ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B - Page 26

Loved the update as I knew I would. Your write beautifully from start to finish 😊 The poem was lovely and the flashbacks which seemed like a lifetime ago just shows the contrast of Arnav and Khushi from then to now. The kitchen scene was fab. Shyam totally deserved that and from Anjali's reaction I got the feeling she knows more than she's letting on. Finally he initiated a hug. Loved it!!

Thank for the pm chick and keep em coming cos I love the magic you weave for us.xx

Great job Meera...totally love this new ff😛 its awesome 😊

O God ! Loved it ! Update soon !

Meera Di !!
Im so damn sorry for being ever so late in my commenting rituals but I just am mad !! So sorry !!

And coming to the update !! By the end of it I was literally going mad !! I could have pulled out my hair if that was possible, but that was a bit improbable at that moment cause my parents were around me and looking me get all emotional with the update muttering god knows what under their breaths !!

I loved the way you starts these updates you know !! A flashback so different and al ways ending with an if... situation for both of them... And so the morning arrives, the morning whcih is definitely about to change their lives in the few updates to come !! And I loved the atmosphere the poem created.Just perfect is all I would like to say !!

The Khushi-Shyam interaction was amazing in the kitchen... Not because of the fact that she threw hot milk at him, because when you made Anjali enter with the stern voice of hers, I was just amazed and shocked.,it also let me intrugiged by it . Does she have a slight hint that her so called pati-parmeshwar might just be cheating on her ?? Or ... I dont know, thats the only thing I can think of at this moment ..

Arnav's anger when he sees it... And even more when he gets to know that its not happening for the first time !! And thats again when he shuts himself in the cabin of his venting out his anger at himself, guilty for what he's made Khushi go through not only at his hands but at the hands of his so called jijaji... I loved the way you describes his emtions then..

And then Khushi enters bringing with her a sense of calm to him too... And he once again realises that he was so wrong, so wrong from the beginning...So out for a tea ?? Well they' aren't exactly gonna be able t drink it are they ??
Loved it

RES !!
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Seriously Meera
Take in a deep breath cause now when I hug you, Im just not gonna let go !! 🤗 This update was like... I dont know, I just cant bring out a word to describe it...Im just speechless at the moment !!

Me
I'll take her laughter and her tears
And make them all my souvenirs
For where she goes I've got to be
The meaning of my life is

She

When I was reading this poem, I just couldnt help, but a 1000 images of how badly Arnav would be repenting came to my mind... This holds so true for him... Every part every word in the poem I just coudlnt help but realise how interlinkes their lives are with each other... How their emotions are interlinkes with each other... And whatever happens they do end up together solving problems...

The flashback ... Just brought out one thing clearly... Khushi never considered Anjali any different from her Di... According to her, they are always equal... And Arnav must be feeling such a heart-percing pain at not believing her... Cause that's what Ive been failing. Such a tight pull at my heart when I was reading this all... He knows an apology wouldnt be enough, but he doesnt even know what else he can do so that all that he's ever done wrong to her never exists for either of them, So that they could probably just start a happily ever after for them...

The conversation at the cafe was so great !! I loved it... How Khushi just comes up with this plan of making Anjali realise she has a life beyond her so called hubby... The way Arnav is stunned at her...

And the last line, I dont know what happened to Arnav I dont know about his heartbeat, but mine did stop for that second.. cause at that very moment I could not only feel Arnav's heartbeat stop but I could almost imagine how much Khushi was hurt... She probably just doesnt have it any more to take or hold onto... And my heart went out to these two people...The ending just made me go so emotional, my hands are still shivering and I have these big tears threatening to fall...

Loved the update loadsss Meera . Just loadss and loadss...
thanks for the PM❤️

PS: Yayyy !!! I commented pretty soon after you posted the update so I hope it compensates for the latee comment on the previous one

Beautiful! and Clever!

You amaze me with the way u write! it was beauTiful yet very heart breaking!
i loveD khusis inner thoughts! though arnav loves her buT stilL arnavs realatnshp with her was only becAuse of hIs family!
and i am totaly with khusi aBt the plan! thats really what anjali neED, smthn to divert her mind!
buT i still thnk that she knws a lot mOre aBOuT shyam than we thInk!
the last line that was heart wrenchIng!
beauTifulLy writTen meera. loveD it
thankx 4 the pm :)

😭Thud