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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
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Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Wah re ! Long and nice update ! thanx yara,tum log long comment kar do to long chappi type karne ki mehnat wasool Loved it ❤️ thanx yar🤗Aur vaise main harshu ki hi baat kar ri thi 😳 Prince with a heart of gold 😍 Cutiee ☺️ nd HOTTIEE bhi😉 Kya yaar, yaha to main ye bhi nai keh sakti ke update soon oh oho ab to kehna parega monu,mere college assignments😭- itne reg upddates jo milte hain 😃 yar to type is not a big deal bt to think all the day nd then potrayet it in scene is lil difficult task in these HORROR ASSIGNMENTS😭 Love you 🤗LOVE U TOO 🤗Tu ek hi hai jo hum jaise bichaare readers ko achhi si pyaari si fab si REGULAR 😲 ahem ahem sab theek hai bas regular hatta de🤣updates deti hai 😆 I'LL PAKKA UPDATE IN couple of days,plz keep reading😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Minza-

Minza🤗very well written ayushi...👏 thanx honey

i'm not a big fan of reading but u're portrayal of characters n the story...just awesome👍🏼 realyy??ye le jhappi🤗thanx dear
fan bana diya yaar.ab embarras mat kar,me blushing😳😆..havent read the whole of it but jahan tak parha hai, awesome!!! thanx yara,chal jaldi jaldi finish reading,thn inform me,so i'll update😊
will keep reading for sure n u keep updating regularly huh?😊 ahem ahemyar atleast 2,3 din ka time to do😭 will pakka update in couple of days😃love u🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: komal jagdesh

awesome...😊

v well written
keep it up👍🏼Thanx yara🤗
thnx for pm🤗 my pleasure dear,keep reading😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

Now that's what we call dil vs dimag ka perfect example.. 🤓
Now I'm sure even if raghav has done something very wrong in the past there must be a reason. 🤔 Cant say any thing right now...
And jhanvi, please grow up. Seducing does take lots of effort. Just by asking help to change dress won't help. nice suggtion for jhanvi,bt ermm i think that she wanna do confirm,weither raghav is devil or not???
About viraj, well no comments. Jerk will always remain a jerk.😕 hmm how u be so sure yar..itna achha to hai,apni to be wifey ko apne jaisa banana chahta hai😉,ek dum punctual😆 thats not fair,viraj ko kuch na kaho abhi,nd agey agey dekho hota hai kya??😉
Great part on the whole dear. thanx dear ur precious comments r realy mean to me🤗thanx dear..plz keep reading😃

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Tich.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maria.Creationz

I LOVE IT 😳 thanx maria😃

so beautifully written👏 thanx alot,plz keep reading🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: darksydeangel

wow nice update :) thanx yara,u came so late..i thought u forgot😛

u write lots of nice stories :) 😕thanx ..plz keep reading😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx dear,plz keep reading😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1

awsome part loved it 😊


Thanx sonom,plz keep reading😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx 4ur beautiful coments🤗.Plz ignore my mistakes,as m not a professional writer😉,keep reading😛.


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Jhanvi again dialed his numbr in depression,with in a single bell,Viraj received the call,
V:hello! Whose there? He asked in very tiresome tone.
J:hello,she was breathing so fast in happines,its me Jhanvi,
V:jhanvi,jhanvi meri jan,tum theek ho na.Bt tumne call kiun kia?Meine mana kia tha na?
J:han bt viraj,i was misng u badly,isile..
V:miss to mein bhi tumhein bohat kar raha hun,do u hv any idea,mein kitna tense tha,2din hogaye mujhe tumhe dekhe hue,tmhari awaz sune hue,tumhara cell b off hai,tum kahan ho tum theek to ho na? meri zindagi...
J:han viraj mein bilkul theek hun,plz tum pareshan mat ho,wo accident mein mera cell kho gaya hai.
V:oh thank God tum thk ho,mein sach mein boht dar gaya tha,bt tm ab kahan se call kr rhe ho?
J:wo Raghav k ghar ke phone se,
V:watt?He asked in anger.Agar usey kuch pta...
She interupted,
J:kya kru Viraj mujh se raha he nahe gaya,nd u dnt wory,kuch pta nae chale ga usey,tum fikar mt kro i'll handle.
V:janu i m also msng u,lekin ab hum itna agey aa chuke hain ke peechay murne ka koi rasta nahe hai.
J:bt Viraj,mujhe nahe lagta,i mean mein ne bohat koshish ki bt mujhe to kuch pta nahe chala,or wo to bht acha hai bht sweet hai,or ab mujhe lgta hai ke hum sirf time waste kr rhey hain,
he raised his eye brow
V:matlab tum bhi uski baton mein agae?
J:kya matlb?
V:mm,he rest hz back on his ofice chair nd said "Jhanvi tum smajhne ki koshish kro wo bohat he chalak aadmi hai,wo hr kisi par jaise jaadu kr deta hai,or ab tum bhi,oh janu,tumne khud he zid ki the,meine to tmhe pehle hi kaha tha its not so easy,mt bhulo Jhanvi tumne uski taraf attract nahe hona,usey apni taraf atract krna hai,wo isi tarha hr larki par apna impresion jamata hai or phr apni oqat dikha deta hai,wo aisey majboor kr deta hai hr larki ko k wo phir khud apne apko apni marzi se uske handover kr deti hai,tumhei har pal alert rehna parey ga,khatey peetay,sote jagte,uthte bethte,..,or tm abhi se haar man rhe ho,tumhein sirf show krna hai that ur in love wd him,u can do anythng 4 him,only then u can trap him tum samajh rhi hona Jhanvi?
Jhanvi who was listening him quitely with full concentrate,thought something then replied.
J:Han Viraj,tum theek keh rahe ho,mujhe abi bohat alert rehna hoga,i should not beleive him,realy mein uski baton mein kaise agae?,
v:Jhanvi?
J:hmm,in hr thoughts.
V:tum..?Usne...Usne Tumhein chhua to nahe na?She remind all the incidents, on bed,on dining table,in ice cream parlour,the touchng sensation filled her with cold,she little shivered wd this different type of cold,nd remain silent.
v:hello,
J:han...Nahe nahe Viraj,aisi koi baat nahe hai,ye Jhanvi to sirf tumhari hai,kisi ki majaal nahe mere kareeb bhi aney ki,u dnt wory abt me.
V:bt m realy tense for u,plz apna khayal rkhna,nd mujhe cal krti rehna,
J:ok,u also take care of ur self,bye
V:suno,
J,han bolo,
V:i love u... Plz tk care
J(shyly):love u too,bye
V:bye
she ended the call,
She went to hr room with support of crutch,lieyd down on the bed nd thought,realy ek pal ke lie mujhe kya hogaya tha,mein to jaise apni sari dunya he bhul gae,or sirf wo hi yad raha,pr ab mei smajh gae hun wo mujhe itna atract q kr rha hai,qk pehle wo mujhe yaqeen dilana chahta hai k us se acha insaan is dunya mei nahe ho skta,nd whn i'll surrender,phr wo kuch bhi krey,meri baat ka to koi yakeen bhi nahe krey ga,ke Raghav MALHOTRA,a celebrity" kisi ke sath aisa bhi kr skta hai.Bt ab nahe,mein sach mei bhul gae thi ke tum ek monster ho sirf or sirf monster,ek 'beast' jise sirf 'beauty' control kr skti hai,nd no doubt tht m the beauty,"beauty wd brain"she then thought somethng nd went to hz room wd the support of hr crutch,nd started search somethng,she searchd for half an hour,bt found nothng,shitt,wht the hell,she looked at the time,it was 3.30,wo aaj waise bhi jaldi ayega,yahan to kuch b nahe hai,she opend his almirah,hz things were kept very neatly,liked no one hv touched it ever,she amused to saw this,kitne maintance say rkhi hain apni cheezain...She said,then she found a drawer in hz closet,bt it was locked,she tried hard to open it bt was so dissapointed,she heard the noise tht some one is coming,she closed the almirah,nd hurriedly came out of the room.A servant was passing by he saw hr nd askd mem aap yahan?Han wo...Wo mujhe bhook lag rahe hai,mein dekhne aae thi shayad koi Raghav ji ke room mein cleaning kr rha ho, kahan hain sb koi nazar he nahe aa rha,mem bs aaj mei he aya hun,nd Raghav baba ne to mujhe b aaj 5baje tak wapis jane ke lie kaha hai,acha aap bethie mein abi apko serve krta hun,nd he left to kitchen .Jhanvi got tensed to hear this,aaj sb ki holiday nd ise bhi jane ke lie keh dia,irada kia hai uska,khair abhi to bht time hai uske aney mei,lets see.She thought.
She sat on the dining chair,took out her favrt weapon,from the fruit basket.. "knife"nd tried to assure hrself,she mumerd lookng at knife "mein darti nahe hun us sey," After having the lunch she took her medicine went to her room nd was watching tv,she spent hr day doing wait for him.Its 6.Pm,servants hv left,she was all alone at home,she went to sleep,while watching tv.Her eyes opend it was 7.05 now,she hurriedly woke up,she looked at the tv,it was off,it means he have come she thought,she freshn up,make up hr self,nd went out of the room,bt no one was there,she then went to hz room bt found nthng,she heard a noise,it was coming from the kitchen,she went there,a modren kitchen wd all the facilities,nd the most important, all the things were kept there with great maintance,hr mouth opened wide,when her glance fell on Raghav,ya "Raghav Malhotra" a celebrity,a rock star,he was humming and cooking in his own thoughts,first 2 buttons of his shirt was opened exposing his broad chest,nd his hair was kissing his forehead ,she came inside,nd rest his left shoulder with the wall nd continuesly staring at him,when he noticed Jhanvi,wd a wild smile he welcomed hr in kitchen,
R:Good evening princess,hogae neend puri?
J:in embarasing tone,wo medicine ki wje se aankh lag gae the,
R:oh ths gud,it means medicine is working,no wories,vry soon u'll be perfect.
J:hmm,she noded,nd was looking him still in confusion,
R:kya dekh rahi ho aise?
J:dekh rhi hun,ek celebrity Mr.Raghav Malhotra,lakhon dilo ki dhadkan,sare servants ki chuti kar ke,khud kitchen mein cooking kr rha hai,its amaizing,i mean,aap kitne alag hein sabse,Raghav aap jaise bahar se dikhte hain andar se to vaise bilkul nahe hain.
R:he smiled on hr coment,nd said mujhe acha lagta hai,apna kam khud krne mei ek alag he khushi milti hai,akele reh kar apko khud apne aapse milne ka mauka milta hai,khud ko janne ka,apni feelings ko smajhne ka chance milta hai.Phir apko kisi dusre ki zrurat nahe rehti,aapse ziada aap ko agar koi janta bhi hai to wo sirf aap khud hain,she lost in his deep views,hr heart was saying tht his voice is coming directly from his heart,bt her mind was sying,its hz plan to trap u,she wantd to beleive him,hr heart says Jhanvi,jst refuse ur all plans,nd allow him to trap u,just lost in his world,bt she said to hr heart,shut up!
R:kya?Kuch kaha tumne?
J:nahe kuch nahe,she gathered herself to concentrate on her mission,she went to him,nd asked in hr seductive voice may i help u?
R:he was already happy from hr coments,said,no no,its ok nd waise bhi pizza is ready,madam ajtak apne itna delicious home made piza nahe khaya hoga,she said to hrself meine to ek arsey (long period) se home made piza he nahe khaya.Now let me clean the kitchen,mein help kr deti hun said Jhanvi,she was closing the things nd Raghav was keeping the dishes after washing,he took out the pizza tray from the oven,nd came to the table to place on it.Jhanvi was keepng flour back onto the cupboard,After kepng the tray,when he turned,by mistake hz leg hit jhanvi's leg,nd she lost hr balance,nd was abt to fall,bt his strong arms hold hr tightly,they were lost into eachother eyes,his warm breaths on jhanvi's lips made her thirsty,she was looking deep into his brown,chocolatey eyes,hz hands were on hr waist,she was abt to melt from the warmth of hz hnds,hr hands was on hz shouldr,she wantd to be inside hm,hz broad chest was making hr helpless,suddenly the box of the flour,which was not closd tightly fell on them,geting unbalance the both fell on the floor nd from up to down they filled in the flour.Raghav was down nd jhanvi on her,on kitchn tiles,flour was making them slipy,she tried to get up but fell again on her,now this time she fell on hr chest to hz,hr lips was on hz neck,while her opened hairs was covering his face from 1side,ths was making hr shiver,she tried hr best to gt up bt hr hand was under him,he was pushing hz shouldr from 1hand to take the othr one out but failed.She was now annoying,Raghav looked at her nd said wait!
He wraped hr in hz arms nd rolled on the floor,now she was on the floor nd he was on hr he gazed at her for few secs,then gt up,both of their dresses were filled in flour,Raghav gave hr hand,get up ,she took hr hand nd got up,he gave her support nd take hr to hr room,"tum change krlo mein bhi.. kr leta hun" said Raghav nd left,she took out her dress nd went to washroom,she looked hrself into mirror,nd was feeling his breaths into hrself,she smild unknowingly bt realizd soon wt she is thinking,no Jhanvi wo ek vampire hai sirf monster,dnt attract towards him,jst forget him.She thought "mujhe uska qareeb aana itna feel ho rha hai,to usey bhi to kuch hua hoga na"
Here Raghav opened hz shirt remainig buttons nd took it out,he was abt to wear hz red t-shirt,when he looked into mirror he saw lipstick marks on hr neck nd cheek,he smiled nd shook his head on hr infantile behaviour,nd wore his t-shirt.His cell phone rang nd he received a call from Mr.Sinha.He got shockd nd conformed ru sure?Agr apki info ghalat nikli to?Ok.. He ended the call,nd said,how dare u cheat me!!!


Hope u like this,boring,long nd late chapi😕,i'll try my bst to updt nxt chapi soon😊,plz do like nd coment if u wana me continue😃...AYUSHi!!!
Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no problemo ayushi 🤗
nae nae dost bani hai na to thora makhan lagana parta hai 😉, u know wat i mean na?🤣
n meri taraf se sukun se update karo... vaise bhi i'm busy wid my papers these days, so whenever i get free i read em in bits in pieces...😊

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