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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitagangwan

GUYS MI BCK I GOT SME TIME THOUGHT TO GIV U GUYS A PROMO ATLEAST N I NEED FEW SUGGESSTIONS...

1. U R LIKIN MI FF???
i don't like your ff i love it, it's a really good read
2. U GUYS WANNA ME TOO CONTI..??
stupid question i think everyone wants you to continue
3.AFTER 12TH APRIL I AM ALSO GNG 2 RITE OS ON KRIYAANSH N ARSHA..!!!
thats going to be awesome
PLS TEL ME N DO LIK THE PROMO IF U LIK IT😊

PROMO -
Shivam:Kriya mai tumse tumara
DIL:REYAANSH SINGHNIA
DOSTI:LOUSIANS
ZINDAGI:SHARON...
Se tumhe 2 hafto mai dur karna wala hui...😈
Kria was cryin nw Shivam left..nxt is mumbai RDX SIR KI SHADDI STAY TUNNED FUN IS READY 2 ATTACK U...

amaZAYN promo can't wait until the actual update :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
1. I totally love ur ff...
2. ofcourse we want u to continue... yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...
3. will wait for ur os...

loved the promo..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
OKH GUYS MI BCK WID A UPDATE... FIRSTLY I M SUPER HAPPY WID THE LUV U GUYS HAV GAVE ME.. SO THANK U GUYS LUV U...😊❤️ ND ALSO THANK U FR WISHIN ME ON MY B'DAY THANK U...

EPISODE - 11
Kria:cme bck 2 senses said sorry...
Rey:okh lets leave its late...
Kria:aap ...log kaha re..?? i mean.. Rey cuts hr in btw..
Rey:hum sirf princi ka kahne par tumhara ghar raha rahe hai..otherwise nt interested..😡
Kria was nw hurt bt she control herself...
Kria calls Sharon..
Sharon cme bck 2 senses n says sorry n pick ups the phne...
Kria:tu theek hai DIVA
Sharon:haa haa PRINCESS i m okh...
Kria:okh reach hme need 2 tlk..
Sharon:okh..
Bth the couples left... Louisans were waitin fr 4 of them they entered...
Neha ran n hugged Kria... Simmi 2 ran n hugged Sharon...
Krisha were shocked😲
Neha:Kria y nt tellin us abt u n Sharon??? n ur life in danger n all...
Simmi:ya Sharon u dnt trust us..
Sharon:aisa kuch nae hai guys hum dono tum logo ko btana wala tha bt all this happened...
Kria:n we totally trust u..😃
Sharon:Ramu kaka in logo ko inn ka rooms dekha dijiya...
Swayam room was such that he cn locate Sharon frm his balcony 2 hr room sme was with Kriyaansh...
At nite Kria gets a cll frm Shivam...
Shivam:hey babe..!!!
Kria:dnt u dare cl me that ...😡
Shivam:okh agar aapni behen ko baacha chahti ho toh kal child care ka garden par 5pm sharp ...bye...
Kria was helpless she had 2 go..
Nxt day.. Kria was wearin white dress.. n Sharon pink dress
(harshita:guys imagine dmg's riddhima's dresses.. srry fr d inconvince)
Sharon:Princess... aaj hum girls ko dehradun bazaar gumha na lekha jaega...😊
Kria:haa..haa Diva..!!par mujh thoda kaam hai voh katam kar ka i wil meet u there...
Sharon:Kria kaha jana hai tumhe...??? mujh toh btao...
Kria:aah...hmmm... mujh Neha bhula raha hi hai..!!
Sharon:smething is wrng..!!! she immediately call Rey..
Sharon:Rey cme 2 my room rite nw..
Rey:okh..
Swayam sees Sharon wrried as he was standin in the balcony...
he also mved there... it was 4:30 nw Kria was abt 2 leave..
Sharon:pls Rey go n follow Kria i m sur kal Shivam ne use cl kiya hai..pls Rey.. 😭
Rey:okh dnt wrry i m gng...
Swayam:calm down Sharon she wil be fine...!!
Sharon hugged hm...
(scene shifts)
Shivam:ohh..!!Kria raiprakash is here..!!😈
Kria:kya kaam hai...???😡
Rey was watchin n he culd hear it too...
Shivam:Kria raiprakash... bs 2 hafte mai tumse
tumhara DIL:REYANNSH SINGHNIA
DOSTI:LOUSIANS
ZINDAGI:SHARON
Sabse dur legane wala hu...😈
Kria:yaad hai mujh bs ab pls jao Rdx sir ka shaddi katam hota he i wil cme wid u...!!! par kisiko kuch nae hona chahiye...😡
Shivam:ooh..!!! warnin bt agar over smart bani toh REY to gaya...
Kria:Rey ko kuch hua toh mujh se bura koi nae hoga maine kaha na i wil cme bs ... 😡
Shivam:okh ms.Kria...njy bye...
Kria was nw left alne she cried Rey heard all this was shocked..
Rey*to himself*:mai Kria ko mujhse dur nae hona duga..!! chahiye kuch bhi hojayae...
Kria:i m srry REY .. i m srry...😭
Rey:Kria... r u der...
she wiped hr tears n said yes..
Rey:so tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..Sharon is wrried abt u..???
Kria:ooh..i knw.. i she was cut off in btw by hr phne..
Sharon:papa call me n told cme bck everythin is okh..😕
Kria:thats grt Diva chal packin karna suru kar...
Kria was nw happy... was abt 2 hug Rey bt...
Rey:chala ...
Kria:yaa...
(bck 2 mumbai)
RDX:so guys aap logo ko mera shaddi ki tyaari karni hai okh..???
ALL:yes sir sur..
Nil:gimme the beat guys..
Rinni n Neha cme frwd n started beatin hm...😆
Vicky:gals stop bechara...
Nil:i mean.. choddo...
All started laughin... n started preparin fr the SHAADI
PRECAP:SHADDI KI MASTI WID ROMANCE STAY TUNNED...😊😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
that shaivam😡
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
arrghhh dat shivam...n wer is he taking kriya update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ths shivam😡...
it was nice updatee
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum...

whr is shivam takin kria????
hate dat shivam.😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was wonderful update.
hate that shivam to the core.
thanks for the pm.
update next part soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
it was een owesome update...
please cont.soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
I hate shivam and that beating part was hilarious lol was creasing thanks a lot for the pm loved it

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