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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 71

PRESENT TRACK


Written by me

In the morning

Armaan called Dr. kirti n asked her permission 2 cum back in vain. Kirti didn't accept his request n Armaan was disappointed. The whole day passed like that..

Ridz in Sanjeevani n Armaan attending the kids

Niki tried 2 get closer 2 Ammy but the kids were not ready 2 leave their Armaan bhaiya They requested Arman 2 play football with them but Armaan denied. He was missing Ridz like hell but later when Gappu requested him on the name of Ridz he smiled n agreed.

Neha kept an eye on Raj . She kept following him the whole day n Raj received a call in the eve from Niki He went 2 the terrace 2 talk

R: haan niki batao Arman kuch qareeb aaya

NI: nahin yaar yeh toh devdas ki tarah us Riddhima chudail ko har pal dimag main bithaya rehta hai. Kuch soojhta hi nahin hai isey.Lakh koshishon ke bawajood main uskey qareeb nahin ja pa rahi .Khair tum batao.How was your date?

R: date my foot Riddhima toh aisey aayi thi jaisey uskey upar mainey gun rakh ke ice cream khaney ka offer diya ho. bilkul chup thi ek lafz nahin bola, pata nahin kahaan gum thi.mainey usey kaha ki tum aur Armaan drive par gaye they toh woh gussa bhi hui lekin pata nahin kaisa gussa tha, us gussay main bhi Armaan hi tha. Woh thi merey saath par uska man Armaan k paas hi tha. Usey toh merey saath enjoy karna chahiye tha revenge ke taur par afsos woh fir bhi usi ke baarey main soch rahi thi. Main usay kasiey haasil karoon.Hamein kuch aisa karna hoga ki ab yeh donon alag ho jayen, bahut ho gayi choti choti chalein, ab kuch bada sochna hoga.

Neha was stunned 2 hear this .Now she understood their plan n was greatly annoyed. Raj thereafter cut the call a few minutes later and Neha escaped a bit before so that he may not see her.

It was evening, so Neha went home. Juhi saw her n asked the matter first she said no but how can she hide anything from her best friend- her mom, so she told her the matter. Rahul also joined them and they concluded that if Raj and Niki were not stopped on time this would lead to disastrous consequences. They have seen the broken condition of Ridz. They felt sorry for Ridz

Neha then called Karan and told him the matter.

Karan wanted to kill Raj but Juhi n Rahul calmed him down.

JU: ab hamein pehley Riddhima ko ye yaqeen dilana hoga ki yeh sab ek galatfehmi hai. Use yeh samajhna hoga ki Armaan Niki ke saath deliberately time spend nahin karta bas kuch coincidences aise ho gaye jiski wajah se use yeh lagne laga ki Armaan ke paas uske pyaar se zyada uski friend ke liye time hai.Main janti hoon kiArmaan Riddhima se utna gussa nahin hoga jitna ki Niki ki closeness riddhima ko disturb kar rahi hogi..

Written by Fatima di

Rahul: karan mairi baat daihaan say suno, yeh matter itna seedha nahi hai jitna dikhta hai. Ok main nahi chahta kay is baar hum say koi bhi galti ho. Is galti ka khamiyaza Armaan aur Ridhima ko bhugatna ho ga ok. So. humain buhat daihana say kaam karna hai.

Karan: mager humain karna kia hoga.

Juhi: unkay khilaaf solid sabot chahiye honge humain. Humara sab say pehlay kama hai kay Ridz ko raj say door rakhna.

Neha: aur yeh kaam mam main karoongi.

Juhi: Good. Mager yaad rakhna Raj ko aik baar bhi shaq nahi hona chahiye kay tumhain ya kisi aur ko is baray main pata hai. main nahi chahti kay wo chokanna ho jaye ok.

Neha: don't worry mom. Mainay ab tak jo supense novel parhay thay wo kab kaam ayin gay. Main aap ka best detective ban kay dikhaoon gi mama.

Rahul: aur Karan tumhain ridz ko busy rakhna ho ga. like tum us ko armaan ki batoon main humesha busy rakho gay us ko relies karwaoo gay kay wo khus nahi hai us kay bagair. Hum jantay hain kay wo dono adhoray hain ek doosre ke bagahir and they are dying to be together again mager is waqt baat izhaar karnay ki hai. In donon main say jis nay bhi pehel kar di baat ban jaye gi. Mager armaan say yeh kaam easily ho saqta hai ager wo yahana hota. Abhi humain bas Ridhima ko time time par Armaan ki halat ke bare mein realize karwana hai.usey yeh ehsaas dilana hai ki he really loves her a lot.Koi niki uske Armaan ko ussey door nahin kar sakti..

Karan: theek hai uncle.

Rahul: aur haan aik aur bata . tum khud Ridz ko drop karnay aur pick karnay jaoo gay jab tak Armaan nahi aata ok.

Juhi: haan yeh main bhi kehnay wali thi.

Karan: ji aunty uncle. Main aysa hi karoon ga. Thank u so much aap loog mairay bhayya bhabhi kay liye kitna kuch kar rahay hain.

Neha: don't be stupid karan. Wo mairay bhayya bhabhi bhi hain.sagay nahi to kia hoa mager main manti to hun an unko. So no need to say thanks ok. Kiyun mama dad.

Both replied in yes.

Karan murmured officially bhi bana dun ga tumhain un ka rishtadaar bahut jald bas ek baar yeh problem solve ho jaye.

Neha: kia kuch kah atum nay?

Karan: o haan nahi nahi toh. Main bas keh raha tha kay humain apnay plan pay aaj say hi kaam karna ho ga.

Neha: bas ab mujhay wo din door nahi lag raha jab hum indono ka parda fash kar payain gay.

Karan: jaldi hi wo din aye ga Neha.

Karan left the place. When he entered in the house there was complete silence in the house.

Karan: aysa time bhi ana tha. Lagta hi nahi hai kay yeh ghar mairay bhayya bhabhi ka hai. Kitna pyaar, ronak aur zindagi thi is ghar main. Mager ab to jaisay nazar hi lag gayi hai. Mager mainay bhi is buri nazar ko door na kia ,toh main bhi Karan nahi.

Scene shifted to Lonavala.

It was morning and Armaan was still in bed. Niki knocked the door and came in.

She called Armaan to wake him up. Armaan was looking a bit drowsy when he opened up his eyes and sat on the bed.

Niki: kia hoa armaan theik ho na tum. She came forward and checked his temperature.

Ar: haan Niki main theik hun bas raat ko kcuh theek say so nahi paya. Bas issi wajah say shayad kuch susti ho rahi hai.

Niki: so nahi paye mager kiyun so nahi paye.

Ar: didn't want to tell her that he was missing Riddhima like hell. Bas aysay hi kuch sar main dard tha.

Niki: array mujhay bata diaya hota. Koi tablet li kia.

Ar: laita hun abhi.

Niki: hana main aysa karti hun abhi chalti hun.tum rest kar lo. Aur haan main nashta bhaijwa rahi hun.kar laina aur dawai lay lo ok.

Ar: hana theik hai aysa hi shayd theik rahay ga.

Before leaving the room Niki turned back. Wo armaan. Kia tumnay dr keerti say baat ki?

Ar: kis baray main.

Niki: Armaan janay ka keh rahay thay na tum.?

Ar: haan kit hi mager abhi unka kehna hai kuch kamahai yahaan. Koi aur nahi a saqta so mujhay hi rehna ho ga.

Niki: ohhh so sad. Kabhi kabhi yeh dr keerti bhi na. She was so excited and delighted to hear this. But she pretended to be sad in front of Armaan.

Ar: nahi yaar unka kia kasoor. Yeh kaam hai kaam to karna parta hai na.

Niki: hana yeh bhi hai mager unko samajhna chahiye na.

Ar: its ok Niki. Don't feel bad. Jaldi hi humay chalay jan ahai. Kaunsa yahaan hameesha kay liye rehna hai.

Niki: thought (maira bas chalta to yahin hamesha kay liye rehti). Haan yeh to hai. Chalo jahaan itnay din guzaray. Wahaan kuch aur din sahi. Tum apna khayaal rakhna ok.

Ar; thanks yaar.

The following part is written by me

Next morning

Karan dropped Ridz at Sanjeevani n instead of going back he waited for Neha. When Neha arrived he waved his hand n she came 2 him

NE: tum yahaan kya kar rahey ho

KA: tumhara intezaar pichley 20 min se kar raha hoon

NE: acha lekin kyun

KA: tumhain best of luck wish karney

NE: thanx lekin tum phone bhi toh kar saktey they

Karan didn't know what to say The fact was that he wanted 2 see her.

KA: woh sab chodo Raj par kadi nazar rakhna

NE: haan haan mujhey pata hai kya karna hai ab main chalti hoon bye

KA: bye

As she turned back

Karan called her n went upto her

NE: ab kya hai

KA: woh aaj tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho

She blushed because the way he was looking at her, stirred her from inside.

KA: bye take care

NE: bye

Neha walked in thinking of his different attitude and was smiled.

Few hours passed

Ridz n Neha had again duties in the same ward. Raj was enough busy so he couldn't come to see Ridz.

In the lunch break

Raj came in their ward

R: hey Ridz kya chal raha hai chalo ab break hai lunch kartey hain cafe chalein?

Before Ridz cud speak anything Neha interrupted in b/w

NE: DR. Riddhima aap plz mujhey yeh case samjha dijiye mujhey samajh nahin aaraha aur mujhey reports bhi banani hai warna Dr. Kirti mera band baja dengi plz

RI: ok .Don't worry Neha I'll help you.Sorry Raj yeh kaam zyada zaroori hai

R: par

NE: par war kuch nahin aap jayiye hum baad main aajayengey ok

Raj made a face n went back

In Lonavala

Armaan was feeling better from morning. Right now he was checking the patients

The last was Gappu

GA: devdas khabardar jo muhey kadwi dawaiyaan khana ko kaha

AR: devdas kaun devdas

Armaan started looking here n there

G: tum aur kaun apni shakal dekhi hai aayine main

AR: kyun kya hua

G: saaf pata chal raha hai ki aap kitney sad ho bahut miss kar rahey ho didi ko

Armaan was silent

G: hmm aur ladayi bhi ki hai

AR: tujhey kaisey pata

G: lifafa dekh kar khat ka masloom padh letey hain hum

AR: haan haan bada aaya masloom padhney wala

G: zahir si baat hai didi ne aapko ek bhi baar call nahin kiya warna woh char baar phone kartin yeh poochney k liye aapne time se khaya ya nahin soye theek se raat ko neend toh aayi wagarah wagairah

AR: tu bahut bada ho gaya hai

G: problem kya hai

AR: kuch nahin

G: agar meri didi ko zyada der tak rulaya toh theek nahin hoga

AR: bada aaya di ka chamcha. yahaan meri pareshni dikhayi nahin de rahi mera dil ro raha hai 100 km door se uskey aansu badey dikh rahey hain hai tujhey

G: chill bhaiya gussa kyun kar rahey ho plz didi ko mana lo, woh ro rahi hongi mujhey pata hai aur jitna miss unhain aap kar rahey ho utna hi woh bhi aap ko kar rahi hongi

Armaan nodded n smiled.

G: yeh hui na baat devdas bhaiya

AR: fir se devdas

Other kids came near n heard gappu calling Armaan devdas n all began 2 giggle.

Armaan frowned and stood up as he has finished his work. After the lunch he talked 2 Bi and his dad n they told him how lonely the house was without him n Ridz was not taking her meals properly. He felt sad coz it was he knew the reason behind Riddhima's sullen state.He became worried for her and felt that she may get weak if she continued like this. He decided 2 call her.

He dialled her no. n luckilyRidz came 2 the locker room and was checking her mobile wen his no. flashed on her screen.

A smile played on her lips and she had goose bumps . She immediately received the call.

RI: Armaan kaisey ho tum theek ho na khana kha liya aur raat ko toh heek se soye they na

She spoke without a pause n took a breath thereafter.

Armaan smiled

AR: haan haan sab kar liya ab tum hi bolti rahogi ya mujhey bhi kuch bolney dogi

RI: haan bolo

AR:main tumhain bahut miss kar raha hoon

RI: main bhi

A lone tear escaped her eye.

Neha n Raj also entered the locker room withAnji ,Atul n Rahul. Tey all stopped at the door seeing Ridz talking 2 Ammy

AR: ro rahi ho

She nodded her head n said hmmm

AR: plz mat ro tumhain pata hai na mujhey tumhara hansta hua chehra acha lagta hai

She smiled a bit. Two days had passed since he had gone away n she has missed him so terribly that she just forgot all her anger .

AR: bachey kaisey hain

RI: theek hain Emaan toh har waqt papa papa ki rat lagakar rakhi rehti hai doorbell baji nahin ki darwazay par aisey bhagegi jasiey tumhari gadi ka horn sunkar bhagti thi aur Arnav bhi tumhain bahut miss karta hai

AR: khana khaya

She said haan

AR: jab pata hai ki tum mujhsey jhoot nahin bol sakti toh kyun bol rahi ho chup chaap jakey khana kha lena

RI: tumhain kaisey pata ki mainey khana nahin khaya

AR: tumharey dil main rehta hoon toh pata toh hoga hi na tum meri dhadkan ho fir mujhey toh pata hoga hi na

Tears were flowing down her cheek

AR: abhi bhi ro rahi ho na

RI: nahin ab nahin roungi

She wiped off her tears

RI: tum batao Lonavala main sab kuch kaisa chal raha hai

AR: acha bachey tumhain bahut miss kar rahey hain aur Gappu aaj mujhey devdas bula raha tha

RI: Devdas

She giggled..

Anji,Atul,Rahul n Neha smiled seeing the glow on her face after a long time. She was looking happy

Just then except Neha all were asked to report in their respective wards so all went but Neha stood still hearing their conversation.

AR: hmm keh raha tha ki tumse door hokar mere chehrey ki raunak hi chali gayi hai

RI: Acha aur pinky aur baki bachey sab theek hain na

AR: haan baba sab theek hai Pinky aur Niki ki achi dosti bhi ho gayi hai

Armaan bit his tongue n cursed himself 4 bringing Niki's name

Ridz who had forgotten everything for a bit now recollected her reason of her annoyance

RI: oh haan main toh bhool hi gayi thi tumhari best freind bhi toh hai wahaan woh kaisi hai

Armaan noticed the sudden change in her tone

AR: Riddhima tum aisi baat kyun kar rahi ho I luv u na

RI: janti hoon lekin mujhey woh nikita pasand nahin aur tum uskey saath khoob enjoy bhi kar rahey ho na

AR: Riddhima main yahaan kam se aaya hoon

RI: haan tabhi toh kal shaam Nikita k saath long drive par gaye they.

AR: long drive what? Riddhima main kahin nahin gaya tha

RI: Armaan ab tum jhooth mat bolo

AR: believe me Riddhima main kahin nahin gaya aur tumhain pata hai ki main tumhain kitna miss kar raha hoon, aisey main long drive janey ka sawaal hi nahin uthta

RI: Armaan as bahut hua maan kyun nahin letey ki tumhain mere bagahair wahan bahut acha lag raha hai, isliye hi toh tum niki ko le k gaye Lonavala

AR: Riddhima yeh mera nahin Dr. Kirti ka decision tha

RI: isey tumney ek bhi baar change karny ki koshish nahin ki

AR: Riddhima plz abhi hum kitni achi baatein kar rahey they plz Niki sirf meri dost hai aur kuch nahin aur main kal kahin nahin gaya uskey saath

RI: Armaan meri duty ka time ho raha hai main rakhti hon bye

AR: Riddhima par

The phone was cut off.. Ridz held the cell close 2 he r chest n leaning against the locker she cried bitterly

The following part is written by Fatima di

Neha noticed her crying and felt bad for her coz she knew that all things are happening to them because of Niki and Raj. She became more determined to reveal the true faces of Raj and Niki after seeing Riddhima crying so bitterly.

Neha: ab kuch bhi ho jaye chahey mujhay kuch bhi karna paray main kisi bhi haaa main bhayya aur bhabhi ko aik kar kay rahoongi. Just then she got Karan's call.

Neha: hello Karan acha hoa tum nay mujhay phone kia.

Karan: acha main to kab say sooch rah atha mujhay kai pata tha kay utm nay mujhay yaad kai hai main pehlay hi kar laita.

Neha: o God karan kabhi to serious ho jaya karo.

Karan; tumhain kai lagat hai main yeh keh raha hun main serious nahi hun kasam say neha main kabhi life main itna serious nahi hoa jitna aaj kal hota hun.

Neha: mujhay tum say baat karni hi nahi chahiye thi

Karan: acha baba nahi kehta yeh batao tum kai kehnay wali thi.

Neha was silent.Karan: kaha na sorry ab bata bhi do.

Neha: pata karan abhi bhayya nay bhabhi ko call kia aur phir niki ka naam anay pay unki larayi ho gayi . bhabhi buhat buri tarah say ronay lagi hain main daikh rahi hun unhian locker room kay bahar say.

Karan: yaar I feel like killing these 2 people. They have made our life miserable. Aur main kabhi bhi indonoon ko muaaf nahi kar saqta I am sure jab bhayya ko bhi is Niki kay iradoon ka pata chalay ga aysa sabak sikhain gay kay yaad rakhay gi yeh.

Neha: hum mager us kay liye humain kuch solid sabot cahye hain yaad hai na mom dad nay kia kaha tha.

Karan: haan yaad ha imager maray lliye yeh mumkil nahi hai yeh kaam utm hi kar saqti ho neha.

Neha: haan main aysay hi kisi mouqay ki talaash main hun actually do kaam sath main mushkil hain- aik to bhabhi ko us raaj say bachana aur dosra unkay khilaaf koi sabot ikatha karna. Us pay Dr. Keerti ki deadly looks ager koi mistake ho jay toh.

Karan: I am so thankful to you Neha, tum itna kuch manage kar rahi ho mairay bhayya bhabhi kay liye.

Neha; mainay pehlay bhi kaha tha karan kay main yeh sab is liye kar rahi hun kiyun kay main unko apna manti hun.

Karan: Thats really sweet of you.

After that they cut the call.

Two more days passed like this. Armaan was now desperate to windup his work and go home. He didn't call Riddhima again coz he just wanted to sort out everything in front of her now. Ridhz on the other hand kept wondering whether her love is busy with Niki or some work. It's not that she doesn't trust Armaan but she didn't trust Niki at all .She knew frm the very 1st day that in order to get Armaan back to her life she will go to any extent.

One more day passed like this.

One day, Neha noticed Raj was trying to get Riddhima along with him outside but Riddhima continuously denied him coz she was buys in her duty.

Raj: array yaar aysa bhi kia kama hai chalo na kitnay din ho gaye hain hum bahar nahi gaye aur haa aaj mainay soocha hai kay bachoon ko bhi lay jaoon ,Ab armaan ki absence main wo kitna miss kartay hau gay na so mainay soocha kay unki outing bhi ho jaye gi,.

Ridhima turned towards him. Kia kia kaha tum nay.

Raj: mainay bas yehi kaha kay bachoon ko sath lay jayain gay takay wo armaan ko miss na karain.

Ridz got angry at this and came forward. suno Raaj main manti hun k Aarmaan door hai hum say is waqt mager lekin is ka yeh matlab nahi hai kay koi bhi aa jaye ga us ki jagah lainay kay liye.Na mairay ghar main na mairi life main kisi ki jagah hai Armaan kay elawa. Samjhay tum.

Neha was listening dis 4m behind the wall. She was really happy to see Raj's shocked face at Riddhima's answer.

Raj: tum mmujhay galat samajh rahi ho Ridhima.

Ridhima: main tumhain galat ya sahi kuch bhi nahi samajh rahi hun aikbaat tum nay kit hi jo mujhay achi nahi laga somainay wohi kaha jo mujhay dr armaan mailk ki biwi ko is waqt kehna cahye tha. Mairay bachay apnay papa ko miss kar rahay hain kisi au ko nahi ok. So unko unkay papa hi aa kay bahar le jayenge unhain.

By saying dis she left the place and went to her respective duty. Raj got really angry at this. He immediately left the place. Neha got the chance.

Neha: ho na ho yeh sab kuch yeh niki ko bataye ga zaroor akhir us ko bhi to plan karna ho ka apna next step. She decided to follow raj.

Raj came to terrace and dialed Niki's no.

Raj: kahana thi tum kitni dair say ring ja rahi hai lekin phone nahin uthaya tumne.

Niki: kia hoa koi tufaan a gaya kia. Kaam tha main farig nahi hun tumhari terhaan.

Raj: toh kia main tumhain yahana farig nazar ata hun.

Niki: yeh mainay nahi kaha yeh tumhai khud behtar pata ho ga.

Raj: shutup niki. Main ager tumhari sari batain bardhast karta hun is ka yeh matlabnahi hai kay utm kuch bhi kehti rahi ok.

Niki: realized that something must have happened aht made him so upset.

Niki: kia hoa hai itna bharak kiyun rahay ho?

Raj: tum yeh kaho kay itnay say tum armaan kay sath ho kia kuch proceed kai ya nahi ab tak wahin ho.

Niki: karna kia khaak hai wo kabhi mairay sath ho to na. bachoon kay sath har waqt chipka rehta hai. Tum kaho kai tum nay kuch kia.

Raj: mainay kia karna hai yahana madam kay mizaaj hi nahi miltay hain.Iitna sab karnay kay bawajood aik hi rat lagaye rakhti hai armaan armaan armaan. Aur bas kuch dikhayi ya sunai nahi daita us ko. Ab hum aur kia karain aysa jis say is ko aik hi jhatkay main alag kar dain.

Niki: haan yaar yehi haal yahaan bhi hai kuch soojhta hi nahi hai is ko bhi apni biwi kay siwaye. Pata nahi kis mitti kay banay hain yeh loog.

Raj: kuch bhi ho mager aysa haath aya muqa hum janay to nahi day saqtay na. kuch na kuch soocho anay say pehlay.In Between aa kab rahi ho tum log?

Niki: bas parsoon nikalna hai hum nay.tab tak kuch sooch kay rakho main atay hi dhamaka karna cahti hun.

The following part is written by me

Karan decided 2 make Ridz understand Armaan's luv for her. He called Neha in the evening n asked her a favour 2 drop Ridz home n told her his plan. He asked her to give a miss call when they r about 2 enter the gate of Malik Mansion.

Bi,Vijay Malik also were included in the plan along wid the kids

As Riddhima stepped in the house with Neha.Sshe found the hall in complete darkness except the LCD which was switched on and sum thing was played upon it.then she noticed that Karan along wid others were sitting on the couches She went nearer n saw the video being played on the screen.

Others acted as if they had not seen Ridz n Neha entering the house

EM: yay!! papa mama mama kinni paali lag lahi hai

ARNAV: papa bhi

KA: haan beta ab chup chap dekho

VI: tuney yeh video record kab kiya

The video was the scene of the afternoon of the day when they went to the date on beach last time. That day Ridz had just stepped in the changing room in a spoiled mood .Armaan entered in mischievously n after sometime all peeped in the changing room along with Karan n he recorded the whole scene

Ridz eyes got moist as she saw how adorably Ammy was making her wear the bangles then the way he combed her hairs. His intense gaze on her face made a chill run thru her spine even now n she felt like hugging Armaan at an instant but poor lady Ammy was nowhere around her. She loved him so much n so did he .She realized how much he loved her. It was not that she lost her trust but the problem was that she felt ignored by Armaan's closeness with Niki n this hurt her and the pain increased even more when Ammy went 2 Lonavala with Niki.

EM: papa ne fil se mama ko cheeks pe kiss kara

With her sentence all laughed

BI: bahut pyaar larta hai Ammy Riddhima se

VI: haan in donon ki jaan ek doosrey main basti hai

As the video got finished Karan switched on the lights only to find the cheeks red and eyes wet of Ridz .

KA: bhabhi aap ka aayin

She ran to her room without saying anything

Karan tuk a deep sigh

KA: thanx Neha

NE: come'on Karan don't be silly yeh toh mera farz tha lekin I doubt itna acha idea tumharey dimag main aaya

KA: actually main bahut pareshan ho gaya tha tumharey phone se isliye mainey tumharey dad aur mom se baat ki aur yeh unka idea tha

NE: wahi toh main sochun ki tum itney intellient kab se hogaye

She smiled n Karan loved 2 see her like this.

NE: I think its time to go 2 bhabhi to make her realize that bhaiya loved only her and no Niki can separate them.

KA: u r right chalo

NE: main ??

KA: haan tumne har aam main mera saath diya hai aur aaj bhi I need your help main akeley shayad bhabhi ko samjha na paun plz

BI: haan Neha beta tum bhi jao bas mere Ammy aur Riddhima ko fir se ek kar do.is ghar ki khushiyan unsey judi hui hain mujhey poori baat toh nahin pata par itna janti hon ki koi galatfehmi hai unkey beech jisey tum donon door karney ki soch rahey ho isliye plz jokarna hai jaldi karo

Neha nodded n they went to ridz's room along with Karan.

Ridz was lying down on the bed crying bitterly.

She had a photoframe o f their marriage pic n she had let down hundreds of tears upon it since the time Ammy had gone 2 lonavala. Karan n Neha slowly stepped inside the room. Their heart sank as they saw her in such a broken state

Karan sat esides ridz n slowly spelled her name

KA: bhabhi

Ridz sat up wiping her tears n trying 2 give a force smile.

RI: haan Karan bolo kuch kaam

KA: kab tak bhabhi

RI: kya?

She didn't luk into his eyes

KA: aur kitney din ki narazgi hai bhaiya se aapki

RI: Karan plz mujhey koi baat nahin karni

Karan looked at neha n she gave him a reassuring luk

NE: kyun bhabhi aaj aapko baat karni padegi nahin dekhi jati aapki yeh halat humsey yahaan aap udaas hain aur wahaan Armaan bhaiya.Kya aapko bhaiya k pyaar par bharosa nahin hai?

RI: Armaan par shaq karney ka matlab apney bhagwanji par shak karna hoga main jaanti hoon ki Armaan mujhsey bahut pyaar karta hai lekin main kya karun agar aaj kal uskey paas merey liye waqt hi nahin hai

KA: aapko aisa kyun lagta hai bhabhi ki bhaiya k liye aapkey paas waqt nahin hai

RI: pichley do mahiney se Armaan Sanjeevani main mujhsey zyada time doosron k saath spend karta hai

NE: aapka matlab nikita se hai hai na?

RI: haan aur jab Lonavala janey ki baari aayi toh bhi Armaan ne ek bhi baar try nahin kiya ki hum Lonavala ja sakein agar usney Dr. Kirti se request ki hoti toh Nikita k bajaye hum lonavala main hotey

NE: par bhabhi agar aapko Armaan bhaiya par poora bharosa hai toh fir problem kya hai agar woh Nikita ke saath lonalvala chaley gaye

RI: mujhey Armaan par poora bharosa hai par us Nikita par nahin aur main Armaan se naraz mujhey ignore karney ki wajah se hoon.Nikita k liye uskey paas aakal time hota hai merey liye nahin aur jab mainey yeh baat Armaan se kahi toh ulta usney mujhey suna diya ki agar main Raj ke saath zyada rehti hoon toh woh inseure feel nahin karta

Tears were continuousy flowing through her eyes. Karan didn't know what to say he looked at Neha n Neha smiled.She got the clue as to how to convince ridz.

NE: bhabhi Sanjeevani main duties toh Dr. Kirti deti hain ismain bhaiya ki kya galti agar unki aur niki ki duties saath lag jati hain aur bhabhi aap ney ek bhi baar socha jaisey Niki se bhaiya ki closeness aapko chubhti hai waisey hi Raj se aapki badhti frnship kahin na kahin bhaiya ko bhi buri lag sakti hai par unhoney aapsey kuch nahin kaha.mainey ek do baar note kara hai jab bhi aap Raj k saath hoti hain aur Armaan bhaiya aap donon ko ek saath dekhtey hain unkey chehrey ka rang badal jata hai ek fikr dikhti hai unkey chehrey par.

Riddhima sighed n realised that wat Neha said was truth.She never thought of this.

Ridz was silent

Karan showed a thumb up 2 Neha n she smiled.

KA: bhabhi hum bhi jantey hain ki bhaiya ki jaan aap hain, woh aapko har pal mis kar rahey hain ,pata hai unsey pphone par baat karo toh sirf yahi poochtey hain Riddhima kaisi hai usney khana khaya ki nahin wagairah wagairah aap donon ek doosrey se itna pyaar kartey hain fir yeh faaltoo ki galatfehmi kyun.Bhabhi plz bhaiya ko samjhney ki koshish kariye, jis tarah Raj aapka dost hai usi tarah Niki bhi bhaiya ki freind hai isliye woh kabhi kabhi informal bhi ho jatey hongey sanjeevani main lekin iska yeh matlab nahin ki bhaiya aapko ignore kar rahey hain.Hhe luvs u a lot bas shayad haalat ne aapke beech galatfehmiyaan badha deen hai ,plz inhain jitni jaldi door karlengi untna acha hoga

Ridz sobbed slowly.They knew that they have done half of their work by making ridz realise her mistake

NE: bhabhi ab aap araam kariye main chalti hoon der ho rahi hai maa pareshan ho rahi hongi

Ridz nodded

When they were about 2 leave Ridz called Neha

RI: thanx a lot shayad tum donon theek keh rahey ho main hi Armaan ko samajh nahin payi

Just then they heard a thunder n Neha held Karan's arms tightly

KA: u r ok?

She nodded. Ridz smiled seeing them together and winked at Karan when her eyes met his.

RI: Karan nikita ko ghar chod dena mausam kharab ho raha hai

KA: ji bhabhi

N: arey iski koi zaroorat nahin hai main chali jaungi

RI: Neha kaha na ki Karan tumhain chod dega

NE: theek hai bhabhi

Karan smiled n looked once at Ridz, and then they left her room.

Ridz stud up from the bed n looked outside through the window. Rain was patting down the panes of the window. She missed Armaan terribly. She remembere the nights n days they had spent in rain. The night of the last date they had. She slowly went 2 open the door of the terrace that led through their bedroom n stood at its door.

Aaoge Jab Tum Saajna

Aaoge Jab Tum Saajna

Angana phool khilege

Barsega saawan, barsega saawan

Jhoom jhoom ke

Do dil aise milenge

Aaoge Jab Tum Saajna

Angana phool khilege

She remembered all the moments they had spent together.

Armaan on the other hand in Lonavala was also missing Ridz.He looked at the sky twinkling with stars n remembered the time they had spent in Lonavala .He wanted 2 feel her, to hug her n so was the state of Riddhima.

Naina tere kajrare

Naino pe hum dil hare hai

Anjane hi tere naino ne

Waade kiye kaie saare hai

Saanso he leher madam chale

To tu kahe barsega saawan

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Barsega saawan jhoom jhoom ke

Do dil aise milenge

Aaoge Jab Tum Saajna

Angana phool khilege

Ka ba ba sa sa re ga ga

Armaan lukd at the moon n whispered-mera chand aapsey bhi zyada khoobsurat hai bas filhal mujhsey rooth gaya hai, usey mere pyaar ka paigham de dijiye na, aap toh uisey bhi nazar aarahey hongey ja ke kahiye na ussey ki main uskey alawa kisi k baarey main soch nahin sakta main sirf aur sirf ussey pyaar karta hoon

Chanda ko uta lakho mein

Yeh zindagi tere haton mein

Palko pe jil mil tare hai

Aana bahri barsato mein

Sapno ka jahan

Hoga khila khila

Barsega saawan, barsega saawan

Jhoom jhoom ke

Do dil aise milenge

Riddhima came back in the room at the window n looked at the sky.It had stopped raining n she stood their for another hour and surprisingly the clouds vanished n sky showed a few stars n the moon.

She gazed at the moon thinking about Armaan .She whispered -mere pyaar se mujhey mila dijiye main ab ussey aur door nahin reh sakti. The moon smiled at the two creatures that were far apart yet their heart was one.They both wanted each other badly.

RI: is chaand main bhi mujhey tumhara chehra nazar aata hai Armaan aisa lagta hai ki yeh chand mujhsey keh raha ho ki tum mujhsey bahut pyaar kartey ho aaj achanak is chaand ko dekh kar dil main kuch ho raha hai jaldi wapas aajao Armaan

The moon conveyed Ammy's message 2 Ridz.

Karan came bak after dropping Ridz n as he entered the house his cell rang

AR: Karan yaar meri Riddhima se baat kara na yaar

KA: aap unhain khud call kyun nahin kartey

AR: woh uska phone nahin mil raha

KA : jhooth hamein sab pata hai bhabhi ne mujhey sab bata diya aur main abhi unsey aapki baat web cam par karata hoon

AR: acha toh net mere PC par connect karna main ussey akeley main baat karna chahta hoon

KA: theek hai bhaiya

Karan knocked Ridz's room

RI: aagaye tum

KA: bhabhi bhaiya aapsey online baat karna chahtey hain

A wave of happiness came across her face. She was excited. Karan smiled n switched on the PC.

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I hope you guys may like this part.Thanks a lot for the comments on the previous part.I'm really sorry for the delay.I'LL SEND PMS TOMORROW AFTER UPDATING ONE MORE PART.

I love you all

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 14 years ago
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hey asma n fatima di

yupie me first me first🥳
it was an awsome update
as usual
i totally loved it
iam glad neha followed raj
iam sure kuch toh mila hi hoga usse😉
eeekkks karan s soo sweet
he tried to make AR talk
nd this raj n nikki😡
ab bhi akal nhn ayi
ki AR luv each other
nd cant be seperated
i wish n hope neha n karans plan
on exposing raj n nikki
gets successful
cant see AR fighting n seperated😭
the part was written beautifully by u guys
u guys r wonderful writers😊
update super soon
nd thnx fr d pm
btw asma my exams r starting frm next week
so i might nt be active i'll try to comment (may b nt long😭)
f nt i shall give a long comment after my exams😊
Edited by youth_showsfan - 14 years ago
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Hey Aasma
Love the update
OMG,Raj and Nikki are so evil yaar
I so want to kill both of them
Feeling so so bad for our AR
They have to suffer so much
And just because of misunderstanding
I like Karan and Neha's moments
the are too cute
Love their efforts also
Too bring AR close
Lets see when will AR misunderstanding resolve
waiting for more
So do continue soon
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Hey asma again wats up:)
dear sorry for late comment...
about the update it was great
i hate this nikki but love the kids...bz of them her lane flops..
dear the way your story is prgressing I am loving this fact...gr8 dear
continue super soon
love
maria:)
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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nice part
update one more soon
looking forward for their conversation
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!
i so hate Raj nd Nikki!
hope AR sort out deir misunderstandings!
looking 4ward 2 da next updt...updt it soon plz

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OMG
superbbb awesome part
luvd it 2 d core
jldi se ye kal aae nd humein 1 aur update mile
cont soonish
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PART 72

PRESENT TRACK

[Written by me]


After a few seconds Armaan's face appeared on the screen n so was Ridz's on Ammy's laptop

They both were silent for a few seconds when they saw each other. Karan left the room quietly.

Tears flowed down her eyes which sunk Ammy's heart.He took his hand up and acted to clean up her tears by waving them in air

AR: plz Riddhima chup ho jao, tumhain pata hai na ki main tumhain rota nahin dekh sakta kitna bewakoof hoon main mainey tumsey wada kiya tha ki tumhari aankhon main kabhi aansu nahin aney doonga aur dekho tum meri wajah se ro rahi ho. Riddhima janey anjaney hi sahi mujhsey jo bhi galti hui hai uskey liye main mafi maangta hoon .Ktumhain merey pyaar par bharosa nahin hai plz aisey naraz mat raho tumhari narazgi meri jaan le k chodegi.

RI: Armaan khabardar jo kabhi dobara aisa kaha I'm sorry Armaan tumhain misinterpret karney k liye meri nasamjhi ki wajah se hamrey beech itni galatfehmiyan ho gayin lekin main kya karoon Armaan mujhey pata nahin kyun aisa laga ki tumhain mujhsey zyada acha Nikita k saath rehna achey lagney laga hai .yeh nahin socha ki merey aur raj ki badhti friendship tumhain bhi buri lag sakti hai lekin tumney kuch nahin kaha aur mainey tumhain kya kuch nahin kaha .pata nahin kya ho gaya tha mujhey tum par shak toh mainey kabhi nahin kiya tumharey pyaar par bharosa hai mujhey par halat kuch aisey hogaye ki mainey yeh socha ki tum mujhey ignore kar rahey ho.I'm so sorry Armaan.I have behaved so stupidly..

AR: sh!! plz ab mat ro hum kal wapas aarahey hain.Forget what happened.sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.Kahin na kahin meri hi galti hai agar tumne neglected feel kiya toh.I'm sorry Riddhima magar maine jaan boojh kar tumhain hurt nahin kiya.I don't know why you felt ignored.Tumhain toh pata hai na ki main tumse apni jaan se bhi zyada muhabbat karta hoon.fir aise kyun socha?pagli Armaan Riddhima ke baghair adhoora hai bilkul waise jaise chand chandni ke bina..

RI: nahin Armaan tumhari koi galti nahin hai main hi pagal thi jo kuch bhi ulta seedha sochne lagi

AR: khabardar jo meri basket ko kuch bhi kaha tumne.meri basket ko koi kuch nahin keh sakta samjhi tum

Riddhima smiled and so did Armaan.

AR: Acha suno

RI: hmm

AR: I'm coming back tomorrow.

RI: sach

She was delighted.

AR: tum bilkul Emaan jaisi harkatein karti ho kabhi kabhi

Ridz smiled..

RI: yeh kya haal bana kar rakha hua hai shave kyun nahin kiya

AR: bas tumharey baghair dil nahin lagta isliye kuch karney ka man nahin kiya shayad isliye mujhey devdas ka title diya hai gappu ne

Ridz laughed at this and Armaan just adored her

AR: tumhain pata hai tum hanstey huey aur bhi khoobsuret kagti ho

She blushed at his statement.

Niki had just returned from shopping n when she peeped into ammy's room.She saw both Armaan and Riddhima laughing n chatting. She cursed Ridz under her breath.

NI: itni aasani se tumharey beech ki galatfehmiyon ko nahin khatam honey doongi kuch na kuch karna padega

She got a wicked idea.

AR:- u know basket yahaan bachey tumhain bahut miss kar rahey hain

RI: aur tum

AR: tum toh meri saanson main rehti ho dil ki dhadkan main hoti ho isliye main tumhain utna miss nahin kar raha

She blushed

AR: I luv u so much

RI: I luv u too pata nahin subah kab hogi aur kab tum yahaan hogey main ab tumsey ek pal bhi door rehna nahin chahti

it was 8 pm right now

AR: main bhi. par abhi toh kafi time hai aaj saari raat tumhain merey saath jagna hoga itney dinon se humney jo baatein nahin ki hain unka qouta poora karna hoga

Ridz smiled n nodded.

Niki in her room wore the western dress which was not decent n stepped in Armaan's room

She hugged him from behind n gave him a quick peck on cheeks

NI: Ammy I'm so happy see I got this favourable dress of mine

Armaan felt a bit uncomfortable by her gesture n Ridz fumed in anger seeing them in such a position

Armaan removed her hand n stud up 2 looke at her

NI: batao kaisi lag rahi hoon main abhi abhi shopping se aayi hoon

She wore a kneelength strapless dress showing her furrow.

AR: acha lag raha hai tumpar

He said stammering a little.

Ridz was boiling seeing Nikita wearing such a vulgar dress n kissing ammy on his cheek

She tried 2 convince herself that it was not Ammy's fault .Her mind won over her heart n the anger which was vanished slowly built up again.

AR: Niki if u don't mind plz leave me alone

NI: kyun

She pretended as if she didn't saw Ridz's face onscreen

AR: kyunki main riddhima se baat kar raha hoon so plz

NI: oh cumon Ammy hum kal toh wapas ja hi rahey hain na isliye ab hum ghoomney jayengey plz

She turned 2 Ridz

NI: Riddhima kal ammy wapas aaraha hai fir jee bhar kar baatein karna abhi plz mujhey lonavala ghoom leney do ok bye

Before Armaan cud speak anything she disconnected the laptop n Ridz's sad face vanished

Armaan was a bit irritated

Niki knew dat she may get scolded

NI: ammy plz naraz mat hona plz jab se tum mujhey chodkar aaye they tabsey le kar aaj tak main kisi achi jagah ghoomney nahin gayi aur aaj mera best frn merey saath hai isliye main chahti hoon ki tum mujhey yeh khooobsurat jagah dikhao lekin agar tum riddhima se baat karna chahtey ho toh koi baat nahin main laptop on kar deti hoon

She made a face as if she was about 2 cry n Armaan meted

AR: its okNniki chalo

She chuckled n had a triumphant look on her face

They came out of his room n when they were about 2 go

GAPPU: bhaiya kahaan ja rahey ho

NI: Armaan aur main ghoomney ja rahey hain

Niki held Armaan's arms which was disliked botyh by Gappu n Ammy but Armaan didn't react and they left..

PINKY: yeh achi nahin lagti mujhey

GA:hmm daal main kuch kala hai

The 2 kids nodded n decided 2 keep an eye on niki

Ridz on the other hand was again annoyed. She wished 2 kill Nikita

She thought that Armaan will come online again she waited for a while but when he didn't turn up nor did he call she got angry once more

RI: main shayad sahi thi Armaan tumharey paas merey liye waqt nahin hai ab

She cried. She was about 2 switch off the PC when a folder got opened accidently by her.

She saw many photos of her from the internship times till the time Ammy left for Lonavala. She wondered when he took those photos. A new excitement raced inside her. She lukd at the photos n suddenly she felt like hugging Armaan

Then she saw a document n knowing that it will b wrong 2 read Armaan's personal files yet she opened it.

She read-" ma dekho na mujhey pata hi nahin tha ki kabhi mujhey us ladki se pyaar ho jayega jissey meri har waqt ladayi hoti rehti hai hai maa uska naam Riddhima Gupta hai.bahut sundar hai bilkul aapki tarah.pata hai har kisi k dukh ko apna bana leti hai ,bahut hi bholi bahut hai aur bahut masoom."

She read the next few pages in which he had told his mom his jealous feelings against Raj and then the way he protected her from raj.

" maa pata hai ab lagta hai ki woh bhi mujhsey pyaar karti hai bas kehney se darti hai

maa aaj usney mujhey apni dil ki baat bata di ,haan maa aaj muhey usney I luv u kaha aur mainey bhi, aaj main bahut khush hooon aisa lag raha hai ki zindagi poori hogayi hai aaj saarey jahan ki khushiyan mere kadmon main hain par aaj hi mujhey dad k paas jana pad raha hai pata nahin kya hoga"

"maan mere aur Riddhima ka pyaar badhta ja raha hai ,hum ek doosrey ko aur bhi achi tarah se samajhney lagey hain, I luv her maa woh mera bahut khayal rakhti hai bilkul waisey hi jasiey aap maa. Main aapsey bahut pyaar karta hoon par shayad ab riddhima se bhi utna hi ya shayad ussey bhi zyada pyaar karney laa hoon"

"maa aaj pata nahin kya hua, hamra rishta tod diya usney main usey nahin khona chahta main nahin jee paunga uskey bagahair"

"maa Riddhima Dr. shashank ki adopted beti hai samjah nahin aata main usey kaisey bataun maa woh toot jayegi plz mujhey koi rasta dikhayiye"

" maa aaj riddhima ne mihir uncle ko accept kar liya hai woh marta hua insaan apni beti ko saath pakar bahut khush tha"

"aaj mera pyaar mujhey wapas mil gaya aaj humney dobara apney pyaar ka izhaar kar diya aaj usney mujhey apna sab kuch saunp diya maa shayd main bhi behek jata uskey saath par uskey pyaar aur vishwaas ne mere qadam rok diye aur subah woh kitni khush thi usney kaha ki woh mujhey pyaar karney k saath saath meri respect bhi karti hai woh toh meri zindagi hai maa"

She read few more lines n finally she read the line he typed the night they fought n she slept in their kids room

" deko na maa aj itney din baad aapko yaad kar raha hon I'm sorry maa mujhey rasta dikhao usey lagta hai ki main usey ignore kar rah hoon par maa woh toh mere har pal main hoti hai apni jaan se chahta hoon usey par usey yaqeen kaisey dilaun samjah nahin aata kya karun"

She was in tears. She realized how much he loved his mom n every moment of their life he had shared with her till his dad gave him laptop. She came 2 know the depth of his luv n was happy 2 see how much he luvd, respected n trusted her.

She switched of the PC n went 2 sleep with Armaans' photoframe in her hand. She missed him terribly n waited for his return eagerly. All her insecurities vanished after reading the whole document. This side of Armaan was hidden from her.She wondered how can anyone luv her so much but it was Armaan after all…

In lonavala

Niki n Ammy returned around 11 pm .Armaan couldn't enjoy but for Niki it was a treat 2 have ammy with her even though he was quite most of the times. They visited sum of the beautiful places of Lonavala

When they returned gappu n Pinky were waiting for ammy so, as soon as he stepped in they came to him running n hugged him.

AR: arey tum donon ko kya hua

GA: aap kal chaley jaogey

AR: haan

PINKY: hum aapko bahut miss karengey

AR: main bhi tum logon ko bahut miss karunga

PI: thodey din aur ruk jayiye plz

GA: rehney do mat roko inhain dekha nahin riddhima didi k bagair kaisa devdas jaisa chehra liye ghoom rahey hain yeh dekho shave bhi nahin kiya jab se yahaan aaye hain

Armaan smiled at his comment while Niki got irritated at their comments regarding Ridz

Gappu n Pinky noticed her envious face n they winked each other

GA: toh bhaiya aapne Riddhima didi ko mana liya

AR: haan maan toh gayi woh lekin shayad fir se gusa ho gayi ho par don't worry tumhari riddhima didi mujhsey zyada din tak gussa nahin reh sakti

Niki pretended as if she knew nothing

NI: Armaan kya tumharey aur riddhima k beech misundertsandings ho gayi hain kisi baat ko lekar?

Armaan didn't know what 2 say as she was the reason for their separation

AR: haan woh bas kuch galat fehmiyan thin par we have sorted them out

NI: chalo acha hai main toh ghabra hi gayi thi tum donon kitney achey lgtey ho ek saath

Niki said this with a heavy heart n Gappu didn't get a good feeling from her side

Niki told ammy 2 go in n she'll prepare coffee for both of them.

Armaan went 2 his room saying good night 2 Gappu n Pinky n Niki went 2 the kitchen. Gappu n Pinky followed Niki and saw her putting a powder in Armaan's coffee mug.

NI: us din toh tum so gaye they lekin aaj tum sogey nahin yeh dawa tumpar aisa nasha chadayegi ki tumhain sirf main yaad rahungi aur aaj hamein ek honey se koi nahin rok sakega na Riddhima na hi uska pyaar aur fir yeh video main riddhima ko dikhaungi aur fir tumhara rishta hamesha k liye khatam.I'm sorry Armaan bina kisi galti k tum par bewafayi ka ilzaam lagega par kya karoon tumhain hasil karney k liye riddhima ko tumsey alag karna padega

She gave a wicked smile.

Gappu n Pinky were astonished.they didn't understand what exactly Nikita meant but they understood that Niki was planning something evil.

GA: hamein jaldi hi kuch karna hoga

PI: lekin kya

They whispered something.

Pinky entered the kitchen n said that Gappu was calling Niki so Niki went 2 Gappu.She got irritated coz Gappu gave her a silly reason that he was feeling a bit weaker but now he is ok.

She frowned for wasting her time but didn't say anything and came back

Taking the coffee she went 2 Armaan's room.Armaan was waiting for the coffee

She gave him his cup carefully n she waited for him 2 act as she had planned.Armaan suddenly started losing her himself.His head was paining n after a few minutes he was seeing Riddhima in niki

AR: riddhima tum yahaan kab aayi

Niki smirked she knew that her plan has started 2 act

NI: bas tumharey bagair raha nahin gaya isliye chali aayi

Armaan went closer 2 her

Niki switched on the video camera trickily

AR: I luv u so much i missed u

NI: I luv u too I also missed u a lot Armaan

She pulled him more closer on the couch n hugged him

He hugged her tighlty n removed the hairs from her bare shoulder n started kissing her throat her neck.

He then lifted her up in his arms unable 2 control himself and placing her on the bed he was just about to kiss her lips when...

AR: Niki Niki

On hearing no response

Nikita frowned n she came out of the dream n was surprised to see him calling her

AR: kahaan kho gayi kabsey bula raha hoon tumhain

NI: woh kuch nahin coffeee

AR: haan khatam ho gayi pee li mainey achi bani thi

Niki's heart sank

How did it happen? She had the prefect plan ,she even dreamed of the night she had imagined to spend with him, .she couldn't see her desires breaking in such manner.

She closed the distance b/w herself n Armaan by hugging him who was taken aback by her sudden gesture.

He quicky parted her.

AR: raat bahut ho chuki hai niki gud night

NI: good night

She came back 2 her room extremely angry.

yes Pinky in the kitchen had replaced ammy's coffeee mug wid another mug which she herself prepared for Armaan bhaiya

Gappu n Pinky saw Niki going to her room in anger n they high fived.

Armaan then thought to call Ridz .he dialled her no. many times but unluvkily her mobile was on silent n he misinterpreted that she again got angry coz he left her n went out wid niki. He knew she would have disliked the way Niki had kissed him.

Yes Ridz was angry from him but her anger vanished off after reading his heart through his PC.

She came to know the madness of his luv, the times he had craved for her and many more things about his love towards her before marriage .After marriage he had not written anything in the PC as he had his laptop

Next morning

In Sanjeevani

Rahul was looking a bit worried in the locker room

Ridz saw him worried n forced him to tell her the reason

Rahul told her that Muskaan was much angry from him since he didn't give time 2 her coz of his busy schedule n this has been from past 1 month that they had been in such tension.

Ridz advised him 2 take her out for a dinner as she was in her last month of pregnancy .Any stress may bring bad consequences for the baby n Rahul nodded .He was happy n decided 2 take out Muski for dinner tomorrow

In the eve Raj asked Ridz 2 cum with her to see a patient at home as he was his dear friend n Raj needed Ridz's help so Raj told Ridz 2 go n sit in the car

Niki called Raj n Raj seeing Niki's no. flashing on screen went to terrace excusing himself 4m Ridz

Neha saw Raj going 2 terrace n she followed him.

Raj switched on the speaker 2 talk 2 Nikita n Neha got the opportunity 2 record their conversation.

Asma

Neha switched on the mobile n switched on the recorder

R: hi niki

NI: hi Mumbai aagayi

R: gud

NI: ismain achayi kya hai

R: moodkharab hai kya baat hai

Niki narrated Raj the whole incident how her plan flopped n Neha was surprised 2 hear this but she happy 2 see her plan flop

R: tumhara plan toh flop ho gaya par main apna plan flop honey nahin doonga

NI: matlab

R: matlab yeh ki ab main aur bardasht nahin kar sakta itni dooriyon k bawajood Riddhima k dil main Armaan k liye pyaar kam nahin ho raha main ab ussey aur door nahin reh sakta usey apni bahon main lekar uskei zulfon sekhelna chahta hoon uski saanson ko apni saanson se jodna chahta hoon aur yeh sab aaj raat hoga

NI: woh kaisey

R: mainey riddhima se kaha ki mera ek dost bahut beemar hai jo hospital nahin aana chahta uskey treatment k liye mujhey uski zaroorat hai aur oh bechari maan gayi usey lagta hai ki abhi adhey ghantey main woh wapas aajayegi apney Armaan k paas magar aaj ki raat sirf woh hogi aur main

NI: I can't believe it

R: tumharey liye bhi acha hai kyunki koi bhi pati aisi patni k saath nahin rehna chahega jiski patni ne ek raat kisi aur aadmi k saath guzari ho

NI: gr8 idea Raj uska aisa haal karna ki woh sapney main Armaan ke baarey main na soch paye

R: don't worry I'll take care of her

R: acha bye mera pyaar meri gaadi main mera intezaar kar raha hai

NI: bye have fun

Neha hid herself 4m Raj's sight n he went 2 his car

She froze after hearing the plan .she thought 2 do something before it's too late

Meanwhile ammy reached home met the family members n his kids.

Later he went 2 Karan's room who was in washroom n saw Neha's no. flashing onscreen

He received the call

Before he cud even say hello ,Neha narrated the plan of Raj in 1 breath

Armaan was in much anger

How dare Raj even think of betraying Riddhima's faith once more?

He was always afraid of Raj but the way he had presented himself even Armaan misjudged him n now he didn't know what 2 do

Karan came out n saw his cell in Ammy's hand

KA: hello kaun

NE: kaun kya matlab poori baat sun kar bol rahey ho kaun

KA: sorry neha cell bhaiya k paas tha

NE:Wat iska matlab unhoney sab sun liya

KA:kya sun liya

Neha narrated him the whole incident n wen Karan looked at Armaan he was mortified for a second seeing the anger on Armaan's face

AR: agar usney Riddhima ko haath bhi lagaya toh main usey zinda nahin chodunga

KA: bhaiya kuch nahin hoga bhabhi ko plz chaliye ab hum unhain hoondhtey hain

They first went 2 Sanjeevani n tuk out Raj's address from the register n drove off the car as soon as they cud.

it was about 8 pm now

Raj's car stopped infront of a house

Raj asked ridz 2 go ahead n open the door of the house

Ridz found everywhere dark

RI: ina andhera kyun hai Raj aur patient kahaan hai i mean tumhara dost

R: andar toh chalo

They went in passing thru a short galley n reached the main hall

As soon as Ridz stepped in the hall petals of red roses fell upon her n the whole hall was decorated by candles in the centre was a table set for two with lots of delicious food items

RI: yeh kya hai

She moved ahead n found a huge pic of hers on the wall in red saree

RI: yeh sab kya hai Raj?

She was scared a bit

R: kya tum ab bhi kuch nahin samjhi main tumsey bahut pyaar karta hoon Riddhima samjho na plz

He moved a step towards Ridz n she was horrified by his gaze

RI: Dekho Raj main Armaan se bahut pyaar karti hoon hamari shaadi ho chuki hai ab in baaton ka koi matlab nahin hai

R: ho sakta hai agar tum chaho main tumsey itna pyaar karta hoon ki tumhain ab bhi apna sakta hoon tumhain bhi aur tumharey bachon ko bhi

Ridz got angry at his words

RI: kya matlab hai tumhara haan main sirf Armaan ki hoon samjhey tum

R: aaj ki raat tum sirf meri hogi riddhima pehley khana toh kha lo

RI: dekho Raj mujhey janey do

She tried 2 move towards he door

R: koi fayeda nahin darwaza bahar se lock hai

Ridz froze, she was damn scared nw.

R: Riddhima yeh khana mainey specially tumharey liye banwaya hai chup chap khalo warna main apney haathon se khilaunga

He moved a step forwards

RI: nahin aagey mat badhna main khati hoon

She cud not bear to let him touch her so sat on the table n began 2 eat

Raj saw her eating he served himself too.

R: khana acha hai

He asked n on recieving no answer he asked in a louder voice which scared ridz

R: khana acha hai??

RI: haaan haan bahut acha hai

Tears rolled thru her cheeks

R: arey arey aansu mat nikalo tumharey khoobsurat chehrey par yeh achey nahin lagtey

His voice was soft n seeing him melt she pleaded once more

RI: Raj tum par dobara bharosa kiya hai mainey us bharosey k naatey jaaney do mujhey plz

R: arey tum jana chahti ho. kya karun riddhima ab main chahoon toh bhi tumhain janey nahin de sakta kynki hum is ghar main lock ho gaye hain aur ab jab aaj ki raat yahin bitanhi hai toh tumharey hamarey beech ki dooriyon ko mita detey hain hai na

He smirked wickedly n Ridz froze at his words

R: woh kya hai ab mera servant kal subah hi aayega

He laughed

R: aaj ki raat sirf tum aur main aur hamara pyaar They had finished up the food

Raj switched on the music n asked her hand to dance

Meanwhile

Karan n Armaan reached Raj's house only 2 find it vacant

AR: woh itna bhi bewakoof nahin hai ki riddhima ko lekar yahaan aayega jahan hum usey aasani se pakad lain

KA: bhaiya aap theek keh rahey hain yahann hoda dhoondhtey hain shayad kuch surag mil jaye

They searched the whole house crazily n in Raj's room Armaan found the papers of a bungalow at the exterior of mumbai.

AR: Karan yeh dekho

KA: yeh toh Raj ke kisi relative ne Raj k naam yeh bangla kiya hai

AR: haan I'm sure riddhima yahin hogi I wish abhi tak riddhima safe ho

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Raj asked Ridz's hand for dance but she stud up from the table n began 2 move towards the other side with hatred in her eyes

R: aaj nahin Riddhima aaj tum wahi karogi jo main kahunga

HE pulled her closer to himself forcibly n made her dance with him

Ridz's eyes were moist

R: bas ek hi raat ki toh baat hai ab itna bhi mat ro main itna bhi bura nahin hoon aur pata hai Riddhima jab tum yeh red saree pehenti ho bahut khoobsurat lagti ho

RI: ghin aati hai mujhey tumsey mainey bahut badi galti ki tumhari baaton par bharosa kar key tumhari baaton main aaakar mainey Armaan aur Niki k beech ki closeness ko galat samjhkar Armaan par gussa kiya aur aaj Armaan k na honey k fayda utha kar tum mujhey yahaan chi Raj plz janey do mujhey

she tried 2 release herself from his grip in vain

Raj on the other hand was just admiring her

R: aaj nahin aaj toh main apna barson puraa armaan poora karunga

He lifted her up in his arms n she was mortified knowing his next act

She hit him and asked him to put her down but he laughed wickedly..

R: I luv u aaj main tumhain apna banaunga tumhari zulfon se khelunga

Riddhima slapped him feeling herself misrable

She prayed 2 God to save him

Raj got angry by her attitude n throwing her on the bed he closed the door of the bedroom

RI: Raj dekho merey paas mat aana

by the time Armaan had reached infront of the house

He wondered if sumone was inside or not by seeing the lock on the door but then his eys went 2 the door of room upstairs n he saw 2 figures

Ridz was standing near the window n Raj was approaching towards her

Armaan felt that the figure was of Ridz n without a break he broke the door n rushed upwards with Karan

In the room Raj was trying 2 get closer 2 Ridz who was trying every way she could to save her honour

Raj got hold of the aanchal of her saree n Ridz held the anchal from the other side.

She was crying bitterly pleading 2 leave him

Holding the aanchal he started moving towards her when he felt someone hitting the door and the next moment the door fell down n he was surprised 2 see Armaan

He left her aanchal Ridz immediately sorted out her saree n threw herself in Armaan's arms running crying.

Armaan hugged her n caressed her back.

RI: Armaan woh Raj

She sobbed

AR: shh kuch kehney ki zaroorat nahin hai

Armaan told Ridz 2 move aside

RI: nahin Armaan ghar chalo plz

AR: kaha na Riddhima side main khadi ho Karan

Karan took Ridz to side n Armaan's anger was at the peak. Next moment he started hitting him badly and it seemed that he won't stop

Ridz n Karan both were worried.

AR: himmat kaisey hui teri usey haath laganey ki aj main teri jaan le loonga

He was about 2 give another punch 2 Raj who was already bleeding enough

When he heard Ridz's scream

RI: mar jayega woh plz chalo yahaan se

Armaan left Raj n went 2 home

They decided not 2 tell about this 2 bi or dad n on reaching home they just made a silly excuse n ammy asked Karan 2 bring their dinner in their room

When karan left

Ridz hugged Armaan

RI: mujhey maaf kar do Armaan mujhsey bahut badi galti ho gayi

AR: mafi toh mujhey mangni chahiye Riddhima der se pahunchney k liye usney tumhain haath lagaya tumhain ktna bura laga hoga main janta hoon mujhey maaf kar do

She hugged him n kissed him on his chest

They both cried for a while after these many days of their separation finally was the night of their reunion

Just then they heard a knock at the door n found Juhi,Rahul,Neha n Karan with a worried face

They took a breath of relief finding Ridz sound n safe

Neha then showed them the video she recorded on terrace n Armaan n Ridz came 2 know the truth of Raj n Niki n their plans. They now understud why Niki poked Armaan wen Raj was closer 2 Ridz n Raj did the same for Armaan n Niki

Armaan and Riddhima were shocked. They realised their mistake of misunderstanding each other and felt bad.

After sometime all left them alone n they talked for a while clearing out their differences n finally they decided never to talk about these things again

RI: tum par apney bhagwan se bhi zyada bharosa karti hoon bas tumhari closeness Niki se bardasht nahin klar payi aur samjhney lagi ki u like 2 spend more time with her

AR: cumon ab sab bhool jao aur haan aagey agar koi bhi problem hogi hum sabsey pehley ek doosrey kko bateyengey ok

RI: hmm

He tuk her into a warm embrace n then they went 2 kids room

After playing with the little ones for a while they put them 2 sleep n came back 2 their room

As soon as Ridz locked the door Armaan pushed her to the wall.

RI: yeh kya kar rahey ho

AR: itney dinon ka badla aaj ki raat nikalunga

RI: acha

She smiled

He kissed her forehead n she closed her eyes

Riddhima hugged him tightly and whispered:

I was soo scared Armaan.

He understood what she was talking about.Agar tum nahin aate toh..

AR: basket

He almost shouted.

Riddhima looked at him and he cupped her face and said-mere hotey huey tumhain kabhi kuch nahin hoga samjhi.

She nodded.A lone tear escaped her eye as the flash of evening scene passed across her mind.Armaan noticed the expression on her face and understood that she was thinking about the unfortunate mishappeneing.

AR: basket I'm infront of you aur tum pata nahin kya soch rahi.do you know how much I missed you?

Riddhima smiled as she saw immense love in his eyes.

He slowly kissed her cheeks n rested his lips upon hers for a while n then took her into a long deep kiss savouring her juice. The wave of passion was increasing on both sides. She hugged him back and one of her hands went into his hairs.she ruffled his hairs which aroused him deeply..

When they broke for air he found her in a shade of deep pink.Hhow long he had waited for this reaction of her only he knew.This moment was driving both of them to craziness

He kissed he ear lobe n slowly kissed her nape, neckline, throat everywhere n slowly pulled the aanchal of her saree down n kissed her visible portions

She was breathing heavily now.He looked at her heaving bossoms and kissed one of them slowly above her blouse.She gasped as she felt his hands opening the hooks of her blouse. Lowering down the thin piece of cloth a bit he kissed her shoulders.

Then lifted her up in his arms n took 2 the bed. he took her in a kiss once more n burried his face in her neck..Veru soon the blouse was thrown at one corner of the room and Armaan fondled with her softness,kissed ,and chewed them. She hurriedly opened the buttons of his shirt and removed it.Her hands caressed his chest which was soon replaced by her lips.He bit his strong muscular chest making him lose all the control.He rolled and pinned her down again and freed her from all clothes quickly.She got rid of his clothes and soon they got consumed in a series of heated love and passion.Their passion had no end that night.He kissed her passionately everywhere n she responed matching equally 2 his passion.He made luv the whole night n left her in early morning making her forget all the horrible things through which they had gone through in these days.

Next morning

When ammy woke up he didn't saw Ridz by her side

After getting fresh in a few seconds he made a call then went2 the kitchen in search of his dear wife

As expected she was preparing the breakfast

He tiptoed n slowly hugged her from behind Ridz recognsed him n closed her eyes as he put his chin on her shoulder

RI: kya karrahey ho yeh

AR: pyaar

RI: Armaan chodo koi aa jayega

AR: toh aa janey do

He slowly removed the hairs from one side n kissed her neck

She flinched by his kisses

AR: tumhain pata hai yeh blue saree main tum bahut achi lag rahi ho

RI: Armaan chodo plz koi aa jayega

AR: no aaj meri gud morning kiss nahin mili mujhey

RI: jhoothey

ASR: acha jab main so ke chuka tab tum gayab thin

RI:Armaan actually hum suraj nikalney k baad soyey they aur soney se pehley I gave u a peck remember

she giggled

AR: very smart but i want now

RI: Armaan abhi no ways jao warna bi aajayengi plz chodo na

Armaan smiled n started kissing her neck n shoulder

she was trying hard not to lose herself in him

She mumbled 2 leave her but he was deeply engrossed in her fragrance.

He was torchring her wholly finally she turned her face to him n lukin into his eyes she asked him to stop to which he just smiled n raised her chin up n caressed her lower lip.

He was teasng her making her 2 melt

He then lowered his lip n just lukd at her lingering lips.the expression on her face he wants to hold it forever

Karan n bi came to the kitchen talking wen they saw them in such a compromising position

Armaan's armas lied on riddhima's waist n riddhima's arms were round his neck

they were just at the verge of kissing wen they came bak 2 senss hearing the cough

they both seperated n Ridz was deep pink .

KA: kamaal hai bhaiya raat bhar jagey ho fir bhi is waqt romance soojh raha hai

BI: yeh k se kya ho raha tha

AR: kuch nahin bi woh riddhima ki aankh main kuch chalal gaya tha main baswahi nikal raha tha hai na Riddhima

Riddhima stompered her foot on him for giving a stupid excuse

Bi n Karan giggled

KA: bahut acha lag raha hai aap donon ko khush dekh kar hamesha aisey hi rahiyega

BI: Sach main

Bi went 2 ridz n tuk hold of her arms 2 seee the spots of broken bangles n kissed her forehead while Ridz was deep red now

Her face flushed

Armaan n Karan cudn't get why she was blushing so much wen bi lukd at her wrist

BI: chalo ab nashta kar lo bahut bhookh lagi hai

AR: haan bi aap chaliye hum aatey hain

Karan smiled n sang

KAyaar dewana hota hai mastana hota hai

AR: saley tujhey toh min baad main dekhunga

RI: had ho gayi Armaan tum na sudhar jao

AR: woh possible nahin hai waisey yeh batao bi ne jab tumhari wrist dekhi toh tum itna zyada blush kyun kar rahi thi

R: tum na bilkul buddhu ho woh bi meri wrist par tooti chudiyon k nishan dekh rahi thin

AR: oh

He smiled

She tuk the bowl n went 2 the didning table wid him

they all ate the breakfast

RI: omg kitna time ho gaya Dr. kirti aaj toh mujhey fire hi kar dengi

AR: aaj hum Sanjeevani nahin ja rahey

VI: kyun beta

AR: dad woh subah mainey Dr. kirit se baat kar li thi ki aaj hum off le rahey hain actually indinon main riddhima se bahut door tha toh mainey socha ki aaj poor din hum saath hamrey neya waly ghar par bitayengey

VI: gud yeh kaam acha kara hai tumney terey aaney se meri beti ki muskaan laut aayi hai warna toh kaisey murjha gayi thi

KA: gr8 bhaiya toh aaj sirf aap aur bhabhi wow

Armaan hit his arm n Ridz smiled

BI: chalo tab fir janey ki tayyari karo bachon ki fikr mat karna hum sambhal lengey

RI: ji bi

Ridz was standing in front of her wardrobe thinking wat 2 wear wen Armaan placed a packet infront of her

RI: yeh

AR: tumharey liya aaj yahi pehno lonavala jab niki k saath gaya tha tab shopping kartey waqt liya tha tumharey liye

Ridz opened the packet n found a maroon saree with silver embroidery.It was a beautiful one

RI: wow Armaan yeh bahut pyari hai

AR: tumsey zyada nahin

they got ready in a few min

he also got her matching jewellary n wen she got ready Armaan was just lost in her

she was luking stunning

RI: chalein

Armaan nodded n they set towards for their destination.

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I hope you guys are happy now as AR's problems have solved.Kidnly share your views regarding the part.I'm sorry for the spelling and grammatical mistakes in advance coz I didn't proof check it.

Now I'll update the past track and pms would be send to only those who have regularly commented in this ff hereafter.PMs for this part would be send tomorrow.

I love you all.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part! Poor AR! they are missing each other soo much! Hope armaan comes back soon and everything gets good between them! Do cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey asma jana wats up??
dear I know I always reserve but omment a las..sorry yar
per mai jab bhi comment to mera mood khrab hota hai:( sorry...
about the part it was fabulous yar..thank god raj out of scene but nikki still left...I hope wo bhi jaldi se jan cohra:X
I loved the part jana
*I dont know how you write big comments but this is all I could write:)
thankx for m
love
maria:)
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago

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