FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2)) - Page 5

Nisha!! This part is really beautiful and oh so touching! I love how you brought out Kushi's feelings for him.. even after so many years of being neglected she still loves him 😭 Poor girl...I feel for her..

Your OS has a different vibe which makes it more interesting and i'm hooked on...please do continue...

Nisha! Loved the two parts dear...😊 So far loving the way the story is flowing. The possibility of losing Arnav is making Khushi's love and feelings for him come to the fore. This is beautifully portrayed in your OS. But ASR is as usual at his legendary bad self. 😔 He is so mean and hurtful towards Khushi. It's as if like some things never change. I am so waiting for you to clear the misunderstanding between them and let the love blossom. God only knows when it is actually going to end in the show but at least we can have that in your OS...😃

Thanks for the PM dear and will be eagerly waiting to read part 4...😊

please do continue... the story is developing in an interesting manner. I was surprised to learn that arnav still suspects khushi... i would have thought that that he would have learnt the truth in these 3 years! anyway, future events would be interesting to read about

Beautiful... Oh plz make thngs b alryte b/w arnav and khushi... Update soon. Nd thnx 4 d pm :D

Nice! Hate tt Arnav is being rude to khushi still but hope tt when Arnav finally knows the truth, he will make it up to khushi! Please update soon! Really loved...

Good start, the story has potential.

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