ShivAn FF UPDATED Prt 3B-Pg.8 SORRY NO PM :( - Page 5

Originally posted by: monamie111

Ayushi...lovely update👏...do continue soon😳

can u pls update the title of this post?..like..at the end can u pls append this : update @page <page number>...this will be easier for the reader to find out at which page u posted the update😊

Originally posted by: sen_madhuban

hey nice one..😊...& really good one if dis is ur first attempt..👏...

loved both parts...😃...& thankfully no dramatic filmy scenes...😉..dupatta flying/heroine tripping...😆...

by d way my fav lines:

"Maa mene unhe Thank you keh toh diya tha naa or aate waqt dobara keh diya kaafi h naa or fir ab woh yahin rahenge har waqt uinhe shukriya hi thodi kehte rahenge?" SHe defended herself 😛

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Part 3-A

A new Day began. Shiv's first morning in Jaitsar. Shiv got up and looked at the sun which was still rising, the red morning sky was as clear and refreshing as he expected the day to be!

He put on his sports shoes and went out for a jog in loose pajamas and a grey T-shirt tight enough to reflect his perfectly build body. 😍

He jogged in the village as he saw a girl in simple salwar kameez with a bag on one of her shoulders entering a small room in the middle of the ground. When he tried to look in the room it had a blackboard and a table there' He went closer to that small hut with a cemented roof.

He saw the girl arranging some papers on the desk and went closer to the door. She noticed him, she looked at him, miled and said, Aap? Aap toh naye Collector hain naa?"

HE smiled on the new name given to him and sweetly replied, "Ji haan main NAYA COLLECTOR HUN!"

"Ghandi ghambha, main Gulli. Anandi didi k sath yahaan bacchiyon ko padhati hun."

"Anandi did? Er'"

"Hamari sarpanch" she cut in.

"oh! Toh apki anandi didi baccho ko padhati bhi hain??" he was shocked and impressed

"haan! Didi ko padhe or padhane ka bohaut shauk hai!"

"gaanv ki saari lugaiyo ko padhaya h unhone ki kum se kum wo padhna or likhna sikh jaayein"

"Impressive!" he smiled.

She just kept on telling him about her high scores and meanwhile she by mistake mentioned "jiju sa"

"Jiju sa?" 😕 he asked curiosly he somewhere expected her to be married since BAL VIVAH was so common here but he never saw her husband not even on the day of Chief minister's arrival and mela so he thought he must be unmarried.

"er.. wo " she realized he said it wrong although there was no problem in telling him that she was a victim of baal vivah too but whatever happened with her was not to be gossiped about so she just decided to tell it in a brief.

"Anandi ji ke pati?" he asked. 😕

"nahi ab nahi wo unki bhi shaadi 'er.. bachpan mein hui thi par, ab wo dono saath nahi hain. Mera matlab unka talaq (divorce) ho gaya hai." She looked down.

He was shocked to know that! 😲 Not that overreacting types but he was quite disturbed as he saw everyone liked her so much but'

"Mujhe chalna chahiye!" he said awkwardly he din't knew why it was affecting him but the time din't allow him to think about that he had to rush home and then office.

This is just a short one guys so i decided to make it a sub- part.

Hope you like it... 😳

Do comment...

Criticisms and suggesions are always welcome here...

Originally posted by: ayushi.luvsid

Thanks and sorry for making it this much short and Boring 😔