Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar# 11 LINK THRD 12 Pg 142 - Page 16

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Here is the next update I have tried my level best to capture some of the special moments of Maaneet's life in MH till date in this update I hope u will like my effort
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PART 98

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Maan placed a loving kiss on her forehead in response to her question and both of them started walking towards the beautiful memories of their past life


PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bgBD3EboJNc


Music

Geet rested her head on Maan's chest and Maan held her waist with full authority as they stepped out of their car and reached the area where both of them had met each other for the first time

Their legs automatically get paralysed as they started reliving their entire journey; yes this was the place where this story had started; Destiny had used enimity and hatred as its weapon to bind these opposite poles into a divine bond called LOVE

There was a sweet smile on Geet's face as an innocent thought crossed her mind;;;

Yes it's true that relationships are made in heaven or else was it really possible that the man whom she hated from the core of her heart would today become the soul of her life?

She lifted her eyelashes and looked at Maan; she let out a small chuckle as Maan had placed his palm on his face as if remembering the first token of love that Geet had gifted him in their first encounter yes he was recollecting that Geet had slapped him in front of the entire crowd

The biggest insult of his life had turned out to be the biggest blessing as it was because of this incident that an angel called Geet had stepped into his dark life and now every moment of his life was a blissful journey for him just because of his Geet

Tu hi rab music

He moved his gaze towards Geet and it was only then when he realized that Geet was busy admiring him but with a slight glimpse of mischief in her eyes

He made a cute puppy dog face and pouted his lips innocently as if telling Geet that instead of kissing me look what u had gifted me on our first meeting

Geet removed his hand from his face; she lifted her kurti slightly and placed Maan's hand on her bare waist

Meri aakhon mein meri saason mein tera chehra'Tera chehra

Maan squeezed her waist possessively and pulled Geet closer; Geet was in love with his possessive touch she moved her lips nearer to Maan's face and started blowing air from her beautiful petals

Mere dil ki har ek deewar pe tera Chehra'Tera chehra

Maan closed his eyes to engrave this moment permanently; his heart skipped a beat as Geet started decorating his cheek with a series of wet and soft kisses

Meri aakhon mein meri saason mein tera chehra'Tera Chehra

His hand automatically started moving in an upward direction inside her kurti as the touch of Geet's soft rosy petals on his rough cheek had ignited a fire of desires in his heart

Mere dil ki har ek deewar pe tera Chehra'Tera chehra

Geet started breathing heavely as Maan's long finger started tracing the length of her spine shamelessly; Maan pulled her closer their bodies were glued to each other in such a fashion that there was no place for air to pass through them

Tu hi tu hi mera jahan

Their lips were just an inch away from each other

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

Geet parted her lips and encircled her arms around Maan's neck

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

Maan sensually removed a lock of her hair that was curtaining her angelic face; this simple touch of his was so passionate that Geet drank her saliva in a failed attempt to hide her desires

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

Maan noticed this and without any delay he dipped his head and kissed the entire length of her throat making her realize that every act of hers be it small or big can never go unnoticed by him as she was his life and also his topmost priority

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

She moaned his name softly and in return Maan left his mark on her sensitive skin by gifting her visible passionate love bite

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

He got back to his normal posture and lifted Geet's face by holding her chin; he started placing small pecks on the border of her upper lip and lower lip

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

As soon as Maan tried to capture her petals within the folds of his love Geet gave him a mischievious smile and without a moment's delay she pushed him playfully and escaped from there

Meri aakhon mein meri saason mein tera chehra'Tera Chehra

There was some oil that was lying on the road Geet accidently placed her foot on it; she was just about to fall when Maan took her in his protective territory by giving her the support of his strong arms

Mere dil ki har ek deewar pe tera Chehra'Tera chehra

This small moment reminded them of their second encounter which had taken place in dark that had ignited the spark between them unknowingly

Tu hi tu hi mera jahan

Oh' they were so comfortable in each other's arms it seemed that this was their paradise

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

Both of them started laughing as they recollected the way they had exploded on each other as soon as the darkness had vanished

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

Maan rubbed his nose with Geet's nose and carefully scooped her in his arms

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

He winked at her and declared that he was indeed the best as Geet was all ready to leave KM but it was just because of Maan's challenge that Geet was forced to wait; if Maan had not stopped her at that time then maybe their story would have ended even before it started

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

Geet hit him playfully on his chest but immediately replaced it with a loving kiss and expressed her happiness to have found the greatest treasure of her life; she kissed him once again and thanked him for giving her the most memorable challenge of her life which had ultimately turned out to be the most beautiful dream that her eyes had seen

Music

Maan placed Geet in the car and started driving; he stops his car at Khurana Constructions

Geet was moving towards the lift when Maan stopped her and immediately scooped her in his arms and started climbing the stairs

With this step of Maan; another memorable incident started beautifying their eyes as they recollected the chair and lift fight which had played the role of a perfect cupid in their love story as it was the first time when Maan had carried Geet in his arms and from that day this tale has been going on and on

Maan took Geet to her cabin and placed her on the chair; he kneeled down and lifted her leg with utmost love and rested it on his shoulder

Geet was just about to say something when Maan silenced her by lifting her chudidaar slightly and by gifting her series of sensous passionate kisses

Geet understood the meaning of his action it seemed he was trying to rectify his mistake which he had committed in the initial stage of their relationship

He had placed the broken stool in Geet's cabin due to which Geet's leg was injured; it was so strange he was the same man who wanted to trouble her and today he could destroy the entire world just to avoid the appearance of a lone tear in his angel's eyes

His hands automatically started lifting her chudidaar more in an upward direction and slowly his caring and loving pecks took the turn of an uncontrollable desire

Geet started shivering as every touch of Maan was taking her into a new world but today she had decided to trouble Maan for sometime; she dipped her head slightly and bit Maan on his ear aggressively

Before Maan could react she started running towards the store room; Maan let out a manly groan and started following her

Tere bina toh haal hai aisa jaise aasman bina chand adhura

As soon as Maan enters the storeroom his caring and loving look got converted into an angry glare; his hand took the form of a fist as he remembered Arjun's evil intensions for his Mayari

Tere bina toh haal hai aisa jaise aasman bina chand adhura

He was actually picturizing the entire incident once again; he would have certainly ended Arjun's chapter there and then if Geet had not stopped him by giving him her swear'

Ruh mein shamil tu ho jaaye hoga bus tab hi saath ye pura

All of a sudden his lips took the shape of a satisfying smile as he relived that moment once again when Geet had addressed him by his first name "Maan" no not only Maan she had called him "her Maan"

Ruh mein shamil tu ho jaaye hoga bus tab hi saath ye pura

His thoughts got interrupted due to the light fluctuations; he noticed that Geet was playing with the switch board and was trying to indicate something through her actions

Tere ishq mein mashoor ho gaye tere bazuyon mein hum choor ho gaye

Maan started giving killer looks to Geet; she realized that she had invited trouble through her actions as a similar incident had taken place in the past wherein Maaneet were trapped in the storeroom and they had shared their first ever intimate yet innocent loving moment

Her legs were not responding as she had already accepted her defeat in front of the heating gaze of Maan

Meri subah mein meri shaamo mein tera chehra' Tera chehra

She didn't even realize that Maan had trapped her successfully and now she was completely on his mercy

Meri dhoop mein meri chau mein tera chehra'Tera chehra

Maan placed one hand of Geet on the switch board and requested her to continue with her game as he allowed her second hand to rest on his shoulder

Tu hi tu hi mera jahan

Geet's chest started moving in a rhythmic pattern as Maan started teasing her senses by cupping her feminine curves and initiating his game

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

Whenever Geet would switch on the lights Maan would lick her tips generously making sure that her rosy buds would be drained completely in his raw passion; as soon as Geet would switch off the lights Maan would mark her softness by sucking her curves aggressively and at the same time he would make sure to bite her nip***s so that every pore of her secret beauty would be satisfied to a full extent

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

Geet dug her nails on his shoulder and increased the pace of switching on and switching off the lights; Maan responded back by increasing the dose of his passion

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

Geet's moans were the proof that Maan's every touch was creating havoc throughout her body

With every passing second Maan's passion went on increasing; Geet screamed his name in pleasure as Maan rotated her nip***s inbetween his teeth

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

Maan kissed her tips and hugged her immediately; they stayed in this position for some time and allowed their heart beats to come back to normal

Music

After living yet another memorable past of their life Maaneet decide to go to the next important place which had played a crucial role in their love story; it was none other than the outhouse

As soon as they reach KM Maaneet decide to enter the outhouse from the backdoor as they didn't want anyone to notice them

While they were entering the outhouse some drops of water started dripping from some of the hanging flower pots as Nakul had introduced some extra amount of water in the plants

These water drops opened the doors of yet another magical moment of Maaneet; yes their first rain dance after which Maan had carried Geet the whole way back to KM in his arms making his feelings evident for his angel indirectly for the first time in front of his family

Geet hid her face in Maan's chest as she recollected that moment oh she was feeling so embarrassed in front of Dadima but Maan was adamant to carry her to her room

Maan kissed her forehead and requested her to entire the outhouse

As soon as they made an entry they remember their stupid fights Geet started laughing wholeheartedly as soon as she remembered hitting Maan with the broom

Maan was lost in her magical laughter; he was in a complete trance

He slowly made way towards Geet and rested his chin on her shoulder; Geet's heart skipped a beat as Maan squeezed her belly by taking it in the protective embrace of his arms

He guided her towards the window without changing their position; yes their story would be incomplete without this window

Apne dil mein jhak ke dekho aayega nazar tumhe pyar humara

This window was the witness of their unsaid emotions as Maaneet learned the art of speaking through their eyes because of this window

Geet recollected how Maan had requested her to wear a saree for their business party and by the end of the party Maan had kissed Geet for the first time on her forehead; oh that first peck from Maan will always be special for her she lowered her gaze as she tried to recollect his first ever touch

Apne dil mein jhak ke dekho aayega nazar tumhe pyar humara

It seemed Maan could read her thoughts without giving any warning Maan started tasting the delicacy of her long and appealing neck with his tongue

Geet automatically moved her neck to one side to give him better access

Aalam na pucho meri tadap ka ek pal na hoga ab tum bin guzara

Maan started decorating her neck with hungry wet smooches; he took the skin of her nape in between his teeth and pulled it aggressively

It was becoming difficult for Geet to suppress her desires she pushed him on the bed and came on top of him

Aalam na pucho meri tadap ka ek pal na hoga ab tum bin guzara

This reminded them of their beautiful moments that they had shared in Amritsar

Geet ripped some of the buttons of Maan's shirt and started showering him with her unconditional love

Tere ishq mein mashoor ho gaye tere bazuyon mein hum choor ho gaye

She started kissing the entire area of his chest which was accessible to her; Maan's fingers gracefully went ahead to lift her kurti from her waist and he started feasting on her beautiful form with the help of his eyes

He was allowing Geet to do whatever she felt like doing infact he loved her bold nature but at the same time his naughty mind had started weaving plans for their SR and his innocent angel was totally unaware of his intentions

As Geet was busy claiming Maan her hand moved in an upward direction and Maan saw the beautiful bracelet that he had gifted Geet; yes the same bracelet which had the word Maayari written on it

Meri bahon mein meri raahon mein tera chehra

Without any moments delay Maan turned Geet with one quick movement; he dipped his head and allowed his teeth to open 2-3 buttons of her kurti

He shifted her bra carefully so that some part of her bulge was visible to him; Geet closed her eyes in anticipation as she knew Maan will once again be successful in drugging her with his love

With the help of his tongue Maan started writing "Maan's Mayari" on the bulge of her curves

Meri aahon mein meri panahon mein tera chehra

Geet clutched the sheet in a tight grip as Maan was taking his own sweet time to complete the word

He completed his task but giving open mouth smooches on her bulge and without any further delay he buttoned her kurti once again

Geet's eyes were still closed as she was sailing in a sea of pleasure Maan placed loving pecks on her beautiful mirrors and requested her to open them

There was a beautiful smile on her face; she followed Maan's instructions and opened her eyes but within a matter of seconds the spark of her eyes got converted into a painful gaze as drops of pearls made way through them in the form of tears

Tu hi tu hi mera jahan

Maan was tensed on seeing pain and fear in his Maayari's eyes; he followed the direction of her eyes and realized that Geet was busy looking at the taaveez that she had gifted Maan

Maan understood her state of mind yes she was recollecting the accident wherein it had seemed that she had almost lost Maan

Maan kissed her tears away and brought her back to reality; she crushed him in her loving embrace and ensured her heart that her Maan was there with her

Without breaking the hug Maan scooped Geet in his arms and took herein front of the mirror

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

He placed her on her feet and kissed the entire length of her maang; Geet's heart started beating vigourously as a thought crossed her mind had Maan noticed her maang during their Amritsar trip? Does he know that they are already married?

Geet was about to voice her thoughts when Maan stopped her by placing his finger on her lips as if telling her I will answer all your questions at the right time just trust me

Geet rested her head on his chest to ensure that she trusted him more than her life

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

They started walking towards the terrace; Maan sits on the swing and placed Geet on his lap

Both of them once again recollected all the memories of their unique love story right from Geet's state of shock wherein both of them had successfully passed a difficult challenge that was put forth by destiny as well as they also recollected the intimate moments which both of them had shared before Maan's trip to Mumbai

All of a sudden Maan remembered one important thing about the Mumbai trip he kissed Geet's hand and requested her to wait for few minutes as he wanted to show her something

Geet gave him the permission and Maan rushed to his room to take out the golden colored Bridal wear that he had purchased for Geet

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

He rushed back to the terrace confidently and gifted the Bridal wear to Geet; she was just about to open the gift when Maan stopped her and requested her to open this inside the room which was linked to the terrace

Geet followed his instructions and went to the room

As soon as Geet departs Maan starts gathering some items in a hurry; he goes to the outhouse and picks up the broom; he removes the letters, the saree that he had gifted to Geet from her room

He removes his taaveez and picks up their joint photo that both of them had placed in each other's room; He also takes a copy of their wedding card; the 10 rings that he had gifted Geet on their engagement as well as a sample of all the unique items with which they had played Holi and with which Maan had completed Geet's Haldi and Mehndi ceremony

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

He arranged all these items on a chair; he encircled the chair by making a diya arrangement around it and started waiting for the arrival of his Maayari

After few minutes Geet stepped out from the room and Maan lost his heart all over again to her

He knew that Geet would look gorgeous in this bridal wear but today he realized that she was not only looking beautiful but she looked divine in this outfit

Maan started moving towards his innocent bride as soon as Maan reduced the distance between them Geet submitted herself in his strong folds as she was feeling too shy to meet his heating gaze

Maan scooped Geet in his arms and started walking towards the area where he had made the arrangements

Geet was surprised to see all the things that were associated with their small and big memory at one place

Maan: Geet ye saari cheeze humari pyar ki dastaan ko bayan karte hai kal humari shadi hai par main chahtha hoon k isse pehle hum agni k saath phere le kyun na hum apne yaado k phere lekar ek duje se ye vaada kare k hum tum milkar apne aanewale zindagi ko apne guzre hue kal se bhi zyada rangeen banaenge [Geet all these things are related to our memories and they narrate the tale of our divine love; tomorrow is our wedding day but before taking the vows of marriage in front of the holy fire I wanted that both of us should take the promise of making our future more memorable than our past by keeping these memories as a witness]

Maan extended his hand

Maan: Maayari kya tum mujhse aaj shadi karogi? [Mayari will u marry me today?]

Geet had tears of happiness in her eyes without uttering anything she placed her hand in his and kissed his palm; this was enough for Maan to understand her answer

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi labz tu hi zubaan

They started taking the pheras and with every phera they once again wrote their existence to each other's names

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam tu rehnumaa

With the completion of the 7 phere Maan placed a necklace on her neck in the form of a mangalsutra'this necklace had the initials MG on it and there was a small sentence written next to it "BONDED FOR AN ETERNITY"

Music

Geet was overwhelmed by Maan's gesture she touched his feet but Maan pulled her back and took her to the swing once again

He placed her on his lap and rested his head on her chest; Geet also submitted herself completely in his arms and both of them slowly drifted off to sleep hoping to see the arrival of the next morning soon which would bring the message of their new life wherein the whole world would address them as "Mr and Mrs. Khurana"

PRECAP: Maaneet become Humsafar in every true sense; Yes it's time for their marriage😃

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PART 99: Page 60


Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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🥳me 1st for the 1st time yepeee , coming to update as always it was superb
Edited by mehak173 - 13 years ago
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ossum dear
superb part
waiting for the there marriage dear
this time give pics dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. hw do think so differently yaar??
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am just speechless
it is just superb


hats ov to u Piya

Ur an Amazing Writer

Love you... :)
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i loved it totally👏👏👏👏
so cute😊

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