ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

perfect this was perfect i loved it esp the time asked by Arnav!!!

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Beautiful chapter full of regret and pain! Loved it.

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Awesome, intense. My heart aches for both of them.

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Beautifully written update! Fabulous job!

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Both are trying to fill the void between them, yet both are holding back. In dono ka kuch nehin honewala... 😆

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Nira khan

@nirbasito

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

i really like this khushi. Wonderful update!! 👏

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

woww this is so amazingly written 👏 👏 👏 👏 khushi'spain and arnav's regret was written perfectly... poor arnav and khushi 😭

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cupcake-

@cupcake-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Edited*

First of all I am happy that you decided to convert this into a FF:)

Sorry I couldn't comment earlier on.. Just read both the chapters now...

And I have just one word for you-

F-A-B-U-L-O-U-S!!

Let me start with the first chapter...

I loved the first 5 lines of the song of Alicia keys!! That describes the whole chapter in just few words.. Both Arnav and Khushi's emotions! Also I loved it that you related the past incidents with the present... Mind-blowing!! And I loved small things like how you used the weather and atmosphere to describe the emotions in their hearts...Each and every word was amazing!

Also its just impossible to imagine Khushi without her colors... Colors make our Khushi Kumari Gupta... I can totally imagine what Arnav would have felt like seeing Khushi devoid of colors... And its just like Khushi is silently punishing Arnav...

Coming to the second chapter,

I just don't have any words for this... You are an AMAZING writer.. You have captured both their emotions so well.. and the way you have weaved through the past and present.. I can say its almost poetic (quoting you from your first chapter (: )

There are so many things that I liked about this chapter.. That I might go on and on just listing them... How Arnav and Khushi can speak with their eyes.. And Arnav trying so hard to converse with her.. I just hope that he apologizes to her... although she has already forgiven him...

The end was superb.

Loved reading both the chapters... Thanks a lot for the pm. Looking forward to your next update :)

Edited by -hazel- - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

awesome update loved it well written and perfectly describe the pain and the hurt the emotions were heart felt and raw awesome can't wait for more loved

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

i know what you do... i finally know what you do..

you pick up those amazing moments from the show.. the ones we all love.. but the brilliant CVs have chosen to forget.. and you take those moments and you bring them back.. and ohhh-myyy-goddd, how you bring them back!!!!!

"I shouldn't have sent you to the parking lot that night."

i cried...i am not joking.. i literally cried.. isnt it perfect Arnav Singh Raizada behaviour... he knows he has mucked up.. and not just this terrace time.. he has just gone all the way back to what alll he has done with her hasnt he...and this is what our Arnav should/will do, wont he..

And then you bring in those moments from the show about which we crib.. we alll crib... we believe that the CVs are ruining what Khushi and Arnav stand for... and then you and your brilliant mind find the most amazing reason to have done what the CVs did..

She was a master of pretending bad things weren't happening around her. That was her defense mechanism. That is how she kept her sanity.

And then... you bring the two of them together.. you make Arnav do what Khushi does.. and you give her a reason to hate him a little less...

She never knew there would be a day when she would see him do the same.

i wish you had listened to me 3 days ago..i wish you had sent this story of your to the CVs.. because i am scared... i am scared about how i will lose this one show which has finally given me something to go crazy about..because honestly.. i agree with you.. i did NOT like today...

and honestly Meera "Di"... you write beautifully.. and you have a brilliant mind which helps you create these magical links which help you write a little more beautifullyy.. and i love it :):)