FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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tmowla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

it is anyways nice from the pov your writing..but my guess is the audience wants more arshi scenes..but thats just my guess...it was a nice update..thanks!! keep up the good work👍🏼

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Don't feel discouraged by the number of likes and comments D: you're a great writer and the ff is completely awesome :D

I can't wait to see how the meeting will go between Arnav and Khushi now and if there will be a love triangle between Dhruv, Khushi and Hiru well square adding Arnav LOL

loving the ff keep it up :DDD

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: ---Nisha---

thats one of the first things I thought of when I heard about her passing away. It was her last wish and she couldnt see it fulfilled. Its just not fair. I hope that she atleast saw the promo...
😒
Sorry this has just shaken me up a bit...
About Dhruv- you will find out as time goes by.
With college essays we had to analyze literature and then write...which I apparently wasnt very good at. You are right though that sort of writing is different from story telling. Thanks for the compliment...

I'm sorry if you replied the other times and I didn't get back usually idk if you've replied or not >_< or anyone for that matter has replied to me lol

but yes I was upset, and this week has been hectic and crazy alone so I can't even explain the turmoil I felt when I heard the news T_T

idk what I can say about my work but I know whatever I put my mind and heart into always comes out the best whether it's creative writing or analytical

and you're welcome :DDD

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

amazing update thank u for pm me waiting for next one

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

awesome update loved it loved hoe khushi has pushed him out of her mind loved the update well written thanks for the pm

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---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: tmowla
it is anyways nice from the pov your writing..but my guess is the audience wants more arshi scenes..but thats just my guess...it was a nice update..thanks!! keep up the good work👍🏼

Hmmm...that must be it. But I cant just throw arhi together without buildup. There needs to be some setting right. But dont worry they will be seen together by like part 9.

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SSB28

@SSB28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Nice one ... So sundari is going to again work with Shaitan 😆. Their encounter will be fun to read.

I hae one request and that is Let ASR win his Khushi back in his own dominating style, Andshow Khushi as the same bubbly and charming one. I won't mind a jealous ASR either😆.

Waiting for next part 😊

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Wow waitingfor Arnav to reach goa and then the fun and the wooing will begin...and with Dhruval around I am sure we will see jealousy too :)

Looking forward!

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---Nisha---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Rabba-Ve-Delena
So finally I caught up, two instalments together Nisha and you've delivered!
Dhruv and Hiru, I like this, you've introduced parallel leads, I know for a fact they'll be stronger in comparison to PayAsh. I admire how you portrayed everything from Khushi's perspective nonetheless!👏

Also Arnav collapsed no? - Nice deflection!

Sorry I would have made it you...but hiru asked me can she be with the hotty, no not Sudha's hotty but the hot boss

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

i guess Arnav is playing the cards here! is he?? i wonder if there is something boiling between Dhruv & Hiru .. or will Dhruv make Arnav jealous .. LOL .. cant wait to see!

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