FF: Har Pal Ka Intezaar... Part 16 (Pg. 72) (30.6)

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haribol79

@haribol79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Read both update in one go... Amber you are wonderful with romance and emotions penned down so well...

plsss continue soon... I think Chota Gollu is one the way...:)

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Suman

@_CandyCream_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

OMG!! This update is totally awesome! 👏 Take a bow! 😳 The way you captuted their emotions is exceptional!! LOVED it! 😃 Pls continue fast! 😊

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Naznin Ahmed

@balh123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Hey your FF is amazing!Too good!
Continue soon!

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taashu11

@taashu11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

so good and too emotional specially clothes part felt like watching balh again...

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

OH MY GODD..😊.It was an awesome update..👏. Just loved it...Plzzz continue sooonnn...😍

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snehasya

@snehasya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

tum meri yaadon se jaa na sake tum meri bahon mein aa na sake lovely update and u covered each and every moment with each of the cloth passing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 awesome thought and end just had shaken me😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. cant wait for the next part update as sooon as possible...

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

What the what the Amby? Is Priya gonna give birth to a premature baby?

Oh no! Y did Apeksha's call made him go pale? Oooh so many questions.

Loved the angry Priya in the first part making faces at Krishna ji.

I believe the sarees were arranged in chronological order. LOL!

Loved the man bearing his wife's emotions and that too with so much of patience. U seem to remember every dialogue of RaYa. Now don't take this much of time and give us the next update ASAP! I donno if I can even login in the next week.

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azk92

@azk92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: ravichitra
What the what the Amby? Is Priya gonna give birth to a premature baby?
Oh no! Y did Apeksha's call made him go pale? Oooh so many questions.
Loved the angry Priya in the first part making faces at Krishna ji.
I believe the sarees were arranged in chronological order. LOL!
Loved the man bearing his wife's emotions and that too with so much of patience. U seem to remember every dialogue of RaYa. Now don't take this much of time and give us the next update ASAP! I donno if I can even login in the next week.

Now dont get all doctor technical on me ok..LOL... Im still a student.. will try to make it as close as possible to a real situation 😉 All your questions will be answered in the next update 😉

HAHAHAHA i know i realized the chronological part later..i didnt think anyone would notice, but nothing gets past you haan! LOL.. oh well.. whatever.. She has a system going.. wear it and put it on the right side LOL. and there was stuff in the middle.. jus the special occasion ones happened to be in order 😉

Puhleaaseee, remember every dialogue? Yeah i know the jist of a lot of them but i went back and watched the longer ones.. LOL

I'll try... just woke up. lots to do today so maybe tonight if i can! I know its goig to take me long to write the next one because there's tons I want to cover and I gotta do a bit of research to make sure its legit hahaha.

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azk92

@azk92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: mem1
OMG Amber. If it wasn't 1 am, I probably would have come up with something to say, but I am totally speechless...

I do notice an increase in boldness level. Now I really have to go back and read all the other OSs, and FFs I missed . 😉

And what was that ending? It is 1 am. I need to sleep. How do you expect me to sleep with that sort of ending?😕

LOL hahaha

Mhmmm, i'm starting to open up a little LOL... preparing myself for the big return to the present 😉 No i think i left all the bold scenes in this FF.. there might be one OS that has a bold scene but thats it.. This is my romance ground hahahha.

Don't you trust me? LOL 😉

And besides, that was revenge for all the ppl that leave me hanging with crazy endings and disturb my sleep... *cough Angie cough* 😉

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azk92

@azk92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
hiii 2 parts at a time ..superbly written ...
and each imp moment in raya life you wrote very well with connection of her clothes ..its amazing..
the pain , the longigness to be together ..everything was just perfect ...
plz update next part soon

Yeah I just wanted to make it a filler part, like for Ram to leave, so it was initially just that sofa conversation bit, but to make it a bit longer i added in the saree part, and then the whole nursery thing came to me, and then things just started flowing so it ended up being really really long and I didn't want to break it up into 2 parts. So i just made it one part, 2 posts.. 😉

Thank you!!

Will try and update soon! 😊

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