IPPKND SS:The Love Story on Page 3 (COMPLETED)

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Nina

@SavyDobrev

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#681

phewww just caught up with all the parts and i love the whole idea/feel of it and im loving the way your shaping it ! Im actually gonna try printing the recent updates and reading them at Uni or something. they were so good !

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#682

interesting story... :)
wonder who is d source...

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#683

Navin, that was one good below the belt for Kunal.Thank You! For the sarcasm dipped invitation! Khooosiii I Love YOU!!

The business man cldn't give a blow..what a Luknowi babe gave.Brilliant!!

Ab sawal yeh hai...ki who is the informer???

This was a great update...the confrontation between two egoistic men.

I still appreciate the change which u got in ASR.

Ash.

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Rachel

@FFFan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#684

did i mention chap 6 was totally awesome..i loved tat writing style of urs..overall a brilliant ss.

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#685

You are absolutely amazing!! How funny, first the page 3 article and then the written invitation! I loved it. I am laughing my head off at the moment as I write this to you. I am anxious for more!

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gkoolans

@gkoolans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#686

no end at all..u SIMPLY CANNOT STOP WRITING THIS SS...make it an FF...it is needed...we need more of kunal roy's character to be established and ARHI love to shine

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#687

LOL! Loved it !!

UGH .I cant wait for the next one :D :3

LOL.I laughed at that too!

Thanks for the PM!

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savvz

@savvz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#688

khushi is a firebrand... she is awesome... :)

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MARYAM

@barun_lover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#689

wow awesome update

will u reveal about that mysterious sourse ? because iam really curious to know who is it

arnav convo with kunal ,brilliantly written

last but not the least ,khushi send invitation card to kunal .impressive move by khushi

why r u ending this SS ,i really love it

thanx 4 the pm

Edited by maryam_raza3409 - 13 years ago

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Ashi

@TheThoughtCrime

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Posted: 13 years ago

#690

Thank you for the PM.

Really a riveting read. As much as I can speculate, I still don't have a clue as to who is the source. Mission accomplished girlfriend.😉

No critiques from me. Just sitting back and enjoying the ride.

Just loved the first few emotional chapters! And who doesn't like a fairytale wedding!😆

Keep 'em coming!

Ashi.

P.S: Just one minor critique. When someone is addressed as beloved it usually means that they have departed us. Hence you can use 'much loved' instead of 'beloved'. Just saying.

Edited by Dinarochka - 13 years ago