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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Bahahaha! I'm getting better and better at this! :P

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Jaado hai nasha hai.. Aur hum iss nashe mein kho gaye!

Meera madam, you had me hyperventilating during that first part. I seem incapable of commenting further on the perfection of that moment and how it was written! :)

And such an intense reaction from Arnav to Khushi's disclosure about Shyam. I could imagine the doors to the poolside rattling. Awww! And Khushi wanting to confirm if her actions were right.

I absobloominutely loved this update! :D

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

solly i'm editing it so late...

it was super awesome... finally they are together i guess... right??

omg...never knew a hug can be defined so beautifully in 2,3 para...

brilliant job girl... loved it...

and yeah atleast in story make arnav take some major steps against shyam...

so that he cant harm two most important person of his life...

i want to read the wrath of THE ASR...

continue soon...

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

well, I'm no less! :P

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Meeraaa! :D This was fantastic!

Everything about this update is awesome.. Right from the flashback, the poem, to the way tey had their first kiss! And the kiss, the kiss, Meera! The kiss, man! Ok, I'll elaborate! :P

The kiss was so beautifully described, so umm.. so beautiful, I can't say anymore! Loved how she was scared about her decision, and those last words were just.. Sigh!

And Jaadu hai Nasha hai.. Spot on! What a song sequence rey.. I could feel tingles when i saw that scene!

Great update Meera! :)

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

The FB..it tuk my breath away..n d rest of d chapter was a haze..so i read it again,widout d FB dis tym..n m really happy wid ur update..its equally breathtaking..d kiss,d hug..d unsaid emotions..
loved d entire scene,as if its unfolding in frnt of me..
loved dat khushi trusted him n told him abt dat creep..n arnav's reaction was intense..cud totally imagine his countenance n actions..
n khushi wanted to cnfirm her actions were right or nt..awww
loved d update!

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Very well written..i am glad that she shared the information with Arnav...at least the trust is getting back between them.

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Sigh...That was perfect...The kiss...the hug...was just wow!...Loved the update...and I love the Diwali sequence ...Thanks for making me relive it again..