new fan-fic by me (being continued) - Page 15

Created

Last reply

Replies

414

Views

73.8k

Users

86

Frequent Posters

Athena90 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 20 years ago
di, plz continue! its wonderful!
Pachu.P thumbnail
21st Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 20 years ago
u r doin a gr8 job..plz continue soon
happe thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
Part 12

Next morning

Kripa wakes up and she finds a bouquet of roses and card lying beside her bed.

Kripa smells the roses and opens the card.

It reads like this:

Good Morning jaan. Love you. Yours only, Angad.

Kripa smiles and then gets up from her bed and and gets a bath and gets ready to come downstairs. She comes down the stairs and finds no one at the dinning table. Kripa looks around and still finds no one. Finally she goes and sits on one of the chairs and starts eating breakfast. Someone comes from behind and covers her eyes.

Kripa: Angad, please mujhe shoro

Angad: tume kaise pata ke mein hoon

Kripa: bas mujhe pata chal gaya, yaha koi aur nahin yo aisi harkat kar sakta hai

Angad: oh, I c

Kripa: did u already had breakfast

Angad: yah, I did

Kripa: thanx

Angad: kis liye

Kripa: for the lovely roses and a beautiful card

Angad: anything for my jaan

Kripa turns around and hugs Angad, and gives him a kiss on his cheek. Then they withdraw and they both sit next to each other.

Kripa: where is everyone?

Angad: wo maine mom-dad ko hamare baare main bata dia hai aur wo hum dono ko akele shor kar chale gaye

Kripa: wat?

Angad: mazak kar raha hoon

Kripa: thank god Angad, tum ne kuch nahi bataya

Angad: par Kripa, ek na ek din toh unhe batana hi hai

Kripa: I know Angad, but no yet, after Kartik's wedding

Angad: okay, Angad kisses Kripa's forhead and they both sit while Kripa finishes her breakfast.

Kripa: Angad, seriously where is everyone?

Angad: lets see, mom and aunty and bobby went to Mishti's house with shagun since the wedding is in 2 days. Dad, Uncle, and Kartik are at office, uncle is planning to move here

Kripa: wat, r u serious? How come dad didn't mention that to me

Angad: how could he? We have been out everyday that you and your dad hardly got time to talk.

Kripa: true.

Kripa: so wat are we doing today?

Angad: I have something special planned.

Kripa: really, wat is it?

Angad: that I won't tell you. You have to wait Kripa.

Kripa: fine

Kripa finishes her breakfast.

Angad: ab chalein

Kripa: ek minute let me go get my purse

Angad: okay, I'll wait in the car.

Kripa runs to her room and gets her purse and goes to the car. Then they both leave. Angad drives and stops in front of a beautiful cottage. The cottage is by itself, surrounded only by trees and greenery and a pond to the side of it.

Kripa: Angad hum yeh kahan aa gay

Angad: ek minute Kripa, pehle andar toh chalo

Kripa and Angad walk toward the cottage. Angad covers Kripa's eyes and then they both enter. As soon as they get inside, Angad moves his hands and Kripa looks around and is surprised and shocked at the same time.

This is it for now; I have to write next part to my other fan-fic. I'll conclude this one tomorrow.


goldi2 thumbnail
21st Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago

woww... looks like anjads definatly has planned sumthin real cute for krips lets wat it is..

GOLDI2

happe thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

ab mere jaan ne kya kiya? itna suspense! please batao what he has planned!



evee, all I can tell you is that whatever he planned is very special.
I'll post the next part tomorrow.
Infinitedreams thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 20 years ago
Thanx happe,really good I think he bought the house for kripa.
happe thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: muniza75

Thanx happe,really good I think he bought the house for kripa.



nice guess and that's part of it but there is more to it.
Angadzgirl thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
thanx happen.....very nice as uaually....

~sweta~
Neelu.RoX thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
please countiue!!!!!!!!! i am soo excited to see what happens next!!!!
neha9 thumbnail
21st Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 20 years ago
oh that was soooooo cute! i loved it... cant wait till the next part. Cont soon! 👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: kavitha_r · 6 months ago

Previous Parts Part 6 Siddhi and Khushi reached Delhi after a long train journey. The organizers had arranged their stay at a luxury hotel....

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 9 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: SilverBell · 3 months ago

My Stories And Future Stories Links Here

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Priyogita · 1 years ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".