Sweet Agony ~Maneet FF~ Note Pg 150 - Page 44

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sree.maneet

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Hello all back with another update...





Part 7

Maan: Geet…why you are not listening to your mom?...if you're scared like this… then how will you be able walk?...
Geet gave a stern look to him….pouting her lips…Cursing his mom and now maan….
Geet(ST): now he also joined with mom…I was having headache with mom now he also start to irritate me…. Oh I don't like people compelling me…. Why don't they understand that I am to scare….babji please help me….
She started to look up… praying to her babji….Complaining about both…
Maan wondered….he also looked up… where geet is seeing…
Maan(ST): what is she looking at?... I can't see anything there…. Oh may be she is trying to avoid me… and is not having intention to try….
Rano saw maan also looking up.. along with her daughter….and started to giggle….
Rano: Maan beta… you're wondering why geet is looking up na….
Maan and geet looked at rano… and geet tried to stop her…she was feeling embarrassed that her mom would reveal her secret to him…..
Rano: Because she always complaint about everyone who make her do things against her wish to her babji….and poor babji always listens to her complaints….and I think by now her babji would have closed his ears because of her nonstop talks….
Maan started to laugh hearing this and even rano joined him…geet was red angry at them and again started to look up… seeing her complaining to her babji again… maan and rano burst out laughing continuously….
Geet: Both of you STOP…..
Rano controlled her laugh….
Rano: Maan let's stop...i feel sorry for babji…..
Geet:Maaa….
Maan(ST):Oh god…she is looking very cute…even I anger she is every beautiful…those lips… the way she is pouting…. Aww….cute….i wanted to hug her and feel her….i want to kiss those red cheeks and her pink rosy lips….babaji…when she will be in my arms…..i want to embrace her tightly……like no one can see her..or take her away from me….i want to be with her forever…with this angel….
He started to move towards geet to take her in his arms… but he stopped himself…
Maan(ST): Maan…control yourself….
Rano pecked geet's forehead….taking geet in her arms….
Rano: Achha… okay….. Sorry my baby….
Geet also circled her arms around rano… and pecked her in the cheek….Maan was looking at both mom and daughter…adoring them….and their love towards each other…..their relationship is so cute and pure…
Suddenly the phone bell rang…and rano made an excuse to check who was at the door…
Maan again asked geet to try…but she refused...
He took her hands into his…. And started to caress her hand softly…
Maan: Geet…please try… you need to try… I promise you won't feel the pain… just take my hands and look into my eyes…
Geet started to look into his eyes deeply…. Searching for answers of his behavior towards her….he helped her to get up from bed…..when she was trying… she slipped…but his muscular arms wrapped around her slim waist to support her from falling.…her waist was so slim… his arms were covering totally….and his hands rested on her belly…he was able to feel her soft skin over her kameez….
Holding her like this… was making him lose his control… but he snapped out of it and made her stand properly…he took her hands and started to make her walk….
Geet: outch… maan sorry I can't…..
She tried to stop…. But he did not listen to her…
Maan: Geet… you can come on try….
Geet: No maan…. No… it is paining….
Maan: Geet…. Come on… look into my eyes first…
With pain… she looked into his big brown eyes…there was spark in his eyes….she was totally lost looking into eyes deeply…his eyes were full of love…she was confused with his expression..She can see concern in his eyes for her…with pure love…
Geet(ST):Look at those perfect big brown eyes…these eyes are enough to make any girl go crazy…but why is he doing all this?...i am reading something else in those eyes….something else…is it right what I am thinking?...or may be…am I wrong?...
Maan broke the trance of geet…and he made her walk…again she was about to slip….held her tight close to him…..he gripped her waist by the side…and she collided with his chest…she closed her eyes because of fear…that she will fall down…. But when she opened her eyes…she was held safely by Maan…she started to feel very protective when she held close to him….his warmth was something soothing for her…she never felt something like this….
She again looked into his eyes….because of her pain…she can see pain in his eyes…. His eyes speak volumes….but she is still confused with mixed feelings…
Maan was totally lost in her… the first time he held her….he controlled himself …..But again this time….it was getting difficult for him….
Both were looking deeply into each other's eyes…..he started to tighten the grip around her waist….she felt something new sensation in her body when he was moving his arms around her waist…
She raised her hand…and held his collar…tightly…holding her grip from falling down….he took his other hand towards her face….with his fingers he started to feel her cheek…that one touch of his finger...geet was feeling problem to breath properly….her bosom was moving up and down….he smoothly moved his fingers from her cheek towards her lips….feeling her smooth skin….making him to feel her more and more….his passion started to take over….she closed her eyes….this feeling was making her lose control….his touch was so magical that it is impossible for her to resist….
Her lips started to tremble when he was nearing his fingers towards her lips….her lips were tempting for him to taste them….she started to tighten her grip in his collar….he took his thumb and felt those rosy lips…they were like a pink rose petals….he pulled her even more closer…now his rock hard chest was collided with her…he can feel her soft bosoms…touching him…..she moved her hand around his neck in response to his action…..he was still lost in feeling her lips in his fingers…she was losing herself….she parted her lips anticipating for a kiss…..he started to move closer to her lips…..yearning to taste her lips for the first time….it was only an inch gap between their lips….she can feel his warm breath on her lips….he removed his hands from her lips and moved them inside her hair… feeling it was so silky….other hand was on her waist holding her lifting up in the air to level her length with his….
Suddenly they heard geet mom calling her and she was approaching towards her room….this made them realize their situation…so they broke apart…and he made her sit on the bed….she was totally stunned with herself….losing herself to him…she realize what both were about to do….Maan felt very guilty of his acts towards geet….he turned…not able to face her…Rano entered her room…when Rano entered Maan left the room without saying anthing….Geet was still in shock…
Rano came to geet and jerked her…
Rano:Geet what happen?...
Geet: ah….nothi…nothing mom….was just trying to walk….
Rano: oh you tried to walk…Maan helped?...
Geet: Ye…yes….he did…
Rano: Oh..that was so sweet of him…he is a lovable person….geet I just got a call from your dad..he said he will be coming tomorrow….
Geet: Oh ok Mom…I am tired I need to rest….
Rano: Ok baby….take some rest….
Rano left the room…geet went into her thoughts….Remembering the intimate moment with maan just few minutes ago…
Geet(ST): What was I doing?...i just surrender myself to him…..yes to be honest….his touch was so magical….never felt this way…..the desire in his eyes…..his warmth….everything made me to lose myself to him….but this is not right….no…I should have controlled myself….what if he thought wrong about me?...oh god….
She drifted to sleep…thinking about maan….
Meanwhile…Maan came out of geet's house…and he started to drive with full speed….
Maan(ST):Maan whats wrong with you….why did you lose your control….now how can I face geet….what will she think about me…?
He drove to his office in full frustration…still thinking how to face geet…..
After attending all the meeting and completing his work….maan thought of seeing geet once….but his guilt made him stop….so started to return home….just then….he got call from…

Precap: From who he got call???...šŸ˜›



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