SwaRon FF: Infinite Hatred DISCONTINUED Note Pg25! - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: swaron502


kuch bhi ho jaye...chaahe dukh ki baat kyu na ho...par ash ko rply krte waqt ROFL expression nhi dala toh cmen ki shaan kahrab ho jayegi...hena? 😆

behen tuje pasand aya toh mera dil khush ho gya...thnxx a lot meri Black Dog...aur jo bhi Kriti ne tera naya naam rkha he vo firse bata de...i dun remember it 😆

i knw mujhelaag rofl nahi hua toh comment ka kya fayda🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 lol tera dil kshuh hua????😲🤣🤣 kriti ne😕😕bhool gayi sumthing lemon...age ka nah paat🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
u cn rite slowly akshi..bt pls dnt mistype to dis extent :P 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
ash its my style no 3🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
tu na 1000000000000000 styles bna le me toh khti hun 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

btw ...read d cment i rote on ur latest updt of fir mohabbat...:@
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
hola guyzzz...k so i gt a gud response...😃
bt ok..i was expecting more
my otha ffs especially D3-A Haunted Love Story nd Adla Badli (AT ff..nt written by nt nly me) r much more famous...so i ws expecting equal response for dis too bt its k...even dis 2 is loadzz for me...thnxx for appreciating my wrk guyzzz 🤗

so here i go wit d update 😉

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CHAPTER -1

Boy1: Check out the time dude! Its already 7 !!!! Wake up and get ready ! warm ups bh krne hote hain Dance se phle !!!!!

Boy 2: ya ya i know...dudeleme sleep for 5 mins more plz!

Boy1: i said na...NOOO !!!!! Tu khud toh dubega aur sath me mujhe bhi dubayega!

Boy 2: Esa kr..Tu mujhe chod aur akele hi show krle..mujhe SONAAA he !!

Boy 1: Dekh Swayam ab bhot ho gaya !!!! tu uth raha he ki meDad ko bulau??!!

Swayam: Dad ko kyu?? Mo ko bula na plz!

Boy1: haan haan...kyu nhi !!! taaki vo teri neend ko au gehra krde...hena?? BABY...HW RU...U WANNA SLEEP...SOJA BETA...REY WAIT KR LEGA...SHOW KO LATE KARA DENGE..APA KO ME MANA LUNGI...TU SOJA BETA !!! ye kahengi voh !!!!

*Swayam doesnt answer him*

Rey: SWAYAMM !!!!! abhi uth vrna me Dad ko bula rha hu !!!!

*Swayam still doesnt ans him*

Rey: DAD !!!!!!!

Sw: aaarrggghhh...wait wait..dun col dad...uth raha hun me !! BLAKMAILER he tu !!!
Kbhi ni sudhrega...huh

Rey: Don't u think ye baat muje tujhe kehni chahie?? 😕

Sw: haan haan !!! ek hi baat he !!! 😆

Rey: Ye le kapde !!! jaake pehenle !!!! *he throws the dress towards Swayam n it landed on Swayam's face*

Sw: *getting the dress off his face* Vese its just 7 Rey !!!Abhi 2 ghante hain show ko !!! Itna jaldi kyu tayyar krwa rha he??!!! KIIYUUU???!!!! *baby face*

Rey: Stop making that face !!! Me islie jaldi tayyar krwa raha hun kyunki abhi tayyar honeke baad tu apne baal bhi toh sawaarega 😆..Usmein AADHA GHANTA lag jaega...fir location pe pohonchne me bhi aadha ghanta lag jayega !!!! Aur uske baad aadha ghanta warmups 😉

Sw: ITNA BHAARI SCHEDULE !!!! 😲

Rey: Teri baalon ke vajah se tuje bhaari lag rha he 🤣

Sw: Hasna band kr !!! Bol toh ese rha he as if tu toh apne baal 2 second me bana leta he !!! Dude tujhe bhi adha ghante lagta he apne sunhere spikes banane me 🤣

Rey: ya ya 😆

Sw: Apne baalon pe baat ayi toh ya ya !! vaah vaah vaah vaah !!!! 😆..see my rhymes are AWESOME 😳

Rey: Arreee !!!!

Mr.Shekhawat enters !!!

Mr.S: ye kya !!!! tum logon ne abhi tak tayyar hona bhi shuru nhi kia??!!! 😲

Rey: Dad bas shuru kr rhe the...

MR.S: muje aadhe ghante me tum dono neche chahiye ho !!!

Sw & Rey: Yes Da *guiltily*

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Hmmm...I looked perfectoo !!!! The mascara highlighted my greenish brown eyes beautifully !! A bit of rouge on both cheeks..Pink gloss to give a light look...A hot and sexy top along with Denim Shorts...hmm...my middriff was visible !!! Just to add to the sexy look were my White sport shoes !!! The look suited me perfectly well and the whole wear was also really comfortable so i dint have any problem dancing !! I was lookin simple Yet HAWWWT ...Only 1 disadvantage ! A whole lot of boys would be droling over me tonight !!! Gosh !! i'll need a tight security for sure !!!!

Servant: The car is ready Ma'am !!!

ME: ya m coming !!!

I went downstairs nd saw Daddy waiting for me dere...

He looked towards me and a broad smile spread across his face

G: Someone's lookin Sexxy !!!! 😉

Me: uggh !!! Cmon Dad 😆 * i went and hugged him*

G: So baby ready to go??

Me: yopsie Daddy !!! 😊

We were goin when suddenly i heard a voice from behind me...

Person: Sharon Dii !!!! AAj me apko chodunga 😉

Me: Awww Siddie...Its simply K !!!! I ll manage bro 😉

Sid: No Dii !!! Ye show bhot important he apke lie !!! toh show kwe waqt apke sath IMPORTANT banda bhi hona chahie na sathe me 😎

ME: Ahaan ?!!! Whom are u talkin about? * I said teasingly*

Sid: As If u don't know 😲

ME: Certainly not u Siddie Viddie 😆

Sid: Oh yes ME 😎

Me: HAHA..geme a break !!! *I started laughung*

Sid: PJ !!!!

Me: AAh..wateva !!!! 😆 But really Siddie i ll manage 😃 Tum ghar bitho aue Khao peeyo aur Ash maaro 😛

Sid: Arrreee !!! Kha peeke thak gaya hu me 😆..3 din se Paris me hu lekin bahar nhi nikla !!! AAj nikalna chahta hun toh aap rok rhi ho...i need some fresh air na 😆

Me: Toh itne dino se kyu nhi nikle??? 😲

Sid: Tanning se darr rha tha u see 🤣

Me: Psycho !!! ok f9 aa skte ho sath me !!!

Sid: Yaayyy !!! Thnx Di !!!! *he ran toward me and gave me a tight hug..arghh...i needed some oxygen 😛*

Sid: BTW Dad..driver ko bhagao..Aaj me gaadi chalaunga

Siddie Viddie was my 17 yr old younger brother !!! Every brother hates t be YOUNGER but he was different...liked to be younger...Always said that having a sis like me , any1 would love to be younger !!! WIERD explanation !!! his buttering had lots of fat for sure 😛...The most unexpected thing about us that any1 wud b shocked to hear about is that we NEVER had a serious fight !!! wierd isn't it??!!! 😆...Sick bro i tell u...He loved me very much actually...and of course i loved returning love from my side too...😉...bt have to say...my love for him would never ever be qualt to his love toeards me...

And and and not to forget that he was the reason i was ALIVE here todayy !!! Hmmfff...Because of some no one known as Swayam Shekhawat i wanted to commit a suicide !!! A suicide for whom?? a BLOODY NOBODY !!!! But what could I do??? He had trapped me in his love soo well that I couldnt imagine life without him now !!

MOM...as usual in hanging out...This time she had gone to Shimla to enjoyy the weather there along with her friends !!!

DAD !!! indulged in some show again...not that i expected anything !!! 🤢

But HE...He was the one who saved me...Who made me realise that life was possible without him too..there were people more important than him in my life !!! My living was worth and i had a reason to live !!!
I had HIM...and not to forget DANCE...He made me realise how precious I was !!!

Not dat I hadnt done anything anything for him !!! In sich an atmosphere he wasnt a Rich Spoiledd kidd !!!!! because of whom?? ME 😎 hahaha...i love to take credit for this 😆...But ya his contribution towards me that day has no competition 😊..That day my love for him doubled to 100% to infinity !!!!

I love Sid very much..very very much !!!!

but my hate towards Swayam is more !!!!

If i love Sid to infinity then my hate towardsSwayam is even more than infinity !!!!!!!

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k so m done wit the updt !!! biggest updt i ever rote 😛
plz like nd comment if u liked it...😳
it matters a lot !!! cments nd liked encourage me to rite more nd dat too more effectively !!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
luv it luv it just luved it... luved reyam part and also sharon one..<3 dis part was awesum..<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Res
*unres*
Second To Comment 😆
Daboo it Ws Amazing I Love Every Part :P
Thanks For Pm 😳
Edited by NikiBh8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Res

unres awesome update ash.
Thanks for pm.
Very cute one.

thanks for pm.
The bond btwn Sharon and her bro was cute.Swayam se itna hate kyu.

Update soon.


Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

luv it luv it just luved it... luved reyam part and also sharon one..<3 dis part was awesum..<3


ayyyiooo...thnxx abshi shabshuuu 😆
thnkuuu 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc one lykd it ... reym scene was really... gud... nd siddie vidde new char hmm... intrsting...

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