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kajenvirman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

loving the concept

please PM me for your updates!

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Megha106

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: nishi12345
i just loved ur concept
luking forward to read more

please can u pm me wen u write next

nyccc!!!!😊

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sara ifteqar

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 2
Delhi 3:00 pm.
Manvi returned back to her house.
She came in,saw her mama sitting on the sofa and drinking alcohol
Manvi : main aa gayyi mana...!!! (smiled)
Mama : Aa gayyi musibat...!!!(in his half conscious state)
Manvi : (disappointed...still she smiled)
Manvi walked in to her room,and sat on her bed,throw her bag behind)
her phone ranged,it was her frnd name flashing
Manvi : Hello...(excited)
Nishi : Manvi tu kab tak nikal rahi hai waha se..???
Manvi : Aaa...aaa...abhi thodi der mein nikal he rahi hu...tu nikal ja waha se..main pahonch ti hu...
Okay..okay..ok bye..
(she disconnected)
She went out of the room ,and sat before her mama,who was half conscious.
Manvi : aa...aaa...mama..main
Mama : abe jaldi bol na..!!!(irritated)
Manvi : mama...mujhe aaj mumbai jana hai...
Mama : KYA ???
Manvi : Aaa..main kal tak wapas aa jaungi...!!
Plzzz...Woh kya hai na...meri frnd ki shaadi hai...woh woh mumbai mein shaadi ker rahi hai..
Mujhe waha jana hai...
Mama : toh mera dimaag kyun kha rahi ho...Mumbai jana hai na...Toh ja na..!!!
Manvi : (got happy and said) Thank you mamaji...i love u..
Manvi left to her room.
she quickly packed her bag and stuff.
Left to the airport
Mumbai
4:00 pm.
Crime Branch Building.
Virat was in conference hall,discussing with some of his gang members and some senior inspector.
yashverdhan singh (Head of Crime Branch investigation)

Yash : Virat tum yeh baat itne confident se kaise keh sakte ho ???
Virat : Sir...90 % Chances hai ke woh log public place ko he target karenge...
Aur sir aap jaante hai ke Mumbai mein colaba jagah mein sabse zyada crowded area mana jaata hai...!!!
Other senior inspector : Per agar kahi aur unka nishana hua toh ???
Virat : aaj raat mumbai ke sabse zyada crowded areas mein police rahegi...main unhe warn rehne ke liye bol diya hai...
Bass ek baar woh jagah trace ho jaye..toh hum usse bahoot achi tarah se pakad sakte hai...!!!
Ins : per woh hai kon...
Virat : (signaled to one of his gang member)
The hall lights get dimmed and the projector starts with a picture of a stubble man
then one bald man,then some tough dark man.
then finally the last picture.
Virat : REDDY...!!!
illegal drinks ke dhande,drug bechna...aur girls supply kerna...yeh is sab ka leader...
Ins : WHAT ???? YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI ???
per yeh toh peace configuration ka member hai !!!
Virat : (smirked) Sir...woh kehte hai na...Haathi daant diknne ke alag aur Khane ke alag hote hai..
Yash : tumhara plan kya hai..??
Virat : (smiled)(started to tell them his plan...)

Delhi
manvi with her frndz got in to the flight and they all sat on thr respective seats
Manvi was sitting at the window side,she was staring out of the window and lost in her own thoughts.
Manvi : (she thought)Life kitni ajeeb hai na...Aazaad hoker bhi kitni kaid hu..!!!
She shut her eyes and went in light sleep.

Mumbai
Virat's gang have 6 members
Ashish
Karan
Priya
Kashi
Arjun
Vidhyut
Apart from being professional partners,they r also friends

Virat : (he was explaining his plan to everyone present in the hall.)
Sir yeh humara secret plan...jab tak yeh case main publicly solve ker raha tha...
unn sab ko humare plans ke baare mein pata chal raha tha...
Lekin jabse maine yeh case secretive kiya hai...!! It's all working well..
Yash : I agree virat...
i think hume (suddenly a knock on the door)
Virat : come in..
a guy came in.
Virat : deepak ???
Deepak is the guy who works as assistant to virat.
Deepak : sir...Sir woh location trace ho gayyi hai..!!
Virat : kon si jagah hai woh..??
Deepak : West colaba...
Sir last time woh...
Virat : (frown formed on his forehead) kya hua ??
Deepak : last week jisse aapne pakda tha...uss drug supplier ko...wohh uss mall mein...sir woh bhi west colaba mein hai..
Virat : (raised his one eye brow)

Mumbai Airport.
The flight from delhi to mumbai arrived.
manvi with her frndz came out of the airport.
and just spotted her frnd's sister who is getting married.
Manvi : trisha !!!!!!!
(they went and hugged each other.)
Trisha : O h my goddd...Manvi...
Tumhe pata Esha tum sab ka kab se wait ker rahi thi...
Bechaari aa nai paai...
Manvi : Hum sab bhi bahoot excited the tumlog se milne ko...!!!
Trisha : toh der kiss baat ki...!!
CHALO !!!
All the girl sat in the car in which trisha came.
Finally reached the house.
They got down the car and manvi sai in excited tone
Manvi : main SUper excited hu...Esha se milne ke liya...
Chalo jaldiii
hey went in and saw esha sitting with other girls and family members arround her.
Manvi : ESHAAA !!!!
Esha : Manviii !!!
(they hugged each other)
all the other frnds hug Esha.
Manvi : (teasing her) Oyye hooyyeee !!! Toh finally Wicket down ho gayya na..
Esha : Maanvi ???(shy)
Esha's mother came
EM : Arre manvi tum sab yaha...???(happy)
Manvi : Auntyyy !!! (elated)
Hugged her.
Manvi : Namaste aunty...Kaisi ho aap...
EM : Main toh bilkul theek hu...tum batao..
Manvi : main kya batao...
Ab aapki beti ne apne liye bakra toh dhoond liya..
Main bhi soch rahi hu...apne liye bhi dhoond lu...
Hahahahahaaa...
(esha pat her head lightly)

Crime branch building.
Virat : (instructing all the other inspectors)
Koi bhi Police uniform nai hoga..i want you all to in casual dress
Kisi ko bhi shaq nai hona chahiye...CLEAR ??
all the inspectors : Yes Sir..
Virat : Get to work..Now !!

Andheri
zoom to a house.
busy people in house ,getting ready
in bride's room.
Esha was sitting on chair before mirror
and manvi with some other girls dressing her the best way they can
Manvi : Tum aaj kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho...
dekhna..jiju jaise he tumhe dekhinge na...Ek lattuu ho jayenge..
Esha : Acha ji...
Manvi : Haaa jii...
Hahaha..
they laugh out loud.
then brides mother comes to the room,as she saw her daughter in brides dressed up
looking beautiful,she was in tears
Asha : maa..kya hua..
Mother : kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho..
Manvi : Lage gi kaise nai...Aaj akher iski shaadi jo hai..
Esha : ma...manvi ne mujhe taiyaar kiya...
Mother : (looks at manvi)Beta...tum kitni achi ho...
Bahoot bahoot shukriya..(in tears)
Manvi : plzzz aunty..yeh emotional drama na..mujhe nai aata...toh plzz rona matt..
warna main bhi ro dunga...
agar aapko kehna he hai toh kuch aashirwaad de jiye na...
ke mujhe bhi ek acha raj kumar mile...wegera-wegera..!!Haha
Mother : Main toh bass itna kahungi...ke ek din tumhe bahoot pyaar kerne waala ladka mile..
Jo tujhe hamesha khush rakhe...
Manvi : yeh hui na baat...kya dailouge mara hai !!
wah wah...
Mother : ab yeh sab chod..aur jaaker taiyaar ho ja...der hori hai...Jaa
Manvi : main bass abhi gayyi aur abhi aai...
Manvi left to get ready
She got ready and came out of dressing room.
she was wearing this lehenga.

Manvi : guyzzz...chalo chalo..!! bahoot der ho rahi hai...baraat function hall pahonch gayyi hai..
Trisha : ha ha...chalo !!!
they all left to the function hall

the function was located in west colaba,just beside a a mall..
the shaadi was on high peek..every one was enjoying

Now here comes fortuner car, from the driving seat,virat got down,
he was in his causal jeans and shirt with 1st 3 button was open and a white blazer on that
his guns were hidden at his waist tunked in his jeans.
and from beside seat and back doors.other men got down,and they all were also wearing casual
he secretly signaled them and they went seperately to thr spots
virat went into the mall.
he was roaming randomly
thr he spotted a guy who was staring at him,he found him weird
he ignored him and left.still he had a doubt in his mind
from virat's gang,2 more guys(ashish and vidhyut) were present in the mall.
from that two 1(vidhyut) was standing before a shop in mall which was not yet opened,thr he saw 3-4 men and also that Reddy exchanging briefcases
vidhyut contacted virat through his bluetooth and said
Vidhyut : Virat..reddy yaha hai Mall mein kuch gadbad hai... !! i m sure
Virat : kaha per ho tum ??
Vidhyut : 4th floor
Virat : I m coming
Virat went up stairs quickly ,through excelators
As he reached the floor and went up to that shop,he and vidhyut were about to enter that shop ,when suddenly they heard fire alarm

the public got panic and started to run..and in that rush they couldn't find who got out of that shop
Virat : i m sure yeh unka plan tha...
Vidhyut : ab kya kare...
Virat : letz go..!!!
while running,he told
Virat : unlog ne pehna kya tha
V : black suit !!
Virat : Neeche chal ke dekhte hai...I hope woh log gayye nai honge...

Now in Function hall.
they shaadi went well..all the rituals were done happily
manvi with all others was showering flower petals on the couple.
suddenly her phone rang.
Mama was flashing on screen
she quickly excused herself and went out and answered
Manvi : hello mama..
mama : Kya ker rahi hai...?? (bluntly)
Manvi : mama..main meri dost ki shaadi mein hu...jaise he shaadi ho jayegi..main yaha se nikal jaungi..
Mama : pata nai kya ker rahi hai...!!! huhh !! (he disconnected the call)
Manvi : (took a deep breathe)
she was turning and going back in the hall,when she saw huge crowd rushing out of the mall beside.
she didn't payed attention. and went back.
Virat with his gand came out of the mall.
when virat saw a group of reddy with 3-4 people secretly getting into the function hall.
And they were wearing black suit.
Virat : Iss taraff !!!
They all ran in to that function hall.
those who entered the hall they quickly came at the back of the hall,and one of them said to other
Reddy : abbe jaldi ker na...
2nd : Ha ker raha hu..(he was emptying drugs from one briefcase to one bag
from Virat's gang some went inside to check and some along with virat quickly came at the back of the hall.
Virat as he saw them
Virat : STOPP !!! (Pointing gun towards them)
the man who was putting those drugs took out his gun and was about to shoot virat,before that Ashish shot him and he fell
now only Reddy was thr standing
Virat : Khel khatam !! (smirked)
All virat's gang members came back they covered reddy from four side.
Virat : Ab kaha jaye ga !!
Karan : Seedha uper..
Vidhyut : Virat NO...Hum is arrest kar lenge...
Tu kuch kerna matt !!!
Reddy : dekho tum log mujhe arrest kerlo..yeh theek keh raha hai
Virat : (loaded his gun)
vidhyut : virat rukh ja...!!!
Virat : iske paas kitna paisa hai !! yeh hum andaaza bhi nai laga sakte..
ek se ek wakeel ko khada ker dega...!!
Reddy : main ???...Hahaha...tu bhi kya pehchaan ta hai mujhe...!!
tum log mera kuch nai bigaad sakte...
Asish : aaj isse marenge..toh at least ek mujhrim khatam ho jaye ga..
vidhyut : pagal ho gayye ho tum log !!!
Priya : nai..isse maar dena chahiye..
Kill him !!
Reddy : tum log yahi khelte raho...tum log yeh jaante nai ho..Ke abhi yaha kya hone wlaa hai..
all were shocked
Virat : Kya karega ???
Reddy : Hahahaa(evil laugh)
Virat was about say something ,when they people screaming
Aaaggg !!! Aaaggg !!!!
Virat : (didn't wait a moment)
(he shoot reddy 1,2,3,4 times.)
All the gang members were shocked.
Virat : REDDY KHATAMMM !!!
Again they Heard
Aaaggg !!! bachaooo
They all went to the front area..
They saw all the people rushing out of the function hall..
some of the gang members went inside to rescue
almost People were out of the hall except one...
Manvi's friend
Frnd : Manvi kaha hai...
They heard her from inside
Bachaaaooo !!!!

Manvi was panicking ,standing inside ,surrounded by the fire.
she can't do anything
she was crying
Bachaaaooo !!!
virat heard her.
Virat : ander koi hai ???
He quickly rushed inside.
Manvi was coughing badly,as she was inhaling that fire smoke
Manvi : Bachhhaaaooo !! (coughing)
coughing
coughing...(she faints and fall down)
Virat came in...he couldn't see clearly, as fire was increasing
and smoke was all around
he saw a girl lying on the floor
she rushed to her,
he turned her face and saw her.
for once he felt "Beautiful"
then next moment he took her in his arms ,got up and took her safely out of the function hall.
as manvi's frnd saw her,they quickly rushed towards them
frnd : Kya hua isse ???
Frnd : yeh thek toh hai ??
Virat : Dekhiye...yeh theek hai...i guess smoke inhale hone ki wajah se unconscious ho gayyi...she'll be fine
(he thought to control his feelings)
(he placed her safely on the bench and left from thr.)
virat while leaving he turned and saw her,he felt something strange in his heart
he turned back and left. karan saw that and smile.
when virat came to the gang members
karan asked
Karan : Wicket gira kya..??
Vidhyut : ya seedha bowled ho gayya...?
Virat : (glared at them)
Kashi : chodo na yaar...
jis din iska wicket down hoga na...uss din yeh duniya hil jayegi..
All of them laughed
except virat..he just stared at them
Virat : ho gayya ??
ab chale...chal ke hume cirtificate lena hai..
Vidhyut : Suspension !!!
Virat : (smirked) sirf ek hafte ke liye suspend honge yaar...
chalta hai...aakher iss sheher ko hum jaise bandon ki sakht zaroorat hai...
Kam se kam Reddy toh marr gayya..!!
Ashish : aur Yash sir ko kya bolega ???
Virat : main sambhaalunga yaaar !!!!
don't worry !!
they all smiled at each other.

That's it guyz..
hope u all liked it
plzzz comment..

Writer : Sarah.

Edited by princess_sara - 13 years ago

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Interesting ! PM please 😊

Hot N handsome Inspector falling for a just grad bubbly girl 😳

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kajenvirman

@kajenvirman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

thaanks for the PM
its great!
liked that he saved her from the fire
please continue soon

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sara ifteqar

@princess_sara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hey guyzzz !!
i Promise that It's Losts more to come...
Plzz keep reading...
u guys can't imagine how i m going to turn the track.

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ayeshapasta

@ayeshapasta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

why didnt u make it longer :/

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guess :p

@Innocent.angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

aws0me update
thanx 4 da pm

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

FORCE!

Great idea, love your

style of writing.

i can see it happing infront

of my eyes.

But please don't let Maanvi die

in the end. It's the only thing that

I didn't like about the movie.

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Hooria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Aww amazing concept Force is a beautiful film and
I jus love virat's character i cant wait til him and manvi meet
Please continue soon and please pm me when u do

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