raya ff ''brahmachari' part 3 pg 8 7th may - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey ya folks it's a long rocky weekend ahead for balh'ians and i know very senti. too so just before that is an update hope u'll lyke it but don't get confused 😕 ans sorry for the delay was engaged in njhh update and some work kk so here's the update and thnx to u all for all the lovely comments ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part ~3 especial for salsaly and for a rocking week ahead...
Ram took deep breath and composed himself to answer all the questions with some decent reasons ,he had just started to address the media when priya came from behind and freaked out seeing such a large mass of media she was dead sure that her dad will not spare her at all ,he was a very reputed person and was very strict ,she hurriedly uttered out a sentence which left the media speechless even ram looked at her with his jaws dropped and eyeballs popped out priya ignored the media and straight looked into ram's eyes pressing his hand and repeated those words somehow seeking for his help with pleading eyes ,ram looked at her and somehow he too new that if he didn't coped with her now they could land up into a very big mess later on with both of their images will be ruined ,he nodded his head in assurance they both together faced the media knowing that they'll have to get out with this mess all together they announced it with a formal tone
Ram : (he said taking a deep breath )ladies and gentleman u heard it right that miss priya is to be d.i.l. of the Kapoor clan and we just got engaged few days back and were just planning for other functions as we don't get too much time with each other but I think a normal would be couple can't get any isn't it?? He said shooting a stern glare towards the manger standing behind who shivered with the look he got . excusing him and priya he shut the door tight.
They both rested their backs towards the door and heaved a sigh of relief they both looked at each other and had a clueless expression as to what to do next ,ram thought of something for a while and opened the door to go out when priya nudged him to have a look at his appearance he gasped seeing his own self in such a state he ran to the bathroom straight and came out wearing a bathrobe clinging to it as if it was a last piece of cloth on his body and rushed to the cupboard picking up random clothes and rushed in the changing room banging the door behind being pissed off being so childish in front of a lady ,he came out wearing a cotton shirt and chinos with his hair gelled and a watch dangling across his wrist ,his upper two shirt buttons were open giving him a more dapper look, priya shamelessly ogled at him with wide open eyes though he was somewhat a mature looking person ,neither was she young in age and had rightfully surpassed the age of her marriage first busy with her studies and then doing a job of her choice, the youngest lecturer of the most reputed university in town and lived her social life to the fullest ,she wondered what his present relationship status was ,ram looked at her and snapped his fingers bringing her out of her trance ,he walked out and headed straight towards his destination telling priya he'll return back in 15 mins.
(a seprate scene in the same hotel of raya)
Person: hello boss ! evrythng went haywire and our plan flopped !
Boss :( in a stern tone )hmm. I got the news
Person : boss we thought that Miss Priya Sharma would be defamed but here this person said he's her fianc !!what do we do now ??
Boss : just wait for my orders but let me first figure out as what the hell is scheming between the two and I'm sure they both are hiding the truth !
Boss : poor u Mr. Ram Kapoor u urself invited u to fall into this trap tut .tut.
t.b.c hope it's a long one for u all😆 w8ngg for beautifull comments
@salsaly ure beautiful comments are awesome thnx for it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sammy ...itna late...

kaha hai tum ...suspence suspence ..what will hapen now ..

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvsakshi

sammy ...itna late...

kaha hai tum ...suspence suspence ..what will hapen now ..

update soon


suspence <3 ke bina no entrtnmnt <3 dats why and sorry for such a late update hope u liked it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i got ur pm di but sorry for not replyinh will update welcome back soon too thnx for liking it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nany

Hey dear ,its super .


thnx nany am readng ur story too its nice on secnd part right now gr8 work😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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shags !!! i cant believe my eyes... u dedicated this update 4 me... thank u so so sooo much dear... love u... 🤗


wow... thanks... u updated a longer part this tym... this part is superb , awesome... 👏





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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy salsaly a big hug🤗and thnx to u ... u rock hope i alwayz manage to get such beautiful comments with my each update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanku shaqs for updating
hats off to your imagination
really luv u r way of writing and please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SWEETETIKA

thanku shaqs for updating

hats off to your imagination
really luv u r way of writing and please update soon


Sweetika dalng its Shags balh wala Shaqs nheiee😆
will surely update a.s.a.p.

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