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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

The story is complete now! With such a beautiful epilogue..

They lead a perfect fairytale life now after a lot of misshapen in their past!

Beautiful emotions and perfectly said it..!

Thanks for the PM!

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Devilways

@Devilways

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Oh wow... Their life together finally. Great Is a small adjective for this story. Count all the superlatives and added wait for it... Awesome to it. It was brilliant. Sad to see it end.

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Caroline_arhi

@Caroline_arhi

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Amaazing epilogue, thanks for the PM<3

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2future

@2future

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

awesome epilogue full of emotions.

thnx for the PM.

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

Oh Nymphs ..That was beautiful.. no words to describe this...The title is so apt...Finding heaven...😭

ThankS for the pm

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smitha

Edited by smithasrk - 13 years ago

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

Just caught up with the epilogue!!!! Earth shatteringly amazing!!!! Totally overwhelmed!!!!!!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

You poked me! Here's you unres!😡😆

Loved it! It fit so well!

The first part I thought was when Khushi finds out that Arnav is alive, but you introduced a leap and made her pregnant! Awww...😍

I just loved the part where Arnav asks Khushi if it's true without asking! That's love!

I love your take on Arnav because he literally gave up everything, laid down his heart to Khushi without expecting anything in return, but hoping that she, his own diety, will answer his unspoken desires. And answer she did!😍

Arnav and Khushi have finally found their happiness. They live away from their family now? Why? And is Payal okay? I mean, is aakash alive?

Can we another part to clarify this? Maybe? You did poke me u know!😉

Edited by BlueMystique - 13 years ago

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

They have indeed found heaven. An intense and beautiful story. I like how you leave so much to the imagination and yet are able to convey so much emotion in so few words. Thank for the epilogue.