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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Beautiful! I don't get emotional easily, but you had me in tears with this one! This and the episode of Satyamev Jayate made me how lucky I am to have my parents.

Amazing job! Absolutely loved it!

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Diahh

@Diahh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

👏👏👏

Wow!!! Speechless!!!!

You made me cry!!!one of the best OS!!!N mentioning a scenario common to all girls n including Arshi in it is just superb!!!!

N must say this is a great way to convey this message!!!👏

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: april2003
OMG!! I am so in love with your writing that I constantly stalk your index😆. That was one extra-ordinary beautiful story!! I loved the way you bought out each and every emotion in your writing. Khushi seems to be much stronger emotionally than Arnav is, when it comes to their daughter. He was a total train-wreck. Amaara to him was like his heart walking around on the outside of his body with a life and will of it's own. I even teared up reading this and I'm not even a mother yet, but I know of the love my parents has for me and today I was reminded of that by your writing. That kind of love is so hard to explain. Fantastic job, loved it😃.

Hahahaha! ;) :D

Yep, Arnav is extremely protective over his daughter and a putty in her hands! ;) :D

Awww! I am not married only but the issue touched my heart! :)

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: curledup
I don't know what to do, whether to laugh or to cry, my left hand was covering my mouth while my right hand was going over the mouse, I am so moved by this OS. The little italics in between the different sections was and is so beautiful! I need to think of some new adjectives for your work. I have been rendered speechless yet again, how do you do it? I can- I won-

This-

I have no words.

-Aashifa

Awww! You make me blush and blush hard!

Glad you liked it, Aashifa!

Thank You sooo much! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Gargee
Rae, Rae , Rae!!! You had me bawling like a baby there!

I actually shocked the hell out of my Dad by randomly running to him and hugging the living daylights out of him! Arnav as a Dad was so sweet! Oh my God! That was the Best OS I've ever read. And for the Record- I loved Ayan and Akshay- That's how Brothers are supposed to be! I even hugged my own Dadu- and my family is currently sitting in the living room discussing if I'm in need of therapy😆

BUT! Love you for this fabulous OS! Beautifully Written! And the song was just heavenly! 👏 Thanks for the PM!

Hahahahahahahah! That is the funniest reply ever! ;) :D

And the best reaction an author could hope for from such a piece too! So Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it and that it touched you. :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Shruti_P
awww Rae this was beautiful i was so overcome with emotions in the bidaai portions😭

i was remembering that song u know from "Na tum Jano Na Hum" movie ye betiyaan to babul ki raniya hai something like that

the update was just awesome great work as always

Awww!

I havent heard the song but I remember bawling my eyes out in the bidaai scene in Hum Aapke Hain Koun...sigh.

Thank You! :)

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I am a lazy bum when it comes to commenting, but I have nothing to say but this:

You made me cry and this is beautiful! I know exactly what you were trying to get across. Being the second daughter of my parents, no son in the family, I've felt the bias. It's sickening, and it really pisses me off. So thank you for writing this OS 🤗 It's left me speechless. Reminded me of the day my cousin got married and of her vidai. We had all cried so much. I cried again reading this. Beautiful is an understatement. Again, thanks for writing this. I just wish everyone in the world understood that sons and daughters are the same! I just wish... And hope to see this soon.

xox

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

There is something so beautiful about the father-daughter relationship, isn't there?

Beautiful is the only word for this OS

Arnav as a father - treat to watch i am sure. Arnav as a daughter's father - even better I think

I can almost see him as George Banks (Steve Martin) in Father of the Bride :)

Amazing!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

U got me all emotional remembering my wedding with my 3 brothers n dad crying n hugging me!!! It seems like it was yesterday!!!😭

U need a standing ovation for this OS. N i really appreciate the msg u tried to convey. Not all girls r as lucky n i am thankful to God that despite being the only girl in my famly, my parents left no stone unturned to give the same equal opp as my brothers n stand on the pedestal n to b wat i am today!!😳

Edited by omshreejaanu - 13 years ago