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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: fatima2603
I have just read all 5 instalments now and love it.
This is the first FF i have read where Arnav disappears and it is a refreshing read. Khushi has become such a strong character and I love it.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this little effort of mine!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: ss374
Why will you post it after exams, if you have already completed writing it.

Not Fair. *Pouting*

Loved the teaser, but really want to know why Khushi is not ready to sign that deal!!!!

Please do update soon!!!

Aww... Sowwiiieee Sobia! Was caught up in a couple of things!

Update on the way!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Hello my lovely forumwasis...

How are you all?

I'm late! (As usual! 😉) and I'm truly very sorry for that. I wanted to update sooner; but I just couldn't find any time to do this before. But this time - I got it! The next chapter is finally here!

I know it's been a while since you all read the previous chapters. So I thought of making a post for story-so-far. I hope this brushes off some dust from the story and gives you an idea of what had happened in the previous updates before you continue with the next chapter 'cause else the chapter may not make much sense. 😉

I want to thank each and everyone of my readers for hanging around Achilles' Heels for so long - even during my absence. There are sooo many people I want to thank personally - who constantly encouraged me to write the next chapter (and by encouraging I mean - had me at gun-point! Literally!) Thank you alll of you!

Trust me, this one is very close to my heart - and seeing soo much love and appreciation from you for this makes me extremely happie! And happie is an understatement here!

Please let me know if you liked this update! I have worked sooo hard for this one - it is pretty intense if you ask me; one of the most difficult chapters I have ever written. So I don't think I would be a fool here expecting some likes and comments!

Waiting for your opinions!

Loads of love,
Pearl...

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

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Shruti Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

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ooppss...by mistake i din edited this post...

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Shruti Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
Hello!!!

Achilles' Heels Chapter Five is ready to go! Finally! *Phew!

Updating soon!!!

hearing this since saturday...😭

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: Shruti21

hearing this since saturday...😭

Awww... So sorry!!! This one was a tough one to write for me! But its prrreetttyyy long; so I guess that would make up for the delay!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Res

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This was definitely very long but worth a wait!!

Loved the whole chapter.
Every emotion was brought out really well!

I hope so we get some answers in the next chapter.
And u wont make us wait for it!!😳

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sharme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#350

my spot...

*edited*

ummm... i take my promise back...

coz i think i hate him a little bit...only a tiny whiny bit though...

well...its like i dont hate him totally... i just hate wat he did...

i mean how cud he just slap her like that... insensitive fool as always... aint he ?!?!? shouldnt have expected better...

and then he goes on denying his actions saying he didnt mean to do wat he did...

hufff !!!!! he is COMPLEX...

but i love the way how khushi still has faith in him no matter wat he does...

MY WONDER WOMAN... never gives up...does she ??? especially wen it concerns arnav...

i love ur khushi sai... her characterization is perfect and improvised...

arnav's character has not changed much but tweaked a little bit...

he gives the feeling that he's our arnav at the same time a totally... ummm... un-understandable arnav... i like his surprisingly cool n -nothing happened- kinda a attitude in the last part... khushi's too... if i had been there i wud have slapped him back rather than talking so calmly...

but guess wat i found out... u have kept him the ORIGINAL in his anger... THE ASR i mean...

he's not lost for all...

i love the way how u have changed the dynamics of the characters to suit ur story's plot...

and u didnt leave us a chance for any predictions abt ur future story line... wise move luv...

i mean... u stopped at "Arnav Malik"...

so all i can guess is he's gonna spill his past or...dunno wat else is possible...

he might refuse to tell her anything just like how he's refusing to tell the reason behind his -run away groom's cousin- act...

waiting for the next installment from u to stabilize my haywire mind from trying to think of "wat wud happen now"...LOLZ

~~~ sam xoxo

p.s: arnav was a bit scary with that unreasonable slap... y do i have a strange feeling that he got angry just becoz wat khushi said was true... that he indeed is a COWARD... no offence...

its human psychology to lash out in anger wen u wanna prove something wrong as right... sooo... and he too was surprised that he actually slapped khushi... welll... will wait for u to explain everything rather than jumping to conclusions now...HUGS N TONS OF LOVE SAI...

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago