CHECKMATE Manveer SS special update pg 80 12/10/19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Res! Res! Res! But I'll tell you this, I LOVED IT! 😃

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I love it sooo much! I read it all in one go! Please PM whenever you update and update soon! I know you did today, but I just can't wait till the next part! Super excited, love these characters you added and how the plot and story line is different and interesting.

Update soon,

Kajol :)

Edited by Kajol17 - 13 years ago

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Woww!! Loved the update!! Continue soon:)

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Anny

@SyedAinah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Superb ,i don't hav words to praise cuz dey seem less in front of u and thanx for d pm

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teju

@tejuangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

another suspense why akash came with his parents😕

that place sounds so beautiful hope she trusts him and says yes this time

thanks 4r PM🤗

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

I just have one word to describe ths update BEAUTIFUL! Update s0on n plx try to finish aditya n manyatas past life track ASAP! N gve us manveerlicious updatex:)

Edited by MsLuscious - 13 years ago

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

👏👏thanks...brilliant.awesome...amazing...👏👏

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Great update loved it to d core...& ahh u stopped it @ d main point:( :( continue soon 😛

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Simran234

@Simran234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

I swear that whenever I see a PM from you, my heart just skips a beat! I am not even joking, it really does! Your story is so darn good, I love it! I hate and love you for you cliffhangers cause I like that they are suspenseful but I hate it that I have to wait a whole day to uncover the suspense! Please continue cause I really wanna know what Uday's truth is!!! I love this story! MORE! I can't believe he proposed!!

Simran :D...

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akshi_t

@akshi_t

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

OMG...i am dead 🤢...and reached manveer heaven 😆...this was sooo sooo sooo romantic yrr 😳...and the place he took her sounds sooo beautiful...😍...and oh my my he proposed her...though they are already married but it was still oh so awww...😳...now coming to akash ji...wht the hell is he doing at M's house??...wht adi and j have planned?? 😲...so except this part the whole update was utterly super duper romantic..and maveerlicious 😛...and i loved it to the core...and then there's the cliffhanger agn 😆...can't wait fr the next prt...update soon dear!!! 😊