Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)- Page 71

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Posted: 14 years ago
@tanzie LOL tanzie kal hi toh maine nishi/anurag/chakku se poocha ki finally batao who 2 bharo siggies in dabba.Unhone btaya & maine 4 siggies dabbe mai bhar diye😆😆.RD-VD ka toh funny tha issliye use kiya:P.VD ka new show ko promote karne k liye madhubala ka,Abhay meri jaan hai issliye uski hotness k liye 3rd wala & I love Abhiya isliye 4th wala😆😆.Iss baar jab dubara apni old ID re-open karongi toh usme bhi apne dabbe bhar dongi😆😆.I agree old or young Abhay's everybody's dream man😉😆
Love u🤗
Edited by chocorox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
don,t need to b sorry dear its ok take ur time
we will wait 4 ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago


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Posted: 14 years ago
read the update while listening to Raabta 😍
u can imagine my state 😍
i m lost in abhiya dreamland 😍
coming to the update, it was really a nice and romantic update. and i hope abhay's boss keeps her eyes off Abhay 😡
Edited by ..dishu.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely cute sweet update
wow abhay know cooking.Pia is too lucky😃
pia used not to eat oily food and now she is eating palak paneer, butter chicken lol 🤣 abhay kya bana diya Pia ko🤣
last part was cute and lovely😳.

Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Tanzie how can u call this even remotely boring? 😡 I loved it even more than your previous update It was so beautiful, the way 2 lost souls were trying to reconnect with the norms of human life. On one hand u have Pia, who was a reckless drunk diva n on the other u have Abhay who was an assassin. Its really hard to imagine anything between them but u have pulled it off brilliantly 👏 Abhay knew how to cook 😲 But I guess its reasonable enough since he had to stay alone for a long time. I still remember Pia's eyes going wide on seeing french fries that Abhay had got for her while she was his captive n now she's hogging on palak paneer, butter chicken, paratha n choco chip ice cream? 🤣 Kya se kya bana diya Abhay ki pyaar ne use? 😆 The part where she thinks of their grand children was so sweet 😳 Abhay being an english major was a shocker for me 😲 n now his spanish senior has the hots for him? 🤣 Poor Pia 😆 First hot super models n now senior citizens 😆 I hope Pia talks to Madhu. Though I know what Madhu did was utter cowardice on her part but still we can never fathom the reasons behind her actions 😭 Abhiya were apart for just 2 days n they were already missing each other like they hadn seen each other for eons n the last bit was hot ☺️ I loved the part where Abhay thinks of Bixie as a lazy dog 😆 Too cute. Overall a mindblowing update Tanzie n dont worry about the pace coz u balance the tracks very well 👍🏼

BTW wanted to know which breed of dog is Bixie? Don't know y but I kinda liked her 😳
Edited by mandy1024 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow beautiful update!!!!!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

i liked it even more than previous update..i read it 2-3 times.😆😳
each n everything from their possessive ness, love, desire, longing for each other..their passion...all was beautifully portrayed by you.. just excellent!!!!!!!👏👏👏

when pia got to know that he'll be away for two days. ...she became so sad but didn't forget to inquire abt his female boss...that was so cute😆
n abhay cooked for her...so sweet.❤️
they haven't experienced a normal family life😔...thats why everything is new for them n they are trying to understand each other better...when abhay said that " we have each other n we are each other's family"...i could feel their pain😭... n i even i of afraid of the thought that what will happen if they will separate from each other😒
anyways...i know problems will knock their door soon but for now even i dont want to think abt that...n just want to remain in their dreamland.😍...oh tanzie ...i feel like kissing your hands for writing such lovely update
🤗🤗🤗
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Edited by anjali0111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Outstanding update tanzie.
Each time I read ur updates I just feel that nothing can be better than this but everytime u prove me wrong.
The way u described their relationship was just brilliant.
I loved each and every part of it.
The part where piya sat on abhay's lap and it made abhay crazy, u have just shown the effect piya had on abhay, beautifully.
The part where piya said abt grandchildren, u have shown their desires to be with each other perfectly.
wow abhay can cook too and piya wants to learn cooking from him, so cute.
I loved the summer festival part, abhay wanted to buy everything for piya and piya had to explain it to abhay, so sweet.
Coming to the last part their love making showed their longing and passion for each other beautifully. It was full of desires yet passionate.
U just showed piya's possisevness for abhay through that spanish lady part.
The part where abhay decided to sleep in his own room and piya's face fell, u have shown their pain and longing for each other perfectly.
I loved the way u wrote their obession, love, care, uncertanity of future and passion for each other.

All over it was a brilliant update and I don't have any words to praise ur writing skills so, no words on that.
It was not at all boring, it was just lovely.
I have never written such a big comment but I couldn't stop myself from praising this beautiful update of urs.
pls continue as soon as u get time and thanks a lot for the pm.
Edited by Rmuk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful Update tanzie!👏

Edited by Abhiya_Gunner - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update tanzie.I so loved it.I loved the way Abhay was cooking 4 Pia,his efforts 2 find a job in order 2 give Pia a better life.And tht scene was cute where Pia asked Abhay the age of his bos😆😆.The love,insecurity,care,comfort,safety,oneness descibed by u was well appreciated.I loved tht u r taking it slowly coz if u'll make everything fast thn it will luk lke lust thn love.So keep going.By the way I used one of ur siggi in my old ID😆😆

Love u🤗
Edited by chocorox - 14 years ago

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