~* My valentine * (completed) - Page 13

Originally posted by: sukanyaa

me luvd it

Originally posted by: shruthi.sweety

no words to describe...awesome❤️👏.pls continue soon😃

Originally posted by: moonlight08

i loved it to the core..❤️

im a fan of ur writing, i told you it's very mesmerising.. and the starting was just precious.. nature was wearing the colour of love and every thing.. it took me to my dreamland and thanks to you, im lost again..😆

i loved the part where you said naitik can read akshara's heart and soul in a split of a second.. makes me realise how pure is their love..😍

the whole SMP sequence was awesome..😳

but the last few lines took my heart away..

two souls finally met ...

surrendering to the person u love ...

giving away all u had guarded ...

to a person who completes u ...

the beauty of making love is so pure dat we cannot describe it our mere words ...

loving your love ! with your heart ...the heart which now was inferior to you ... which now belonged to the person whom u hv owned yourself ...
~~~~~~

they cuddled in each others arms ... felling the warmth ...their love has produced ...the pure fragrance of love they made

...the magical touch of your beloved ...

im going to use these lines somewhere and u won't stop me..😆

it was indeed beautiful.. imagining naksh like this sent shivers down my spine.. this OS would be in my mind for a long, long time to come.. especially the narration part..😃

and ofcourse, many many thanks for the PM..😃

regards,

Kaumudi.

Originally posted by: moonlight08

@upasna -

first of all.. ur upasna singh? u sent me request on fb na?😆

and u know, i'l tell you a secret.. i hardly comment on FFs pata hai.. very rare.. no offence to anyone, but yess only those FFs find my comments which appear really interesting to me.. im a bit choosy when it comes to FFs..😆

your's was truly great.. i loved it..😊

Originally posted by: moonlight08

@upasna -

first of all.. ur upasna singh? u sent me request on fb na?😆

and u know, i'l tell you a secret.. i hardly comment on FFs pata hai.. very rare.. no offence to anyone, but yess only those FFs find my comments which appear really interesting to me.. im a bit choosy when it comes to FFs..😆

your's was truly great.. i loved it..😊

Originally posted by: sush00naksh

i agree this.mere coment bhi bhot valuable hote hai