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Posted: 13 years ago
3 parts in a day tat was lovely & the update was also superb. It was hilarious, sad, emotional & some regrets 2wards Arnav's behaviour. I know he is trying his best 2 make up with Khushi & give her more than she deserve but what is the point when u r hurting & not fullfiling her wishes. That girl really had the guts 2 ask him 2 kiss & he said noo that is really going hurt her. I hope Arnav realize his mistake b4 it is too late.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...3 parts t a time???
loved it
n thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
ur awesome 3 parts at a time.
i am by n large a silent reader.sorry for that but i do read n like ur ff
from the beginning u maintained a tempo n style...n never was i able to predict ur next update...
the story telling style..the convos...n ur mentioning of time n place of each scene is fabulous...its done with such precision dat it gives the reader a clarity of the surroundings
khushi in ur ff is such a naive girl...but her inner strength,love for her husband her insecurities...are aptly done
kudos to u n ur writing...

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Posted: 13 years ago
tooo goooddd dear i read both u post now 5 updates they were awesome i had to read it twisce but okay love it best is pinguin hahaahha asr just lovely
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Posted: 13 years ago
You leave me speechless that was 3 awesome update Arnav and penguin lol. And Arnav plan for revenge hmmm loving it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hah poor arnav..when he finally decided to forget his self control...:P...he is again disturbed by someone...i seriously wanted a kiss yaar...shit...it would have looked so hot in such a situation
plzz yaar soon a kiss..i no i am again being greedy..:P..but ok na?...
and plss update soon..i love your entire series...

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Posted: 13 years ago
stunning update...all your updates makes me speechless...
khushi is just lovable..but why the hell arnav behaves like this...
overall fantastic...
thankx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
3 part at a time lovely...n ur r such a fav writer ...superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
just amazing yaar...you r once again surprise me with another great update yaar...loved d part when khushi understands arnav and arnav phone conversations...
thanks for the pm yaar...cant wait for next part...
so update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
what the?? to hell with his plans and his self control.. oh arnav stop worrying khushi man.. first he said all those things abt her to shyam and then ignored her and then did not even kiss her.. damn it! very nice updates :) :)

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