ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

I really have to say you are one fabulous writer who evokes strange emotions in me which the serial once used to evoke!!!!!

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Anjalie has keen eyes doesn't she? Loved her and khushi's bonding!

What a cliff hanger there at the end... !!! Can't wait to read more!

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vadz99

@vadz99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#693

i had tears in my eyes reading it, thanks for such a lovely chapter. fantastic!

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#694

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#695

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Yayyy!! I am finally the first one...Goshh!!! Party time :$

I simply loved the lil poem that you added in the beginning...It truly defines how Khushi feels and she can't help but be in love with Arnav... Simple and sweet!

Awww!! the bangles scene...ahhh...how I miss those days with Arhi's nok-jhok and Arnav exploring his new fond feeling towards Khushi and keepin it hidden when he doesn't tell her the reason to him buying the bangles... He almost did but couldn't let his feelings take over him.. =| Truly one of the best moments of Arhi <3 And you did justice to it by writing it soo beautifully <3

Man..I love Khushi and her jalebi makin to release all the stress. And the fact she couldn't even take a bite without know if Arnav was alright or not...an feeling dreadful thinking about how Shyam may have hurt Arnav 😔 Really sad!!

"Khushi.." Instead of caring about herself...she looks to see if he was alright!! Khushi is just one in a million!! Her bubble of quietness just bursted! ): poor Arhi!! both are hurting so much!! and her feeling feeling the tinge of regret...even in torment, she looks to see that he's not alright =(

"I'm Sorry" Those two words holds so much despair from Arnav!!

Loved the update <33

Continue soon 😳

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#696

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"It was a clear starry night and the moon was high up in the sky. She looked at it for a minute. The moon was in the middle of its journey from nothingness to full bloom. In many ways, she felt like she was in the same place in her life. She had left nothingness behind in Lucknow and here she was – half, incomplete. The moon would find its destination. Not her. She would go back to nothingness. In two more months."

Just had to quote that up and not in order because it deserves the top position. Beautiful, Meera, just beautiful.

Now coming to the rest of the chapter - he said sorry. Sigh. That is so major and thats just what she needed. He has to say sorry just once and he did (this is the philosophy I used in one of my OS' too...Arnav saying sorry will make so many things better...remember his first sorry?) and I am glad he did.

And Khushi let out her pain, much needed. Now she can begin to heal because the pain she had withheld for so long was preventing the healing (like the bangles healing her pain because she forgave Arnav and also let out her feelings)...great job, Meera! :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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indy12

@indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#697

yup this confrontation was much needed! loved reading it!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

My comment is going to be long so please don't mind. I'm pretty much emotionally drained after reading it and I need to vent out the remaining bit.

The emotions were so damned raw and Arnav's broken form finally got to me. I know he sinned gravely but when you are walking with the burden of your past,your guilt for having wronged your life and trying to protect everyone in your life from the darkness there's only so much a man can take. Give him an outlet for his emotions he needs it.

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#699

I loved the flashbacks. Two parts specifically. One where he wanted the bangles to heal her wound - I had never imagined that situation from that angle. And how he fell for her words just like he was falling for her! Beautiful! :)

Jalebis make a comeback and so does the spirit in Khushi to let out her anger at him! You are right. They react most when the other is in even the slightest trouble. So I forgive you for making Arnav disappear for a while but I still wanna know where he went and who he met and why!

It was an amazing update Meera! So many intricacies woven into your words! Loved it! Looking forward to the next. :)

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Dreamcatcher

@Dreamcatcher

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

Hi Meera, beautiful update!

Ask me no question, I'll tell you no lies...how profound!

Guess, this time, both of them are going to get their truths without asking

questions from each other.