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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Before beginning, I would like to thank two people. Asma di for helping me in believing on what I was writing and cheering me up when I needed you


yup behan hai meri.itna tho kar hi sakthi hu.


Hehe, yes. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

And secondly, one of the most important people of my life now, Neha di. I can't believe we came so close in so less time. It seems like ages since I know you.



ypu are gud so everyone comes close to u soon

p.s i hope neha doesnt mind me commenting on this.
if so plz inform i'll edit it.


Very true di.
And I'm sure she will not mind it. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Thank you for cheering me up yesterday and making me realize that discontinuation is not the only way. Lol, all the readers owe you and Asma di one as I was in full mood to discontinue. :P


hume padna acha lagtha hai. nd i understand it happens wen such things happen.par ab tu samaj gayi nah.
anyways always der for u pari.


Haanji, bilkul ache se samajh gayi hun ab main.
Thanks a lot di ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

So, this chapter is for both of them.

Thanks for the dedication but u deserve it more.



You're welcome di.
Nahi this one was for you both only. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Chapter 4 : 'Living Your Dreams' -

It's amazing how someone can be hundreds of miles away from you, and the mere thought of them still puts a smile on your face! True Love and Friendship sets no boundaries <3!


Chapter name-superb

kya line hai.

yup i can know it through u shivs khushi,shaffi vaishu,asha nd many more here.hey i remeber all names but to lazy rto type it.

is ladki ki demand bhi tho katham karna hai.


Thanks di.
Hehe, sach mein. I made so many friends. 😊
Lol, my demands are just increasing, aren't they ? 😳


Originally posted by: asmaju

And they all hooted back with the Louisan spirit and with Kria also with them in each other's thoughts.



So now dey'll never hate her.
louians sprit i love it. kash aisa D3 mai bhi ho.


Yes, itna toh main confidently keh sakti hun ! 😊
I love this spirit too. Yes, sach mein. Kaash aisa hi hota ! 😳


Originally posted by: asmaju

They broke the hug and got back to practice. But Swayam didn't join them. So, that means Preeti was also not dancing and just watching them. Sharon saw him sitting in a corner looking at something far away. She excused herself and went over to him.



y is Swayam nt dancing. wow sharon noticed it.ab kya baat karenge yeh log.


Woh aapko pata chal jaayega - aagey chal kar. Agar nahi pata chala na, toh ask me, I'll pakka se tell you. 😳
Just wait and watch ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Sharon : You are a true friend.

Swayam came out of his day dream and faced her. He was a little shocked at her words but didn't show it.

Swayam : Hm, thanks.




wah sharon praising swayam(kitni achi hai yeh)

even i was shocked.



Lol, bhool gayi kya aap ?
I love to give shocks !! 😆


Originally posted by: asmaju

Swayam : Hm, thanks.

Sharon : Be frank and tell me one thing. Do you value Kria's friendship ?



yeh kaisa sawal hai.

abhi tho deka nah kitna value kartha hai woh kriya ki.


Sawaal jaise sawaal hai di ! 😳
Exactly. He values her a lot. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Swayam : What type of a stupid question is that. Of course I value it. In fact she's the bestest best friend one can ever have.


Wah i expected this answer from him.


Oh no, aaj kal main bahut jyada predictable ho gayi hun ! 😕 😛


Originally posted by: asmaju

Sharon : Ya, I see that.

Swayam : Mmm..

Sharon : And what was her dream ?

Swayam : To be a true rockstar.


ka koi questionair section chal raha hai ya quiz??

kitne sawal???



Joh samajh na hai samajh lo di ! 😛
Jyada nahi, bas thode se. 😳


Originally posted by: asmaju

Sharon : And what was her first step towards this dream ?

Swayam : The Weaklings ..

Now he understood what Sharon was trying to say. He just looked up at her.


abhi itna jaldhi samaj gaya.par mai abhi bhi confused hu isne yeh sawal kyu pucha.😕


Wait and watch di. Samajh jaogi di ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Sharon : Exactly. Swayam it was her dream. She made this team to live her dreams and also to fulfil yours. And believe me, she wouldn't like it much if she saw you sitting like this and refusing to dance. Swayam you just said that we'll prove her that we are just as good friends. So, can you complete her dream of dancing ? Swayam get up and join the rest and help Kria winning her dream. Dance .. for yourself .. for her.


abhi confusion tho gaya mere👏
wah sharon love u for these lines .yup pari nice dialog.


Finally door ho gaya ! 😆
I love her too !
Thanks a lot di ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Sharon's words inspired him and he realized that she was correct. He just smiled and nodded at her. He couldn't believe that it was the same Sharon but he kicked the thought away and decided to cherish his moments with her. Sharon went back to the practice and Swayam got up and went towards Preeti.


S it was from her heart.

so Swayam nd preeti are partners .

preeti ka cs de sakthi hai kya.



Exactly. Yes di, since Preeti ne Kria ki jagah li hai team mein, is liye Preeti Swayam ki partner hui. And yeah, main Preeti ka Cs de dungi agle chapter mein. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Swayam kept his hand palm open in front of Preeti. She looked up at him confused. He gave her a sly smile, took back his hand and sat right beside her.


practise karna hai na. so get up soon.


Lol, she's confused by the sudden change in his behavior. 😛


Originally posted by: asmaju

Swayam : Sorry for before. I know you must be sad. Meri wajah se tum bhi dance nahi kar paa rahi.

Preeti : No it's ok.

They share some silence. It was awkward and Preeti decided to break it.


😊


😳


Originally posted by: asmaju

Preeti : Swayam do you mind if I ask something from you ?

Swayam : Ya, of course.


hey no balna that na. does he mind???



Samajh jaogi jald hi no kyun nahi bola ! 😛


Originally posted by: asmaju

Preeti : Sorry if you don't want to talk about it. But can you tell me who this Kria is ? I mean I figured out that she is someone close, but I want to know her. And unluckily, I don't know her.



S u must have been der wen she was . She is charming.


Extremely charming. Her character cannnot be explained in words. She's the best. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Swayam ( giving her a small smile ) : Kria who insaan hai jisne iss college ko badal diya. Jisne hum sab ko badal diya.


S true. She is everything for dem.


Exactly. Infact agar everything se jyada bhi kuch hota hai na, toh woh bhi hai woh ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

That's all for now.


itna sa hi tha, i expected more😉
next update bada wala chayea.


Sorry di, but bilkul time nahi tha. 😛
I'll try. But I promise one thing - issey toh bada hi hoga. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Next update will be done on page : 88



isn't this too much pari.
itna chota update ka itna bada demnad??????


Lol di, abhi toh yeh bahut kam hai.
Sorry di, but agli baar bada update dungi aur badi demand ! 😛 😳


Originally posted by: asmaju

And next one's gonna be a surprise package for you all. All the SwaRon fans, get ready as the next update has something in store for them as well. Well to be true it's going to be a SwaRon update ! :P



acha its gr8 but bada wala update chayea hame.


Haanji di, I'll try my best.
It all depends upon time ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

KriYansh ' abhi a little later. Actually there's a lot of time before I reunite them. Like many chapters. As before that I'm going to show some part of the story from Kria's point of view as well and that's going to start soon.


kitna time chaye le le. but i got to be the best nd i know u'll do it..
jaldi shuru karo.


Abhi thoda aur time lagega. Like 2 -3 chapters more. Ya fir ever aur jyada. But yeah, I promise it will be good. ( At least I'll try for it to be good. ) 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Thanks a lot.

PM's will again be sent out in half - an - hour.

Take care and cheers !!


welcome.

s got them.

take care too


Hehe, acha hai. Waise half - an - hour se pehle bhej diye the maine ! 😛
I will di ! 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

Updated guys.

Do hit the like button and comment. 😊



thanks .like button sometimes doesnt work.
comment is expected. even i want it.




You're welcome di.
Yeah agreed, it doesn't. 😊

< Here ends Asma di special reply. 😊 >
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Posted: 14 years ago
aditi...i dont get pm fr dis ff of urs?????? though i receive pms fr the other two...n ur new id is also der in my buddy list...i just came across dis today...offlate m pretty busy wid my office n other stuffs...so didnt get tym check all dese,...but today i noticed it ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


i knw...bt its okk nxt update h na



Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


dn't wory aditi knw dat...n yeah lovly update






Originally posted by: asmaju



hmmm next update mai use sab dena padega.



Originally posted by: asmaju


D3 mai we can never expect anything.
but u can ask aditi if u want.




Originally posted by: asmaju


S she is way better nd i love it


Originally posted by: asmaju



Choota tha i agree.


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


yeah its nyc to see dem n mee too hope dat


Originally posted by: asmaju


S something is better than nothin.
S i wish too.





Originally posted by: asmaju


update soon s itna bada demnd deti hai na yeh.


Originally posted by: asmaju


me too want to see kria dance with dem.



Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


true...n i pray 4 u both ki aap dono aise hi raho 😃


I pray for that too di ! 😊




Originally posted by: asmaju


u replied nd she'll be happy for it.
agree with u.


Originally posted by: asmaju


wow neha u r inspiring.
s her tears are precious.
lovely comment.
agree with u.


Yes di, she is. 😊





Originally posted by: asmaju


s shaffy this was the smallest i never expected it would be so small.
par pg demand deka?????


Lol, well that's me ! 😳


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


meri b hai...(puppy face)


Of course di ! 😊



Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


yesss page demand itna big...badi demands bada ri h ye apni


Originally posted by: asmaju


aditi ka ff hai na.
D3 se no expectations . dey always break us.


Originally posted by: asmaju


par kya kare hame tho update chayea na.



Thank you both of you for your time and spamming. 😃
Aap donoin ke rehte main chahe kitni bhi badi demand de dun, woh complete hi ho jaani hai. 😳
Thanks a lot. 😊

< Soory haan, aur quote and reply nahi kar rahi, bahut time lag raha hai aur mujhe update bhi dena hai. Issiliye end mein common reply de dia. Sorry. >
Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww dat was soo sweet n ha tere liye kch b sweety...bt thoda sa taras kha lia kr hm par sply asma par...thoda demand km kr apni...lol 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

I will in 15 minutes. 😊


Originally posted by: D3FAN

great update nd thnx for da pm


Thanks a lot and you're welcome ! 😊


Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

its was so sweet! really luved it...


Thanks a lot di ! 😊


Originally posted by: geethapapi

awesome u have explained abt kria and swayam's friendship lovely

❤️


Thanks a lot di. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

pari plz update jaldi kar na.


Di, bas maximum - 15 minutes chahiye mujhe. 😊


Originally posted by: asmaju

aditi shivs has not yet returned from france. so her comment is pending.


Oka di and thanks for telling me, huh ! 😊 I was wondering ki woh kahaan reh gayi iss baar ! 😛


Originally posted by: sauravkathuria

okay 88 done do update now...pichla wala bahut small update tha is bar bada wala plz...


I will try my best bhaiya. 😊


Originally posted by: ruta

a-m-a-z-i-n-g...i'm running out of words to describe how beautifully you've written this update..there is power in your writing..the depiction of swayam's and kria's friendship was the highlight..:)...

kriyaansh forever...:):):)


Thanks a lot di ! 😊
Yes di, however hard CV's try but it is true : KriYaansh Forever !! ⭐️


Originally posted by: ArSha_Forever

Short But Good Update :)


Thanks a lot di ! 😊



Fifteen minutes - maximum. 😊


Originally posted by: The007Shivani

Loved the update thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply was on holiday and would comment more if I had time but need to catch up on a lot and the update was absolutely amazing

And disappointed in everyone now a days no one thanks me or gives me demands or shares their problems liked they used to and also all my old friends are no where to be seen after shakti left so IF I lost all my friends and I have only one close friend who talks to me everyday and one of my closest friends is in India.
I m forgotten now


Thanks a lot Shivs. 😊
Aw, you're welcome.
Arey koi baat nahi. Mujhe pata hai ki you were not there. 😊 So no issues.
Thank you. 😃
Oye !! Aisa nahi hai. And we've cleared this topic, isliye main dobarah se koi explanation nahi dungi ! 😛 Bekaar hi naatak khada hoga. As things are cleared now, I'd say only one thing - bhool jao sab kuch ! 😊
And remember, you're not forgotten. 😃


Originally posted by: achuAR

Awesome👏

jus read it nw
thanks a lot for the pm


Thanks a lot di ! 😊
You're welcome !


Originally posted by: ruta

loved this update..:):)..as i've told u always ur an an amazingly talented writer..so continue writing..kabhi discontinue karne ke baare nain sochn abhi mat..:):)..


Thanks a lot di.
I will for sure. 😊
Promise di, kabhi nahi sochungi ! 😊


Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

awsum awsum awsum aditi


Thanks a lot di ! 😊


Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

Devil, waiting desperately for the update...


Bas 10 minutes aur !! 😊


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


okk update krte hi pm krio okk 😊


Sure di. Bas 10 minutes aur ! 😊


Originally posted by: sukanyaa

aditi...i dont get pm fr dis ff of urs?????? though i receive pms fr the other two...n ur new id is also der in my buddy list...i just came across dis today...offlate m pretty busy wid my office n other stuffs...so didnt get tym check all dese,...but today i noticed it ...


Hey di.
Actually na, maine yeh FF jab shuru kia tha, tab woh Id banayi thi and tab aap usmein nahi the. Aap toh abhi add huye jab maine un donoin ke liye bhi yeh Id kar di hai. 😳 But I promise aagey se aapko PM's pakka pakka mil jaayeinge ! 😊


Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

aditi update karna plzzz


Bas 10 minutes. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awww dat was soo sweet n ha tere liye kch b sweety...bt thoda sa taras kha lia kr hm par sply asma par...thoda demand km kr apni...lol 😆


Lol, I'll try my best di ! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
kks...😊
but now i hav so much work left...i hav to go through another ff of urs...bt i cant miss it also...as it is my inbox is brimming with pending pms...but i cant miss it also...bcoz u write so well...
better i should start reading now...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hedyy u better gve us a long updatee
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aishasully

hedyy u better gve us a long updatee


Yeah, sure di ! 😊


Originally posted by: sukanyaa

kks...😊

but now i hav so much work left...i hav to go through another ff of urs...bt i cant miss it also...as it is my inbox is brimming with pending pms...but i cant miss it also...bcoz u write so well...
better i should start reading now...


Hm, hehe, there is not much work done with this one as of now. Only five chapters including the one I updated just now. It won't take you much time to complete reading this one. 😊



Updated, check it out. 😊
Do hit the like button and leave your valuable comments. 😃
Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

***

Hola !! Cmo estn ustedes?


< I know, I know - maine kaha tha ki half - an - hour mein update kar dungi, fir itni der kaise lag gayi. Am really sorry, but jaise hi maine update copy kiya aur paste karne hi waali thi, Light chali gayi. And you know na these powerc cuts - so long. Really very sorry. 😳 >


So, guys it's time for the last update before the new policy starts. Before beginning I would like to admit a few things. Well this chapter is going to be full on SwaRon with few flashbacks. I know you all must be like ' 'why not start with the story already?'. And I have an answer to this as well. 😳 Lately, I've been missing Kria and Weaklings ( basically the old days ) like hell and wanted to recollect all their moments. So, I'm going to show a big flashback. It must be boring, but it's all left with me now. And so, this part is dedicated to the one and only Shakti Mohan aka Kria Ghai. Thanks.


Also this part is dedicated to my two badi behnas - Shaffy di and Asmadi - who are always there by my side, supporting me and always fulfillingmy silly demands. Thanks for being there. 😊


Also, I hope to see some SwaRon fans this time, as I said this is going to be a SwaRon - full chapter.


***


Guys, before beginning I would like to give you the character sketch of Preeti as well as some people demanded for it. 😊 Here you go :

Preeti Rai Prakash : She is the new girl in St. Louis college. Actually she will be taking Kria's place everywhere except in the heart of people and in Rey's life. She will be the new dancer for St. Louis - Weaklings team. She will be the new A.G.S. of the college. She will be paired opposite Swayam - only in dance practice as Kria was his partner and now she is the new Kria ( only in terms of dance ). She is a sweet, pretty, simple and understanding girl. And the most important thing - with which you all must be confused - she is NOT in love with Rey or Swayam or any other D3 gang boy. I don't want to mess the story so I'll keep it simple. She is just an addition to their group of 12 ( They still consider Kria their member ).

If you people have any confusion now also, feel free to ask. 😃


Anyways, I'll talk later and let you read without further delay. Thanks again.

***

Chapter 5 : 'Reliving the Past and New Beginnings' '

When someone loves you they don't have to say it all the time. You'll feel it every time you think about them. <3

Swayam ( giving her a small smile ) : Kria who insaan hai jisne iss college ko badal diya. Jisne hum sab ko badal diya.

Preeti : Um, how ?

Background music : Yaaroin dosti '

Swayam : It was after New Year, we had a new admission in our college ' in our class ' in our lives. And it was none other than our Kria. On the very first day she messed up with Sharon *flasbacks* and everyone knew her for two reasons. First for being the only weakling answering back to a dazzler and that too the Diva ' Sharon. And secondly because she was seen on good terms with Rey. Well they both had lots of fight and Sharon played her pranks on Kria as revenge. Rey would always help her, but she would take him in a wrong sense'

Like this he continues and tells her about the 'Footloose Audition', 'Kria's challenge', 'The birth of Weaklings Dance team', 'Goa trip', 'Elections', 'Rose-day', 'Slap', 'Misunderstandings', 'AGS', 'Canteen incident', 'Kria's revenge', 'Karan sir's entry', 'Truth and Lie game', 'Kabadi', 'Sach ka saamna', 'ShaRey ladai', 'ShaRey patch-up', 'Karan sir exit', 'Nicole entry', 'Dance fest', 'Shivam entry', 'Party', 'New Year's eve', 'Swayam leaving', 'Manana', 'Party for Weaklings ' as Kria won a car', 'Exams', 'Elims' and 'the end of everything'.

When Swayam finished, he had tears in his eyes. Preeti was very silent.

Preeti ( whispering to herself but Swayam heard ) : She is so similar to my Kria in so many ways, and so different in other ways.

Swayam : Your Kria.

Preeti ( tears in her eyes as well ) : Yes, my Kria. But I know, she can't be my Kria.

Swayam : Because she is our Kria.

Preeti ( to herself ) : Nicole, Kria...?? Kaheen yeh. No ways, you are just thinking a lot about this isliye aisa lag raha hai. It's their Kria not mine. *sigh*

Preeti just nodded. Swayam broke the silence.

Swayam : I need your help.

Preeti : What help and why ?

Swayam : To fulfil Kria's dream.

Preeti : How ?

Swayam ( Tannu smile ) : Will you dance with me ?

Preeti ( smiling ) : Sure.

And they both headed to where the others were and joined the practice.

***

As it was partner dancing there were many close steps. Everyone could see the old 'do-anything-for-friends' Swayam back who was set in making Kria's dream come true. Everyone was happy to see him finally smile and participate. Everyone had seen Preeti and Swayam talking and so they thought it was Preeti who made him dance, but little did they know about Swayam and Sharon's encounter.

Everyone was so lost in Swayam's smile ( Haaye Tannu ki smile hai hi aisi ' kaatilana ! <3 ) and so they didn't notice the chemistry of Swayam and Preeti.

But there was one person who was getting uncomfortable watching them so close. Yes, it was Sharon. Our very own Sharon Rai Prakash. She was feeling sad seeing them together. As if she was being cheated. But she's confused that why is she having such thoughts ?!

Rey : Guys, just one last practice and then we'll call it a day.

Simmi : Can't we call it a day already.

Rey : No ways. Common Simmi, just last time.

But Sharon couldn't take it anymore. She really needed some time alone to figure out the meaning of her own thoughts.

Sharon ( pleading ) : Rey, I can't take it more. Please excuse me.

Without listening to his answer, she left. Everyone sensed the difference in her tone so they didn't make any effort to stop her.

Sharon just kept walking and stopped when she reached the beach.

***

Sharon sat down on the sand, her feet being touched by the waves.

Sharon ( mostly to herself ) : Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe ? God, why does this Swayam matters to me so much ? Kyun ussey related har baat se mujhe itna farak padta hai. I'm damn sure he's going to make me crazy over him. Wait a second, yeh kya bol rahi hun main ? Par agar yeh sahi hua toh ? Kaheen main Swayam se ' ? Nahi, aisa nahi ho sakta. No ways. I can't let this happen. I'll have to figh my feelings. This can't happen.

Sharon ( Inner voice ) : Kab tak Sharon, aakhir kab tak bhaagti rahogi tum Sachai se ?

Sharon : But I can't let the feelings I fought for so long, being shown now. It's too late.

Sharon ( Inner voice ) : It's never too late in love Sharon!

Sharon ( confused yet happy somewhere ) : Love ??!!

Sharon ( Inner voice ) : Yes Sharon, sach yahi hai ki tum Swayam se pyaar karti ho. Abhi bhi time hai. Apni feelings se mat bhaago and go get Swayam. Just go.

She got up and started pacing around.

Sharon : Yes, I love him. I love him dammit. And I know it. I always knew it. I love him. A lot ' But joh bhi maine uske saath kiya hai, who sahi nahi tha. Iss sab ke baad toh who mujhse nafrat karta hoga. I don't think I can face him ... But baat toh mujhe karni hi padegi. Par kahungi kya ? ' Urgh !! Why is all this so difficult ? Why can't I be modest with him ? Starting se hi apni feelings ko fight kar rahi hun ' No, not anymore. Kuch toh karna padega. Aise toh bas sirf mujhe aur ussey ' donoin ko pain hi mil raha hai ' No! I have to talk with him. Now.

Saying that she takes out her cell from her pocket and calls him. He was on his way to his room. His phone starts ringing and he gets a little surprised seeing the caller Id. He picks up the phone fastly as he knew what her anger would mean.

Swayam : Sharon ? Tumne mujhe call kiya hai ?! Kuch kaam tha ?

Sharon : Haan woh .. woh .. main woh ..

Swayam ( worriedly ) : Haan bolo Sharon. You seem stressed! Anything serious ? Tum theek toh ho na ?

Sharon : Haan main who *takes a deep breath in and then speaks in one go* I wanna talk to you. Meet me. Wrecked boat. Ten minutes.

Swayam : Sharon are you ok ?

Sharon : Swayam, *sigh* can you come ?

Swayam : Of course. I'll be there in ten minutes. You just relax and breathe.

And they hang up.

***

After ten minutes Swayam reaches the wrecked boat and sees Sharon pacing over there lost in her thoughts. He stops in her way to admire her. Right now ' with her scared and confused face, she was looking so cute. Unconsciously he starts moving towards her. And then he bangs in her bringing both of them back to present. Sharon was about to fall as she lost her balance but Swayam saved her by putting his arm safely around her waist. Sharon had her eyes tightly shut while Swayam was just looking at her face. Sharon slowly opened her eyes and looked at those deep eyes and got lost in them. They shared a long and intense moment of Look Look Hawa Hawa spell with the famous Pehle Nasha in background.

Swayam snapped out of the spell and looked away and loosened his grip on her waist. But he felt different today. He again looked up to search Sharon's face and see if she felt different. But what he saw shocked him. He saw the difference in Sharon herself. She was staring at him with a smile playing on her lips.
Sharon : Idiot, what are you doing staring at him ? Look away. Kya sochega woh ? Look away Sharon! Now. You're losing it girl, just look away !

But alas, her eyes were still glued to him. Swayam also returned the look for some time but again snapped out of it. But he saw the lost Sharon.

Swayam snapped his fingers in front of her eyes bringing her out of her day dream.

Swayam : Sharon, bolo kyun bulaya tumne mujhe yahaan ?

Sharon : Uh Swayam ? How about a walk ?

Swayam just looked at her surprised. But he was very happy that Sharon herself was saying all this. He didn't want to miss this opportunity with her and so he agreed.

Swayam : Yeah, why not.

They began moving around. Together.

Sharon slowly intertwined her fingers with his and kept on looking in front. Swayam was again surprised. He was very happy but he couldn't understand what Sharon was up to. He just kept staring at her. Sharon could feel his gaze on her.

Sharon : Fir chup ho gayi. Bol kuch Sharon. Say something. Yeh chapter toh tujhe hi start karna padega. Common open the closed book fast. Do something.

Sharon : *Sigh* Why do we always fight Swayam ?

Swayam was caught off guard with her question. He had not imagined something like this even in his wildest dreams.

Swayam : Uh, I don't really know.

Sharon stopped, turned, slowly freed her hand and looked straight in his eyes.

Sharon : I'm fed up Swayam. I don't understand why we just keep on fighting. I don't know why do that. But one thing I know for sure is that, I'm in no mood to fight any more. Why not we just forget the past and start fresh ? How about ' friends ?

She stretched her hand in front of him.

Swayam was shocked. He was totally surprised. He had not thought of something like this happening.

Swayam : Actually, I also don't know why we fight. But am sure, we can start fresh.

He grinned and shook his hand with hers. Sharon was really happy. She hugged him tight. Swayam smiled and hugged her back.

Sharon ( still hugging ) : I know, I've been the jerk from the beginning and look I'm sorry. But I was just lost in my ego and all. Sorry.

Swayam ( pulling back ) : Sshh !! Freindship mein no sorry and no thank you. Just forget the past. Let's just concentrate on the present and enjoy our new friendship to the fullest. What say ?

Sharon : Thank you. Oops!! I take that back. So what should we do now ?

Swayam smiled at her innocence.

Swayam : How about sitting here and discussing life ?

Sharon : Sure.

And they sat there chatting, laughing, having fun and enjoying each other's company.

Like this Sharon took her first step to open the closed book and was sure that she will cherish all the memories of their new bond.

***

That's all for now.

So how was it ?

Now I want bade-bade comments.

Do hit the like button and leave your valuable comments.

Also one more thing, with this chapter, we come to an end to Swayam's point of view. Thanks.

I will try and update soon, but don't forget the deal. From now on one update per week.

P.S. ' I'll update the next chapter only when I get 50 likes ( Since I sent 52 PM's ) and you reach page number - 110

P.S. - No quoting and spamming allowed.

( Asma di, Shivs, Shaffy di : This time you all take a rest. 😊 )

I'll see you soon with the next update.

PM's later : after an hour. 😊

Till then, take care and have fun. Goodbye, Hasta luego.

Cheers !!

- Devil.

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Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 14 years ago

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