FF~Na Judaa Honge Hum~prt.10_updtd_ 16.6.12_pg.38 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was really beautiful guys! I like the name 'BadiNChoti' productions.
Like the story a lot. but especially liked the temple scene... It is so filmy! I wish they would show such filmy, feel-good, aaaw moments more often! That temple scene was a really nice touch!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
very very nice update love ur ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
fabulous anu and shaqs really nice continue soon the next part love to see them together and priya in jeans and kurti 😍hayee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by kaviya10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnk you so much for all your love and support guies🤗🤗 filhaal my writer is busy updating her other FFs😆 will continue soon.. stay tuned
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely.. Superb.. I lv the way the story is heading towards.. <3 Pls pls pls.. I reqst u to continue asap..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
thnx for all your appreciation guies🤗 means a lot to both me n Shags... my choti hv not been keeping well... we will update ASAP... stay tuned... thnk you
Edited by Anamika163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry folks for being late.. but here's the next update hope u all enjoy... do leave yoour precious reviews😛

CB co-productions


Part ~ 3

His gaze was set upon hers, her eyes spoke about how she felt sans a word transmitted between them, it showed how much love was secured in them, though they were swollen and he knew she would have too gone for many sleepless nights like he did, she didn't dress today the way he liked in pastel shades of her net saris teamed with her bangles and wearing a light makeup but she tried to be the just opposite how he liked but that too brought a smile on his face as she still managed to look ethereal and beautiful... priya looked at his unruly hair and an ugly shirt tucked beneath, he was yet againback to his formals his eyes had dirk circles indicationg how he would have too spent sleepless nights all she wanted to do was embrace in his bear hug and tranfuse all his pain to her and see back that smile long gone back on his face... Ram finally managed to strike a convo. The situation seemed how it was before marriage with no topics to discuss but now there were words missing to start a convo. having loads to discuss and spill their hearts out...
r: kaisi ho?
p: main thik hoon.. aur aap?
r: hmm main bhi thik hoon
ram got up n progressed towards her..
r: u look different priya, bohot badal gayi ho
p: nehi toh... main toh pehle jaisi hi hoon… takes a pause n utter RAAAMM

there was a sudden sparkle in Ram's eyes hearing his name from her mouth. Unknowingly his lips curved into a smile which was more peaceful than finding an oasis in the desert

p: so wht r u doing here?? Aur who bhi is waqt?? Office nehi jana apko?
r: haan... jana toh hai... par pata nehi kuch adhura sa lag raha tha.. toh socha ki mandir ajau
p: toh abhi complete hua?
r: looking intently at her pouring all the love in his heart through his heart... haan hua na

Priya understood the underlying meaning of his words n lowered her eyes.

r: waise tumhe class nehi jaana?
p: hmm jana hai but abhi tym hai, toh..

Ram cuts in between.. can I drop u some where?

p: hesitating a bit… mmm I don't want to bother u
r: m not bothered priya.. lets go.. toh kaha jana hai??
p: apne breakfast kiya? Nehi na??

Ram was surprised at his wife's sudden query n damn she did knew him so well !

r: nehi.. office jake karlunga… tumne kiya?
p: ignoring his question… shall we sit somewhere for breakfast?? Only if it doesn't hamper ur schedule.
Ram smiled ear to ear n exclaimed: sure !


to be continued...

regds Shags n Anu🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this uppy is written by anu di hope u all lyke😊 it sorry for being late coz of me hope u'll enjoy it do comment😃 all credit to anu di for it
Edited by sammy_108 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu - THANK YOU SO MUCH. This is such a breath of fresh air after the horrible episodes lately.

Great convo between Ram and Priya and of course the unspoken words said it all.


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