Another thing I want to tell you... This is so intricate and realistic! My heart just goes out to this story (and to you, of course!). All emotions of love passion, insecurity... everything is just as in real life. One can easily forget that the characters are from a fictional drama. You breathe new lives into these characters. I haven't seen anybody, ANYBODY remain so true to the characters and yet, portray them in such a matured fashion. And characters being out of it puts me off instantly. You should really be proud of your writing skills.
Sometimes I wonder if the show itself has such realistic elements and the touch of a mature story as you deliver. It makes everything believable. I cannot expect the characters in any other way different from what you have shown. Really, salute to you.
Beauty lies in the details that you, and only you can carve out. Your updates aren't very long, but they take me ages to finish because I don't read the lines, I relish your words. I fall in love with each sentence and re-read them innumerable times. It is very rare that a style of writing appeals to you more than the story itself. You have done just that. I read for your writing, words, and not the story...
I'm new to this forum and your work has raised my standards to a height where I simply cannot read anything else (and by that, I mean other books, not FF).
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