FF - The Thrill : Chapter 15: Pregnancy - Page 70 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey thanks for the PM and reply 4 my earlier comment .

you really wrote this update brilliantly but I m still missing the slap from Khushi 2 Arnav so that he will no how a wife will feel once you don't trust them . But i think this Arnav should b given a lesson to taste his own medicine. I think Anjali is more wiser than him.


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Posted: 13 years ago
I Know you are writing the story, but it would have helped if Anjali had given him one good slap. Dil ko Thandak ...great update. Thanks for the Pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM. I'm mixed about this chapter. I didn't like Khushi's reaction or Arnav's over-reaction. I feel it had to happen though. And yes Khushi is married to a stranger in a sense. I feel he will never really trust her and that is the underlying problem even on the show. I love your writing and this chapter is excellent as all the others have been.
Would love for Khushi to go away from Arnav for a few days and let him get his head on straight. She also needs some independent time and to be able to function without everything depending on her husband's treatment of her.
Keep writing and keep remembering me. I'm hooked to your story. Will look into your other writings too. Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very very interesting stuff. I love your take on the characters. Especially a smarter Anjali. Somehow even I end writing about a stronger ANjali everytime. I wonder why the makers don't see that there is so potential in her character.

Now I'm going to look for updates on this FF actively.

Thanks for bringing me to it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey really thnx for the pm...it really intreting...read in one go...
and do pm me any ur new workkk
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow yay u updated n didnt made us wait for 3 week
so i love you for that
coming back to update
i love this anjali strongwilled m so glad Mr scumbag plans backfired
a high five for anjali
update soon
waiting for PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. anjali was fab!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing tha dear...
Its soo good to see that Anjali is standing up for Khushi
Thanx for the pm...
LOVED THE CHAPTER...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...the story is so damn interesting
hope everything gets back to its place...
loved the part completely...continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a great update!
yay Anjali knows!!!!

Finally Arnav knows too

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