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Safiya

@ssafiyaa

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

Have i told u how much i love this story.. Love d role of d elements in bringing them togeda.. Love d way u write, how arhis felling's are put across for us too read... Its all a bit too amazing 😃

Emotional roller coaster, this chapter was... I felt khushi's anger and betrayal at being so misjudged by Arnav.. Felt Arnav's helplessness and disbelief in knowing that he had committed d biggest mistake of his life... Felt their pain and longing and love for each other!!!

For a second i thot that Arnav wud think he wudn't be able to repent for what he'd done and tht khushi wud be better off without him and that he shud just let her go... Thankgod he isnt tht self-sacrificing, glad he knows tht he wudnt be anythin witout her, that he needs her always... 😊

His prayer to God, to a higher power he doesn't believe in is heart touching, nd evn then he prays for her.. Asks nuthin for himself.. Just perfect!! 👏

Cant wait till the next update... Hope its soon.. 😊

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Love this sooo much!!! <33

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cantdoit

@cantdoit

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: ssafiyaa
Have i told u how much i love this story.. Love d role of d elements in bringing them togeda.. Love d way u write, how arhis felling's are put across for us too read... Its all a bit too amazing 😃

Emotional roller coaster, this chapter was... I felt khushi's anger and betrayal at being so misjudged by Arnav.. Felt Arnav's helplessness and disbelief in knowing that he had committed d biggest mistake of his life... Felt their pain and longing and love for each other!!!

For a second i thot that Arnav wud think he wudn't be able to repent for what he'd done and tht khushi wud be better off without him and that he shud just let her go... Thankgod he isnt tht self-sacrificing, glad he knows tht he wudnt be anythin witout her, that he needs her always... 😊

His prayer to God, to a higher power he doesn't believe in is heart touching, nd evn then he prays for her.. Asks nuthin for himself.. Just perfect!! 👏

Cant wait till the next update... Hope its soon.. 😊

And the award for the awesomest comment goes to you! LOL I love it when someone analyzes my writing and points out something that I hadn't noticed myself while writing. In this case, I hadn't noticed until you pointed out, that the way I initially wrote about how he was feeling, someone could have easily thought that he wouldn't have the guts to fight and would just let her go... but not in my story he won't!

Thanks a lot for this lovely comment. I am working on the next part. I'll update as soon as possible (as soon as a figure out how this mess can resolved so it turns out in a positive way, and it's realistic at the same time).

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cantdoit

@cantdoit

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: SweetFarwii
Love this sooo much!!! <33

Thank you!! 😊 Your love is much appreciated!

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bidz

@bidz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

you are so talented. awesome!

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salma

@Sallu-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

wow..

woow wow wow!

u kno u are one Hellova writer!!!1

hatts off to u !

that was fantastic ..mere brilliance!

and the VM exceptionally awesome.. fits smoothly with the OS..

feeling very moved by ur work! weldone!

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cantdoit

@cantdoit

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Sallu-
wow..
woow wow wow!

u kno u are one Hellova writer!!!1
hatts off to u !
that was fantastic ..mere brilliance!
and the VM exceptionally awesome.. fits smoothly with the OS..
feeling very moved by ur work! weldone!

Aw thanks so much!! Appreciate it. And thanks on behalf of 'therealnatasha' as well. She is the VM maker.

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laniland

@laniland

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

I loved the parts 1-4. Sadly I couldn't understand the dialogues for part 5 & 6 as its all in hindi. I'm not an Indian and I don't understand hindi. There were no english dialogues.