat asi nhi hai k woh travel keray… marna hai us ko… wasy bhi humari hi zid ny us ko yaah tak pochaya hai

Tai jan: har baat k elzam ap mjhy maat diya kerain… us k khud k is haal per pochya hai.. bewaquff hai aur kuch nhi… kahin aur shadi ker dayna hi is baat k haal hai

Taya jan: us ki iddat tu pori hony do.. aur bus us per aur zabardasti maat kero

Gunjan moved away from them as it was Samrat's call

Samrat: lagta hai khuda ny us ko bacha liya…

Gunjan: matlab….

Samrat: flight cancel hogai hai…

Gunjan: tum yaha ajoo.. yaha ami ek aur masala ghara ker rahin hain….

Samrat: uff ya khuda.. thik hai hum atay hain….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

API...aj update milne ka koi chance hain kya...😔



ji janab bulkil mily ga...
wait for 10 mins 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

nice update ... beautifully written.

their past was so beautiful ... completely contrast of their scary present. nupur alwz scared of her mother ... wo kuch jaida hi strict hai uss k sath.

n their present is too scary ... nupur is in hospital, but her mother was just too much ... is she her real mother?? i doubt.

aur ab to mayank bhi nahi aaraha hai ... ab kya hoga?? iddat pura ho gya to kya hoga???

Fiza, dont do anything wrong to my mayur. ... warna tu gayi ...

love ya ...


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part fiza .
m loving this story too much .
mayur is very cute ...

but nupur k shadi kisse hua tha?
so far from story it seems k mayank k sath .
phir divorce kyun hua?
so much of confusion but m liking this story still ...
cont soon
Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Main late ho gayi...🥺

Awesome update API...
loved it to d coreee
der past was sooo cute n funny...
hayeee!!! Nupur nhi jati toh Mayank bhi nhi jata...Awww
u know u made me Love Mayank everytime...he is d Best!!!! i only love Mayank...😍
kyun sare ladke uske jaise nhi ho sakte...Sigh!!!
bt beech mein yeh Adhiraj kaha se Tapka...
she is sooo srtict!!! arhhh
i loveee Shilpa aunty...she is a Darling an angel...
she loved all of dem spcly Nupur so much na...Sigh!
ohhh-hooo so Almost sare barey ghar se bahar n woh log akele...hayeee m dying to read it further kash daily bases mein parh pati...sigh! chalo koi nhi..
loved d Past as much as i hate d Present...
ufff!!!! Mayank ki flight cancel kyun ho gayi...
YA KHUDA...😔
ab kya hoga...
n Nupur ki shadi akhir kis se huyi hain...Sigh!
kahin uss Adhiraj se toh nhi??? nhiii
bt den agar MAyank se huyi hain toh woh agar nhi ayega phir toh iddat puri ho jayegi...Ya ALLAH!!! phir kya hoga!!!!😲
beti mar rahi hain n yeh uski dusri shadi ke bare mein soch rahi hain...HUH!!!
n no comments for dat woman as i hate her to CORE!!!!!!🤢
nhi na plzzz Mayank ko jaldi se la dou...plzzz
i want Mayank jaldi se Nupur ke paas Hamesha ke liye...plzzz
loved it to d coreee
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

flight cancel ho gyi?

mayank ki flight?
bt agar uski flightcancel ho gyi toh wo late ho jayega n iddat puri ho jayegi phir???
isk matlab nupur ki jisse shadi hui wo mayank nhi?
uff so confusing...
nic update
loved the past
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago

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