#2 Pehli Baar Mohabbat Ki Hai (SwaRonFF)

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Hey congratz for the new thread and fir se usne uska dil tod dia bechara swayam and rey dono ab ek hi condition mai chale gaye plz bring then back to normal...

Waise awesome update tha nd thnkq for the PM

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iliveyou

@iliveyou

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

The fight was sad but I guess they are needed. Overall good job and thanks for the PM. 😊

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Yash Inani

@YashInani

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Awesome... Nd no probs, will wait for ur update... But plz try to update fast...

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

First of all,congratulations for the second thread!!😃 🥳 Party chahiye!! [:D/]

awesome part!👏 Though they fought really bad here,but this was needed.They really need to clear out the misunderstandings now!😊

thanx for the pm!🤗 take ur time.We'll wait for the updates!❤️

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Actually luvd this update...sad but necessary as u said, u gav equal weightage to both of them and their entire convo was well put in...appreciate it and hoping to see more wonderful updates...wish u good luck for ur new work👍🏼 and congrats on ur second thread, may u hav many more!!!

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718075

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

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EDITED...

Long long apologies for taking so long for editing...actually i forgot about it...Sorry sorry sowwie...

Getting to the update..i really loved it, even though it made me cry..i actually cried...it was just so beautiful...as you said it was necessary...hope evrything becomes fine soon...i really loved the voice overs...

ok..as usual lovely update and i'm loving every bit of it...update soon..and take care...

Edited by swaron95 - 14 years ago

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bhavya kimshuka

@kimshu

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

awesome update

congo for 2nd thread

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

It was an awesome update rachita.

though they had a fite its k as dey shared their frustrations out.

hope they are now able to get off their mu soon.

thanks for the pm.

update next part soon.

thanks for the pm.

Congo on the new thread.

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

This chapter was explosive. Swayam and Sharon confontration was mindblowing. SwaRon chemistry and intensity at its very best⭐️.. And your description and dialogues were so wonderful that it was appearing like instead of reading i am watching the scene happen before me.👏. Hoping for another big bang in next chapter.👍🏼

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

ratz congo 4 new thread!!!!!dat ws an awesum update!!!!it ws very heart-touching!!!
itni achi update tha hum kyun hate karengi??i luvd it 2 d core!!!!
yeh sab convo bahut zaruri tha...it ws amazing!!!
tu ne kitni achi tarah se lines likhi hai i luvd it!!!
nd congrats 4 ur wrk!!!