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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#241

Amazing update..swayam convincing sharon,really cute.swaron bike ride waiting for it

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#242

This is serene, really soothing stuff, you know that? I was reading, and I was de-stressing, reading this story regularly might just help me a little with my own skepticism, you know? Anyhow, I must tell you, I lurve the rains. I quite often find myself confused as to what/who it is that I actually 'love', so I refrain from using the word, as much as my anti-lingo nature allows. So, to say that I have begun to love this story won't but untrue. =)

You are this brilliant writer, bud. It just shows. And yeah, when your work's appreciated, it IS always nice, as a a matter of fact.

Thanks for the PM.

Cheers,

Kankshita

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bhavya kimshuka

@kimshu

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#243

awesome update
after reading ur update even i am waiting for the rains to come so to enjoy them
luved ur update to the core

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#244

Oh Damn...this was beautiful again.Starting from little things-like Sharon unconsciously expecting Swayam to come to visit her everday,and feeling a little dejected at the thought of not seeing him for a day.

The part where Swayam commands her,and then gently makes her 'kiss the rains' again,like she used to,was beautiful.They seem to be trying to mitigate their own grief by simply finding something to distract themselves.Which,in this case,would be-helping each other out.But that way,they're unconsciously embarking on a strange emotional odyssey with each other.

Love.:)

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#245

You know I'm not wrong when I click on "like" even before I've began reading it. You never disappoint me.

There's quote i really like:
"Some people feel the rain. Others just get wet." - Anonymous.

A truly brilliantly put feeling in just a couple of simpleton words. Just like you did.

You know the smell of wet soil that lingers in the air after the rain stops and you look out to see tiny droplets falling from the fresh and bright green leaves, making you wonder just how beautiful nature can get - That's the feeling your writing gives to me. :)

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#246

amazing update thanks for the pm

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#247

thanks for the pm and lovely update :D

Nikki <3

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Sheherzade
You know I'm not wrong when I click on "like" even before I've began reading it. You never disappoint me.

There's quote i really like:
"Some people feel the rain. Others just get wet." - Anonymous.

A truly brilliantly put feeling in just a couple of simpleton words. Just like you did.

You know the smell of wet soil that lingers in the air after the rain stops and you look out to see tiny droplets falling from the fresh and bright green leaves, making you wonder just how beautiful nature can get - That's the feeling your writing gives to me. :)

I really don't think I'm worthy of that praise. And that is a really beautiful quote. It's all about perspective. And thanks for liking my writing. It's an honour.

P.S. I love the smell of wet mud!

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: -Sakina-
Oh Damn...this was beautiful again.Starting from little things-like Sharon unconsciously expecting Swayam to come to visit her everday,and feeling a little dejected at the thought of not seeing him for a day.

The part where Swayam commands her,and then gently makes her 'kiss the rains' again,like she used to,was beautiful.They seem to be trying to mitigate their own grief by simply finding something to distract themselves.Which,in this case,would be-helping each other out.But that way,they're unconsciously embarking on a strange emotional odyssey with each other.

Love.:)

Wow! Thanks for so beautifully summarizing this chapter. It's good to know that people get the essence of what you're trying to convey. Thanks a lot for that.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: Savage
This is serene, really soothing stuff, you know that? I was reading, and I was de-stressing, reading this story regularly might just help me a little with my own skepticism, you know? Anyhow, I must tell you, I lurve the rains. I quite often find myself confused as to what/who it is that I actually 'love', so I refrain from using the word, as much as my anti-lingo nature allows. So, to say that I have begun to love this story won't but untrue. =)

You are this brilliant writer, bud. It just shows. And yeah, when your work's appreciated, it IS always nice, as a a matter of fact.

Thanks for the PM.

Cheers,
Kankshita