Third Time Lucky!! (swaron ss) (UPDATED PAGE 9) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls pm me when u update pls pls pls pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3
Hey guys sorry for such a late update 😭blame it on the entrances nd interviewsThankyou so so very much for liking my SS.🤗 U guys ttly ROCK!!😎 So here goes the much awaited confession of Swaron!! Enjoy!!😃

Sharon nd Rey reach the Atrium. The whole gang is present there except for swayam. He is no where to be seen after the Taani fiasco. Rey tries to call him but his phone is switched off.
Rey: Sharon I think he has gone back home. Nd I feel u should tlk to him tmrw only!
Sharon: wat Rey u kidding me? I need to tlk to him right now! I need to tell him abt my feelings Rey!!
Rey: But he is nowhere to be seen sharon!
Sharon: I'll find him Rey! I noe where he is!
After saying this she ran away towards the abandoned corridor. Her heart said that he would hv been there only bt her mind refused it! Bt today the only thing she was gonna listen to was her Heart which now was beating for Swayam nd only Swayam!


Abandoned Corridor
It was ttly dark there. No noise nthing it was so quiet nd scary. Her head wanted her to go back bt her heart wanted her to call out his name nd tell him everything.
Sharon: Swayam r u der? Hello Swayam?
Swayam: sharon? U here?
Sharon: swayam!
It was dark in here bt both of dem could see each others eyes as they sparkling on seeing each other!
Sharon: swayam i wanna tlk to u.
Swayam: I noe wat u gonna say shar, i noe u yet again r gonna insult me nd abuse me right?
Sharon: No swayam. I...I wanna say dat..
Swayam: that ur a cheap stalker nd blah blah blah...Miss Sharon Raiprakash let me tell u one thing im not in a mood to listen to ur crap right now so pls leave me alone for heaven's sake! Go away!
Ouch! Those words from swayam's mouth were like a million knifes stabbed in her! tears welled up in her eyes bt she held them back. Finally she had tasted her own medicine nd it was bitter very very bitter.
Swayam: pls sharon go! Its better if we stay away. This way we wont be able to hurt each other. Cause im sick nd tired of this tom nd jerry stuff. I cant fight wid u anymore, it messes my brain up sharon!
Sharon: (that sit she knew that she loved the guy bt had hurt him a lot nd jst a simple I LoVe You might not repair all that hurt. She knew that she had to make him feel as special as he is but how, was the case here??) Swayam listen i noe its hard for u to fight with me nd its hard for me too nd i dont wanna either..
Swayam: (shocked not believing wat he jst heard) wat?? Really? Bt y??
Sharon: (shocked)huh? Wat do u mean y?? Abhi u said na dat fighting with me messes u up!? Den?
Swayam: no no no! Dont get me wrong i mean its good that u want a truce me too:) sharon im sure u very well noe wat u mean to me nd i dont ever wanna hurt again ever, i never wanna see tears in ur eyes ever..sharon i noe that u nd I can never be US bt dat does not mean that i dont love u..ur my life sharon..nd even though ur aren't wid me i stil want u to be happy always...
Sharon:(sharon could not control her tears i mean her Mr. Perfect, her Prince was right there in front of her always nd she was such a fool to always ignore him, insult him, abuse him whereas she should hv loved him, cared for him, he was her gift from God nd she had never understood his value untill today! How could she have never understood that? y had she taken soo much time to realise her love?? Silent tears fell down her cheeks nd finally she was able to say something after cursing herself soo much) im sorry for today morning, the rehersal hall nd all those other occassions when i hurt u. Im sorry for hurting u, for insulting u for being a bi*ch to u. Im sorry swayam! I really am...im sorry bt what would i hv done huh? U always made me feel so helpless in front of u...u evoked such emotions in me that i never knew i had..i didnt noe wat it was bt now i noe it i noe it Swayam dat dat I LOVE U dammit I really do nd I want to be US i always wanted it.( sharon had a lump in her throat nd kindda choked while saying the last two words)
Swayam: (he couldn't believe what he heard. Did it really happen, did the day he always dreamed abt had actually come?! Had they really become US.?!)
Sharon! (he ttly was speechless)
Sharon: (she was smilling bt tears were still rolling down her cheeks)

Nd finally our majnu could not resist himself nd hugged her, hugged her as if der was no tmrw, as if it was the last time they were gonna be together bt in reality it was the first! It was jst the begining of forever. A forver that now exsisted! Sharon jst surrendered her self to him. She too hugged him nd it felt like heaven)
After abt an hour or so they both got up, strainghtened themselves. Even though they both had jst confessed their love, they still were blushing like hell :P Bt atlast our diva spoke up nd wat she she said ttly left our majnu Dumbstruck again! :P
Sharon: hey so U nd me r going out for dinner tonight. Pick me up at 7:00 sharp nd ill tell where to go also i dont like ppl who r late!
Swayam:(his jaw litteraly fallin to the ground) wat? Huh? Yeah okay i mean "ur wish is my Command!" ill pick u up at 7:00!
Sharon: Good so see u soon! (she gave him her special to die for smile nd he was like on cloud 9!)
Swayam: (to himself) finally man sharon is mine now nd ill make sure that she gets all the happiness in the world!
Sharon:(to herself) Tonight is gonna be the best night of our lives! The night both of us will remember forever! I love U swayam nd ill always keep u happy! Always!

Oh boy both of them finally got Third Time Lucky!! Yaay!!


Ps: woh! Finally i wrote, i did the confession! 😳Im not sure whether it was Good, Bad or Horrible. Cause dat u hv to decide 😛 nd this is not the last part if u guys want ill write their first date also organised by Sharon!!! Waiting desperately for ur comments nd Once again Thanks a lot for reading my SS it means a lot!! 😃

Jyotika 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Jyoti, I read the part b4 u sent the PM, it was a beautiful confession ...just the two of them in their own private space...luvd Sharon for being strong enuf to go on and speak her heart out knowing that he was not angry with her but broken & he needed her reassurance...I wuld luv it if u write another part with the first date description...keep writing more such stuff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Hey Jyotika ! 😳

I loved how u made Sharon sound so .. SHARON !! 😆

"Pick me up at 7 and I font like ppl who are late"


Wayyy to be romantic Sharon !! 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well written...the abandoned corridor is indeed a special place for SWARON...i love dumbstruck swayam sometimes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RAwesumm..nd ya abadoned corrido...wonderful place for the confession
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome i loved how sharon was sharon pick me up by 7 i dont like people being late... ooohh and their first date cant wait to read it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update Jhothika.
It was lovely.
Sharon's way of addressing Swayam was cute.
Thanks for pm.
Do continue it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome i really loved it specially when sharon said 'hey so U nd me r going
out for dinner tonight. Pick me
up at 7:00 sharp nd ill tell
where to go also i dont like ppl who r late!'
🤣 ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Hey Jyotika !

Very well written and the confrantation was beautiful..the abandond corridor is the perfect place for SwaRon...especially for their private talks and I love how Sharon was soo...SHARON...

Loved the update and eagerly waiting for the next 😊

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