ARHI SS/FF : The Protector - part 16,pg 131

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: Honkytonk
Totally love the interaction between all your characters...especially loved knowing what's going on on Sean's head!!!! This Mr Negi seems like nasty piece of work...is has obviously got the new cadet who is now friendly with Khushi to work for him!!!!! Wonder what he is hold against her, beside promotion????

Thanks for PM

am glad you find the interactions likable ...
n writing what's going on Sean's head is fun 😃😃

n Negi is one hellofa work ... 😉 ... u ll see more of him in regular intervals 😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: KC294
a new twist... wow pls continue soon

thanks a lot KC294...
am really glad you liked the update 😊

n yeah ... not a twist ... more of uncovering the past 😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: kdkumar
Loved it!!

thanks a lot kdkumar...
am really glad you liked the update 😊

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: Sodapop313
This is such a unique story. I haven't read anything like it and I love this plot line. To see this side of Khushi is really refreshing and to Arnav come back into Khushi's life in this manner is brilliant. I am eagerly waiting for an update so please update soon. 😃
P.S Is it Sheetal? I hope for her sake she isn't the mole.

am really glad you find the story unique and the characters refreshing 😊
thanks a lot for reading thru and commenting on it

abt the mole ... u ll come to know to soon 😊😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: Chocoangel
Heyaaa...!!
thankk you so much for d mention...bt bt... i just tried to help u in d possible way as i can...😉
so...not a big deal...!!
u can ask me for d help any tym...😃

cuming to d update...!!
simplyy amazing...!!

Hey thr !!!!!! 😃😃
althou u trued to help (in ur words) ... I had to mention it right ?? ... i wasnt sure if I could actually write that part ... splly moving into the mystery part with lots of dirty n murky people arnd ... so I needed someone to give me a push 😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: Angel-Girl
Awesome Update
The part when Arnav was hurt about Khushi talking about killing herself stood out to me the most for some reason
Idk why

thanks a lot Angel-Girl ...
am really glad you liked the part ...

That part stood out for you coz may be coz you saw some glimpses of his love and possessiveness towards her openly ... 😊

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: anita_21492
This story keeps getting better and better

thanks a lot anita ...
am glad you feel so 😊

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aditi07

@aditi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#818

wow...stroy getting even more interesting!!
is the cadet negi is talking to Sheetal??...sister of sam?
eager to read further.

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: nishi

Haina ?? Sean's really cute 😉😆
n who can blame sean when he sees 'humans' smiling in sleep , wondering what so funny when they sleep 😉😆
abt who the mole is u ll come to know sooner 😉
amd soo glad you liked Khushi here ... and super glad that you love Sean more 😆😆

hahahaa yes yes!! sean all the way.. :D it would be sooo cool if he gets allong with aranv even more.. khushi will be so mad!! and to reply to ur previous comment, YES!!! sean and aranv make a the bestest pair.. khushi can go for now, seanav all the way 😉(see wat i did there ?! :P )

Edited by insanelycrazy - 13 years ago

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: aditi07
wow...stroy getting even more interesting!!
is the cadet negi is talking to Sheetal??...sister of sam?
eager to read further.

u ll soon come to know abt that dear ... 😊