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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: anniemathias

it was awesome but y did not pm me this is not fair u promised me anyways i have send u buddy request accept me and pm me ur nxt update waiting eagerly
kria pov was amazing


Thanx a lot dear...
N m soo sry...
I thought ki sabko mil Gaya so I didn't recheck...
M sry...
N ya I accepted ur request...
Nw pakka wala promise I'll send u d pm...
Pakka...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome one :) :) <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
thanx a lot dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Previous: --Shock 1, PART ONE--

Hey ppl'!!! Ya ya m back'!!!! Bhull toh nai gaye mujhe'??? (hope not) Anyways'. M sorry to say dat none of u got d precap correct'.. n nw no more bak-bak'. Meet u down'

~~Shock 1, Part TWO~~

She broke down again'. But this time it was different. This time there was much more to happen than before.

Suddenly the lights went off. As Kriya was scared of darkness she dropped the frame that she was holding. The frame crashed on d ground n so did kriya. She no more cared about the darkness. Just then she felt as if someone was at her window. By this time she was caressing the photo once again. Suddenly someone called her name. In a jiify she turned back to see who had called her. By this action of hers, she mistakenly left a small bruise on the part of her hand below the palm (hope you got it). She turned around and found no one there. She again broke down thinking that she was all alone again. She was catching a piece of glass in her hand. A faint moonlight was falling in her room. Through that she was seeing the scar she had got on her hand. She was continously staring at it.

Suddenly the lights came back. Rey stepped in from the window. Yes he was there all along. He had heard everything that kriya had said. He was the one who had caled kriya. But what he saw shaked him completely.

Rey: Kriya' kriya' KRIYA'.!!!!

Just then smriti entered.

Smriti: Tum yahan kya kar rahe'

She couldn't speak more. She was dumbstruck. Her daughter, her life, was lying there in Rey's lap. But this wasn't the thing that out had shocked her. From kriya's hand blood was oozing out without a stop. Smriti went on her knees beside kriya and started waking her up continously.

Kriya (very weakly): Rey, aap ho kya?

Rey: Haan kriya mein hi hoon. Bolo.

Kriya: Rey am sorry, ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardena. Mom ne shart rakhi thi ki mujhe aapse aur dance se apne saare rishte todne honge. Isiliye mein aaj aapko ignore kar rahi thi. I am really sorry. Ho sake toh mujhe bhula dena. I am sorry rey. I am'

Kriya never realised that smriti was there all along. Smriti was shocked. She was first thinking that kriya had lied to her yet again but she didn't know that kriya had kept her promise all along. Rey just stared at kriya and then at smriti. He didn't know what to do. Even before smriti knew it, kriya was in rey's arms. He took her out of the house and literally odered smriti to open his car door. He made smriti sit in first, put kriya inside the car in such a way that her head was in smriti's lap. Even before smriti could close the car door, rey had started driving fiercly. Smriti couldn't utter a word. Within no time they reached the hospital. Before smriti could realise this, kriya was again in rey's arm and he was literally running inside. He rushed to the near hospital bed, put kriya there and rushed to find the doctor. After a lot of search he reached a doctor's cabin. He rushed in.

Doctor: What the hell? Cant you knoc' REY'???!!!!

Rey: Uncle aap..??

Dr: Haan mein. Anyways, tum yahan who bhi aisi halat mein? Everything alright?

Rey: Doctor please chaliye mere saath. Its an emergency.

Dr: Ok. Ok. First of all calm down. Stop cryin and take me to d paitent.

Rey: Ok.

Rey was shattered. He couldn't control his tears. He quickly took d dr to kriya. The doctor asked a near by ward boy to shift kriya to a near by room. He asked rey and smriti to wait outside.

Rey then called up swayam.

Rey: Swa' Swayam. Tu kahan hein?

Swayam: Rey sab kuch theek hein na?

Rey: Swa' Swayam, woh kriya'.

Swayam: Rey kya hua kriya ku?

Rey: Swayam ne apna haath kaat liya hein'

Swayam: WHAT???

Rey: Haan swayam. Please abhi isi waqt city hospital aaja.

Swayam: Rey tu dar mat. Hum abhi aate hein.

Rey: Hum?

Swayam: Haan mein aur sharon.

Rey: Ok.

Call ended. Rey was getting impatient now. He was walking to and fro continously. Just then the doctor came out.

Dr: Kya inhone suicide karne ki kosish ki hai?

Rey: Ji nahi uncle.

Dr: Dekho rey, mein tumhe bachpan se jaanta hoon. Mujse mat chipao. I promise mein tuhare dad ko kuch bhi nai bolunga.

Rey: Pakka?

Dr: Haan pakka.

Rey: Ok.

(Then rey nrrates d whole incident to the doctor)

Dr: Ok.

Till then swaron reach the hospital. They hear every thing that rey has told the doctor.

Swayam: Rey darr mat. Kriya ko kuch nai hoga.

Sharon: Rey?

Rey: Sharon am very sorry. Mein jaanta hoon ki maine tumse yeh sab chupa ya hein. Am really sorry. Swayam??

Swayam: Sharon listen. Abhi nai. Tum usse baad mein baat kar lena. Please understand.

Sharon (after a long pause): Ok.

Rey: Thanx a lot sharon.

Just then d doctor comes again.

Dr: Guys. Umm'

Rey: What is it uncle'???

Dr: Rey dekho please react mat karna.

Rey (losing his paitence now): Uncle what is it???

Swayam: Rey calm down.

Dr: Woh actually kriya''.

Ohk guys'.. m really tired now'. Please leave ur precious comments'.

PM's later guys...

Next: --No love without pain--

Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
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unres
finally u updated mish
awesum update👏
luvd it to the core
cliffhanger par update chodd diyaa nt fair😔
ahhh kriya's hurt her hand😭
kriya ko hua kya ?????
itna suspense hai yaar
update da nxt part fast



Edited by luvcookie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Its freakin awesome dear...
Plz do pm me wenevr u update...wud luv 2 read it. ..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
nycc but wnder wat happnd 2 kriya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
read tday...

loving it...

par itne gande point pe end kyun kiya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
hey dat was a gud update ..
lovd it..
gud job..
thanx 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm... intrsting... update...lykd it lot

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