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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: heydoc27

OMG!!!u r absolutely wonderful😊😊😊
u made my day😊thnks a lot😊
aww gaad d details to d T,n man 'my fair lady;, u hav jus made d movie extra special☺️
i mean superb post,from d queen of FFs😃😃😃
d whole era recreated..😊
mindblowing...😃😃😃
still searching for sum oda words,christ😊😊



Thank you...this movie is already very special. And thank for the abundance of emotis. ! 😳



Originally posted by: anu13


First of all, thanks for the Invitation dear.

And thank you Anu for taking the time and effort to post a really elaborate review.

So Audrey Hepburn (just saw the pic) is our Ashu's "first celluloid crush"...

And rightly so..she personifies style, grace and charm.

The way you have written how they were watching movie...you know sitting close together and Nidhi resting her head on his shoulder and he tilting his head on hers and enjoying the movie and so happy together...

Yes..closeness, comfort, companionship... they have reached this stage in their relationship.

Seeing Ashu so annoyed, hurt, uncomfortable, and how he doesn't want her to keep anything from him and disliking it immensely .

He cares too much, and right now is hurt and angry that she doesn't seem to want to share with him. Its always the way... sometimes you end up focusing on what your partner doesn't do more than what he/she does. And it causes feelings of bitterness and creates rifts. Only love and complete trust can help overcome this. And Ashu does trust Nidhi.


The massage...he feeling pampered and enjoying it was wow...
He certainly deserves it.

Noticed so many times how Ashu has changed and was being himself in Nidhi's presence and now himself feeling that he cannot live without her and how he cannot recall his old life anymore was so pure to read and the feeling was so heart-touching.

Yes the darkness and loneliness that was his life had been overtaken by cheer and light thanks to Nidhi. Why would he want to recall it anymore?


Loving Ashu being so protective towards his love feeling something wrong around his place
Yes AshMan makes his presence felt here! 😆

The way you described the decorations taking into considerations each and every thing...the posters, festoons and the lights...and they jelling so sweetly with the theme of the party was great.

Thank you. Descriptions are back-breaking. Glad you could picture it all.

The outfit of Ashu...OMG...so hawt and happening just imagining him so...
Yes definitely raw, potent and scorchingly hot!

Bravo to you again Lizz...the way you described everyone dressings from Sari, Mallika, Anji to Nidhi...mind-blowing.

Thanks again for being so lavish in your praise. 😳

And I think another great surprise from Nidhi is bringing back his childhood buddy, Sanju, again in his life...the "nirmal anand" touch is nice...

Yes Khubsoorat is from the era and one of those simple, sweet movies from a genre that seems to have disappeared totally.

Seeing Ashu jaw-dropped can think how outrageously sexy Nidhi might be.

She's a little OTT here, outlandish, garish, loud like the outfits then were. Only someone as sexy as Nidhi could carry it off.


Hey great our Ashu also dancing on the tune "you are the one I want" amazing... Yep, everything is so infectious as I am also dancing...did you see me Lizzie dear😆.

😆 Glad you could feel the spirit of the party. Everyone put on your dancing shoes, and dance away your blues!

You really know where to stop...but didn't feel sad for it today...as you gave such amazing, lengthy, beautiful. lovely, and many more in the list, updates

Thanks again Anu!
Last, but not the least, thanks for all the YT Links for helping us enjoy it to the core, which helped a lot in understanding and cherishing on the importance of every moment...and thanks for making my day.

you are welcome and I hope you liked all the songs I chose. 😳
Thanks! 🤗

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Originally posted by: -AnaRoy-

Hi... So, you finally did it.. awesome..
it was really tuff as you said... m a bit busy.. will read it again and msg you.. :D



Well after such a tough update, I expect some detailed reviews here. 😳 Waiting!


Originally posted by: Blushsarika

First of all the invitation - its my jaan's birthday- soo...sweet.
P.S.-...and hope he does too! - good joke.

Yeah..Nidhi is wondering how the normally staid Ashu will take it. Armaan has probably warned her that Ashu might not be exactly delighted, but Nidhi still insists on doing it her way. ANd she succeeds.

Part one -

Nidhi sitting on the couch closer to him . That part was so romantic. Ashu feelings was described beautifully.
Thanks..yes, they are deriving so much comfort from each other now.

Ashu was so hurt when he got to know that Nidhi is hiding something form him.
But nidhi was clever enough to understand his annoyance and handled the situation very well.
She knows very well how to calm him - shoulder massage and finally the kiss - with this how can he remain angry at her.

Yeah..Nidhi certainly knows how to calm him.. 😆 Who would be able to resist a free massage and that too from the woman you love?

I liked this part when she asks him do you trust me and he says I trust you .

Yes..mutual trust is so important when in love...it can make or break a relationship.

it has been so difficult for Nidhi to hurt him so much that too on his birthday.

She was doing it for the greater good, she wanted to keep it a surprise so he would have no choice but to go along! 😆

In part two- all the decoration was described beautifully , Ashu looked so hot in his costume
You will discover just how hot in the next update when we examine Nidhi's reactions to him.

It has been a great moment for Ashu ,he met his very old friend Sanju.
Nidhi must have searched him and invited him too that was so thoughtful of her.

Yes...It was Nidhi's idea to bring Sanju back, but it was Armaan who actually contacted him and persuaded him to come.

His eyes was searching for her only and when he saw her his expression described superbly.

Of course, he wanted to find her ..she who was responsible for the entire setup and thank her properly for it! 😳

lizzie,you must have worked a lot in selecting the songs. All the songs were really nice.
Loved them

Thank you. They were easy for me, cause I've grown up listening to these. Songs from that era have a better recall in my book.

Thanks for the review Sarika!



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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
heya Riya :-):-) first of all THANK YOU for the two magically beautifully nostalgically written chapters...you really outdone yourself this time..

Standing ovation from me...:-)

this time i wanna try and review it..but the thing is I like every single part so it gets hard writting all of it but i'll try...

firstly i loved the invitation... JAAN that made me go awww..awsome invitation...than the movie it created a romantic atmosphere..i havent even heard of that movie but now i'm definately gonna try finding it :-)...nd thankx for the YT links :-)...

Than the massage..it created a hubby wifey atmosphere it was cute...and the kisss awww ashu can never get enough of her...i'm sure he'll get a birthday treat after the party :-P..

I love how ashu is soo possesive about her,he couldnr stand the fact that she was hiding something from him...i love that side of him..his one amazing guy i tell you...I'm also in love with him...hehehe

Than the protective ashu with his spade hehe that was cute...

and what can I say bout the party..no matter hiw much i say it won't be enough...i know you put alot of effort and time into it and we all really appretiate it :-)...

WOW all the details were sooo well described..i actually felt like I was also at the party...all the credit goes to you for that...than Armans costume hahaha i could imagine how he looked...but the icing on the cake was imagine or infact seeing our ASHU in his costume wow i was inlove with it i just closed my eyes amd saw MB..j coild picture every single thing...

I could just run and give him a beeeg hug if he was infront of me in that costume..hehe..handsomely irresistable...

Ahh and the way you described nidhi and her costume.. just ooolalala...haha i dnt knw how ashu resisted the temptation...

And how can I forget the amazing choice of music all the songs were sooo right for the moment...

I hope I didnt leave any part out...i'm not good at writting reviews..but you deserve a LONG review after giving us these beatifull chapters

to sum it all up..I LOVED every single moment in both chapters...lovely..adorable..cute...sexy..beatifulll...magical...funny...nd the list goes on nd on...i have to save some word for the next chapters review hehe

Beeeg Hug lotsa love :-):-):-):-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Good post as usual, and in very detail, i can understand how much hard work involved behind this,so for this 👏 👏
And u know , what i like most ? u r so particular, u never forgot single detail,both part are exa of it, as during film watching , film selection se lekar scene, dialogue,songs, and ashni and after this in the party u did splendid job, wow ! decoration,every body's dressing style, DJ's song selection, every thing u described beautifully, tell me how ?
Now m curies to know what is nidhi about to say.. 😳 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
hey lizzie
i saw the songs...God i just love Honey Honey and i want you...those are the blockbusters🤗

and i don't know why but after reading the part, as i watch some of Pussycat dolls video...i could just imagine Nidhi in one jumper, looking as hot as them in Don't Cha...hehheehehe...i know i m getting crazy🤓

and need to ask a question: Had that in mind first thing but forgot to ask

It was like Ashutosh wasn't easy to disclose his relationship with Nidhi in the hospital yet and when later, Nidhi get to know about it...She also don't want to be any scene causer for him

so now, when the fellow doctors and interns are invited to the party, the open declaration of affection, doesn't Nidhi thought that he might not be liking that????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Poojapange


Lovely updates...
Ashu felt something odd about nidhi like she hiding something personal things from him and thats why ashu felt that nidhi not trust him...but then nidhi comes n gives him massage to relief n ashu feel some relax...both spend quality time in each other's arms...
Ur description about whole party including house decoration,cloths,other activities like songs their music etc. was perfect as i watching this in front of my eyes...too good di...
The party was good..I m sure our Ashu looking hot in that 70s style cloths n also n Nidhi also...Ashu caught nidhi's cap n then their scarf dance was romantic...now me curious to know which song nidhi select for his darling ashu...
Thank you



Thank you Pooja. Yes, Ashu is uncomfortable that Nidhi isn't sharing this thing with him and that's making him angry, but at the same time he's controlling it because he doesn't want to spoil the moment. Also he knows it isn't right to be miffed because she as an individual has the right to her own space. But he can't help his feelings because he's so much in love.
Like I said the descriptions were a bit troublesome, but I had to go into details because I wanted to create the right picture. Yes..Ashu does look hot and I'll be describing him more from Nidhi's POV in the next update.

Originally posted by: Ashnian

heya Riya :-):-) first of all THANK YOU for the two magically beautifully nostalgically written chapters...you really outdone yourself this time..

Standing ovation from me...:-)

Thanks Naila! 😳

firstly i loved the invitation... JAAN that made me go awww..awsome invitation...than the movie it created a romantic atmosphere..i havent even heard of that movie but now i'm definately gonna try finding it :-)...nd thankx for the YT links :-)...

You are welcome. And My Fair Lady is a must watch!

Than the massage..it created a hubby wifey atmosphere it was cute...and the kisss awww ashu can never get enough of her...i'm sure he'll get a birthday treat after the party :-P..

How many more birthday treats does he need? He's had a bonanza so far! 😆


Than the protective ashu with his spade hehe that was cute...

Yes..the protective Ashu who wants to keep his baby safe 😳

WOW all the details were sooo well described..i actually felt like I was also at the party...all the credit goes to you for that...

Thanks for saying that Naila...I really wanted all the readers to be immersed, and feel as though they are all at the party. Hence the invite. I'm glad I could achieve that objective!

than Armans costume hahaha i could imagine how he looked...but the icing on the cake was imagine or infact seeing our ASHU in his costume wow i was in love with it i just closed my eyes amd saw MB..j coild picture every single thing...

I debated about his costume a lot..with myself. And then decided that I wanted to see him in a black shirt. He looks hot in black!

Ahh and the way you described nidhi and her costume.. just ooolalala...haha i dnt knw how ashu resisted the temptation...

Yes..he's just so hormonal right now, he's waiting to gobble her up!

And how can I forget the amazing choice of music all the songs were sooo right for the moment...

Thanks dear. Like I said before..I grew up on these songs, hence it wasn't that difficult.

I hope I didnt leave any part out...i'm not good at writting reviews..but you deserve a LONG review after giving us these beatifull chapters

Awww... your review is just great! And I love anything that you guys write about my work. Makes me feel happy.

to sum it all up..I LOVED every single moment in both chapters...lovely..adorable..cute...sexy..beatiful ...magical...funny..
Beeeg Hug lotsa love :-):-):-):-):-)

Hugs to you too, sweetheart! 🤗




Originally posted by: croziaxx

Good post as usual, and in very detail, i can understand how much hard work involved behind this,so for this 👏 👏

And u know , what i like most ? u r so particular, u never forgot single detail,both part are exa of it, as during film watching , film selection se lekar scene, dialogue,songs, and ashni and after this in the party u did splendid job, wow ! decoration,every body's dressing style, DJ's song selection, every thing u described beautifully, tell me how ?
Now m curies to know what is nidhi about to say.. 😳 😳



Thanks dear, I try to stick to details as much as I can, because I hate leaving loose ends. But with so many angles in the story I'm bound to forget something and my faithful reviewers and readers keep reminding me time and again! Thanks to you all for making this FF reach this far.

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey lizzie
i saw the songs...God i just love Honey Honey and i want you...those are the blockbusters🤗

It was like Ashutosh wasn't easy to disclose his relationship with Nidhi in the hospital yet and when later, Nidhi get to know about it...She also don't want to be any scene causer for him

so now, when the fellow doctors and interns are invited to the party, the open declaration of affection, doesn't Nidhi thought that he might not be liking that????



SO glad you enjoyed the songs. You must listen to Abba, its very hard to dislike them. And Grease was a super hit movie, a cult classic of its times.

To answer your Q..well, Ashutosh was never reluctant to own up to the relationship, nor is he embarrassed by it. Didn't he tell the Dean upfront that he's in love with Nidhi and hopes to marry her? Yeah they don't want unwanted attention like it happened in Rishi's case where gossip mongers were speculating that Nidhi getting off easily for being rude to a senior doc was a direct result of her closeness to Ashu. Nidhi does not want Ashu's name to be dragged in the dirt because of her, and Ashu of course, being a man of integrity does not want to be accused of nepotism just because he's in a relationship with Nidhi. He values his profession a lot, and would not want to act unfairly or unjustly in any way. Had Nidhi not been right in pointing out Dr Malhotra's mistakes..I doubt Ashu would have been so lenient towards her.

So inviting his friends from KGH wouldn't be wrong. Everyone knows about them, although they haven't declared it out loud..its understood. And they maintain a decorum at work, that everyone respects. She has only invited those people very very close to him, because she wants him to be surrounded by people he cares for. So only those with whom Ashu has a personal equation are there. So don't think Ashu will be upset. Though he might be a little embarrassed at Nidhi's openness and her candour in declaring her feelings, but then again this is a party where everyone is supposed to let their hair down and have fun, even the most serious of people. So Ashu will play ball eventually. Hope that answers your Q.
Thank you Ana!

Edited by LizzieBennett - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
it does answer it Lizzie
so thank you for explaining the facts dear...and now, i m more looking up to the next parts...I have a feeling that its gonna be so much fun...

i had nothing to do today so i went to your first post and read all the parts and have a gala time, i must say...

and then the one thing i noticed...that how carefully you keep in view the tinniest details which you have mentioned in earlier posts while writing a new one...you are a remarkable writer and i so love you for sharing and writing this FF for us...🤗 ...a big hug your way

UPdate super soon please...🥳 cause its party time

and SORRY for bugging you too much with my posts...i had that doubt so needed to ask
Edited by cool_SK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: cool_SK

it does answer it Lizzie
so thank you for explaining the facts dear...and now, i m more looking up to the next parts...I have a feeling that its gonna be so much fun...

i had nothing to do today so i went to your first post and read all the parts and have a gala time, i must say...

and then the one thing i noticed...that how carefully you keep in view the tinniest details which you have mentioned in earlier posts while writing a new one...you are a remarkable writer and i so love you for sharing and writing this FF for us...🤗 ...a big hug your way

and SORRY for bugging you too much with my posts...i had that doubt so needed to ask



Thanks Ana..and of course I'm not bugged! In fact, I'm flattered that you thought so deeply about this and came up with a very relevant doubt.
About the little details, it does get hard to remember every little thing..In fact, I too have to go back and read the earlier chapters to ensure I don't make a mistake!
Phew! Never thought FF writing could be so much work!
But thanks for the words of appreciation, dear! This is what makes all the work worthwhile! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett




but please that dono updates saath mein karna
pleaseee




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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
OK again i m making a post to bug you...
I was making an Mohika siggy and just as i went through you fic, the best line i got to explain them, i copied it...so sorry for not asking but that is what i did and here is a siggy specially dedicated to u n your wonderful FF...



i really want everyone who love your fic to promote it as its one of the best written fics i read so far as i mentioned earlier...

🤗

PS: thats not buttering dear...its genuine thoughts and ever so original...
Edited by cool_SK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
That was a wonderful piece of writing, LizzieBennet! Having grown up in the 80's, I must say that the songs you selected for the party were absolutely spot on! 😃Ever since I discovered your posts, I simply cannot bear to watch the disaster that the actual serial has become😔.
You have created a wonderful story and I admire you for the tiniest details you include; in this case the way the room was decorated, the stage, and of course their costumes. You have explored their feelings and thoughts and made them so real and believable. And what is wonderful is that every scene is fresh and full of possibilities!!! As a writer you probably want to get to the end of the story as fast as you possibly can, but without these details the story is incomplete!!
Please keep writing and once again I really think that you ought to take this up professionally.

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