OS, discontinued. - Page 10

Originally posted by: chillygirl

It's the darkest thing I hav ever read and I don't know but just hate arnav in this OS. Poor khushi. Feel for her a lot

Originally posted by: Banginbengali

Eviffie how are you!!??!! Hope your doin good...n Im good sweety! how r u??WOW dark much!!??!! Very much😉Lol...I usually hate readin dark writings...but your writings are just to bloody good!!👏 Awn! Thank you!!

Arnav seriously made me wanna punch him in this one lol!! Such a rude/mean lil person...instead of showin his love through care...he shows it by bein rough!! Hhmmm.. yeah,.. I know...

Poor Khushi loves him...but hes just to bloody mean n thick headed...uggg!!😕 What a proposal Arnav seriously...instead of slammin her...n showin her through hunger...learn some love words...goodness!! yeah, but he is afraid that she would reject him, that's why...

The forest scene...just made my eyes see red😡...Arnav if you want her that bad maybe love n tenderness n care would do the trick...stop showin her lust you greedy lil person...okay Im done fumin...so he took her to the mandir...!!!😕 wow! he made you that angry! yes, he took her to the mandir...

Eviffie what can I say beautiful OS...very dark but your writin as usual superb!!!⭐️ Thanks so much for the PM! Thanks for liking it and as always, you know how much I love your long comments! And don't mention it!

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

''Haffie!!! Haffie!! Haffie!!!'' *Antu is screaming and running in circles*😆 Antu! Antu and cookies!!! 😆


Gosh,this is by far the best O.S of yours!!!👏 I have read it already 3 times,and I guess I will keep reading it in future!!!❤️😆 Oh wow! did you likes it that much!!?? 😳

What's with you and darkness hun?😛 Not that I don't like it,but all your male lead characters are 'Dark Devils'.😍 😈 Heheh, I really have no idea whats up with me and darkness😉

Why,why,why?? Why don't you write an ArHi FF like this??????😡 Please!!! *Antu is begging wid folded hands*Wow! Please dont beg sweety!!! Please write an FF with 'Dark Devil but Decent' male character pleeeaassseee!!!😃😃😃 I will see! but no promises!!!

Thanx for the pm!!!🤗Dont mention it sweets!❤️

Originally posted by: crazy44

* i am speechles ** eheh was it that good!??

yes, it was DARk, but you wrote it brilliantely!! arnavs desperate need for her was penned down amazingly!! thank you sweetheart!!! it really means a lot to me!!

i did feel bad for khusi,poor thing !! yeah i know... but bad stuff just happen!

it was amazing dear!! you nailed it <3 oh really! cool and thanks!!

and the poem , do i even have to say how much i loved it!! you are an amazing writer!! thank you thank you and love you'!!!

LOved it 👍🏼thanks! 😳