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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
woww awsomee yaaar the note sender prob kriya or sum1 umm dnt knw yaar short uodate and we spaamed for u 2 kya yaar oh welll lets see
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
wooow in one day 2 awesome update👏 and on the top of that new thread congo "a big hug" thanx for d pm again😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Hey very congratz on ur 2nd thread...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the second thread
i really liked the update and thanks for the pm
i hope i get to read another update of this ff before i go india tomorrow

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulaions for d 2nd thread..
n amazing update..loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 22:

Recap: Rey thinking about the note sender.

The next day was Friday. But as usual, no one was aware of that. Rey and Swayam were playing Pen Fight sitting in Home Room. (The guys in my class play it so remembered.) "Dude, Sway! I'm receiving the notes again Man! I am going crazy finding out who the sender is?" Rey said to Swayam. "Oh I see. I really have no idea what to do." Swayam said, not looking at Rey and aiming at hitting Rey's pen. Then the bell rang and they had to go for their next class. (Bell is my most fav thing in the FF )


Next they had English, and they sat in their usual places. The teacher had gone to the principal's office for a minute so the class was noisy . "REY!!" Sharon shouted, so that Rey could head. Rey turned towards her. "Hey! Tell me!" Rey said, smiling at her. "Rey, could you please pass this notebook?" Sharon asked, handing Rey a notebook. "To who?" Rey asked, but she had already turned to Swayam and had started talking to him. Now she would keep talking till the teacher returned. He opened the notebook to see who's notebook it was. He accidently opened the middle page instead of the first page in order to see the name. And when he looked to see, his eyes were glued to the page. It was the same handwriting. His note-sender's handwriting. He turned to the first page to see the name and man, was he shocked. Totally!!! It was her. He looked at her, talking playfully with their classmate, Serah. She was smiling, that beautiful smile of hers. He kept looking at her dreamily till the teacher returned and asked for attention.


The next two periods, he didn't have time in between to read the letter because he had to go two blocks from his locker. After lunch, he had free period so he rushed to the locker, pulled out the note and went to the library. Only 2 people were there. Others were in the gym, or the lawn or wherever.


"I've finally found my secret admirer! Why didn't she tell me?" Rey thought, his smile growing wider by the second. He opened the note (letter) excitedly. He couldn't wait to read what was written in it. How could he not have guessed? He hit his head, for not guessing. Then he started reading it. It said:


Dear Rey,

You would have figured out who I am by now. Read this letter only if you have. Please respect my feelings and don't read it unless you know who I am.

In my fairytale world, you were the one who always came to me. But now I think I'll have to make the first move. Remember when our fight started. I yelled that I don't like you anymore and you said you hated me. Well, It was hard to believe because I could see in you're eyes that you were lying. But for a moment, I thought that you really meant what you said. From that day, I tried to avoid you as much as I can. But I couldn't because you were my dance partner and I could never take my eyes off you. I tried hard to stay away from you but somehow or the other we kept bumping into each other. And then when we got locked up in the hotel room, my heart was racing so much that I had to start arguing with you. But the argument ended with us laughing. That night was a night to remember.

I tried hard to hate you, but I really really hate the way I can Never ever hate you. I dream about you all the time and I keep regretting what I did. When I'm not doing anything or even when I'm busy, I think of you. Every single thing I do reminds me of you and I can't stop the tears.

I still remember the first dance we had alone, on my birthday. We were dancing and then suddenly you kissed me. That was my first kiss. I haven't gone on dates and all, so that night was really special to me. You were special to me. You still are. And you will always be.

Before I met you, I was okay but after I met you, I started loving life. You made me feel like a princess. I will never regret meeting you. And that's why I stormed out from SSC when I saw you and Aashi kiss. I had heard your conversation once that you'd never kissed her and she was mad at you. I felt really special then and I wished I'd be the only one you kiss,

You didn't come to meet me at the hospital, but somehow I feel that you were there with me that night. Holding my hand. Telling me to wake up. I could feel you. But you kept denying it, But I still don't believe that you weren't there.

From when I was young, Love was all I wanted. When I was 6, my parents abandoned me because they didn't want a second girl. I was not very upset then because they told me that they were going for a meeting and they would be back soon. But they never came back. I kept waiting for them but they didn't want to come back to their daughter. I was too young to understand it then. I thought they were still on a holiday or something. But as I grew older and I knew the truth when I was 8, I was shattered. I had many sleepless nights, thought of killing myself. But I figured that killing myself wasn't the solution. From then I learnt not to trust anyone. I kept myself busy going here and there. But the potion that recovered me was Dance. Dance is the only reason I'm a little better now but I can never forget what my parents did to me. I still cry even though I don't tell anyone. Aashi's family treat me like I'm their own daughter but somehow I feel lost, and lonely and upset. I thought Aashi was my best friend till I met Sharon at SVH. Now, she is such a sweetheart. I can tell anything and everything to her. Also to Swayam.

You want to know the real reason why I fought with you? Here's the reason: Aashi had found out about the surprise birthday party you had kept for me I don't know how and she made me promise that I'll never talk to you. She also told me that I was not her real sister. I cried for days after I made the promise. I still do. I think of all the fun times we had together, the carefree times. And I want to go back to being how we were. Best friends? No. This time, I want us to be so much more than that.

I really want things to be alright between us.

So I wish to meet you near the Lake at 7 in the night on Friday. Till then don't come talk to me because we can speak our heart out on Friday. I'll be waiting. Hope you come.

Love,

Kria.


Rey had tears in his eyes reading about Kria's parents leaving her. How could they do that to her?


But reading about not wanting to be bestfriends, but something more, he grinned. She loved him. YESS!! Finally. But she hadn't said those three magical words in the letter. "Can't wait for Friday." He said to himself. But then he looked at his mobile. "OHH! Today is Friday!!! I'm meeting her today. I'm meeting her today!!!!!" Rey screamed, jumping up and down like a kid. He was beyond happy. He was ecstatic. He was smiling so wide the whole day.


Kria saw him taking out the letter and run towards the library. She was smiling too because Rey had found out that she was the one who was sending notes. Now she couldn't wait to go to the lake.


Rey was looking at her the whole day, and Sharon and Swayam had no idea why. Kria pretended not to look at him, but she did glance his way inbetween. But like Kria had written in the letter, he didn't talk to her and neither did she talk to him.


After school, they had dance class but Kria was not allowed to dance till the month ended because of her leg. She could walk, run etc. But her doctor had adviced her not to dance till the end of the month. Inbetween practice, Rey used to steal glances at Kria and he smiled. "Something's going on between them." Sharon said. Swayam nodded. They had to find out.


After practice, Swayam and Sharon confronted Rey. He told them that the note sender was Kria. "What note-sender?" Sharon asked. "Shar! I forgot to show it to you. If I had shown it you before, you would have recognized the handwriting in a minute. Remember the anonymous notes I was getting?" Rey asked, his smile never fading. Sharon re-thought for a second. "OHH!!! Yes! I remember now! You should've showed me!!" Sharon said. Swayam gave him a thumbs-up sign. "Hope to see you both holding hands and coming to first period English class on Monday." Swayam said, patting Rey's back. Sharon smiled at Rey and Swayam and then Swaron left, leaving Rey behind.


After school, he had to go to work. He couldn't stay at home bunking work because he had already took so many days off. So he had no choice but to go. He had the early evening shift so he could leave at 6:30. Kria hadn't gone to work, for the past two months, because of the fractures.


After work, Rey went home as soon as possible,changed into some good casuals. Then he looked at the time, it was 6:50. He started his car and drove. He took his car because the Lake was kinda far from where they lived. His heart was racing like crazy.


Precap: Kria looked at the time."He's not gonna come! What did you think, kria?" Kria thought to herself, as she got up to leave.


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So did you like the chapter? I know the letter was not very soulful and all.. but i tried my best. And for this i need loong comments okay! You can bash me, do whatever you want, but please just comment! And those who guessed the secret admirer, 👍🏼. This chapter was for all of you. 😃


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Edited by damonelena - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
pehle toh double yippee...

pehla yippee... finally u r coming to my fav. part...

and second yippe as i commented first...


so finally the letter.. i predicted exactly na... fir bhi tu mujhe torture maar rhi thi...

gandi bacchi...

chalo bhut huya coming to the update.. so finally rey knows who she is...

very well done... so kria has to take the first place.. glad she did... varna toh kahani aage hi nhi badhti😆
yep she said no in last update boz she wanna be more than best friends.. she want a __________

well kal ke update ke baad u'll fill the gap...

letter not the soulful letter but very-2 apt for the sitution boz this time it wasn't abt feelings... it was abt the reality being shown and faced... the truth gettin out.. it wasn't abt heart to heart talk boz uske liye toh already planned place hai but it was abt the truth getting out.. the reason of the actions and not the feelings behind it boz they were always the same...

lake a beautiful place to make the confession...

just hoping ki everything falls in place u knot the way it is supposed to be.. well it has to... varna tu mere haathon nhi bachegi.. hi ha ha ha ha *evil laugh*

u update tomorrow fir main ant-shant se uthungi...😉


Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
great update
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
first of all congrats on ur new thread
n i just read ur last 3 chapters...
it was awesome
loved it
i thought it was aashi behind kria's accident...
but i was wrong...
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
woww no words dear



muje samaj nahi a rha

i love this


megical

kya baat kya baat kya baat


update soon please can't wait

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