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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it aditi and love u too and i m sure u will do well and do i have to tell u to pm me?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Posting in 10 mins. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PD_puja

U r sch a devil han aditi...kitna tadpaegi...update kr na...m waitng fr it egrly...

You bet, I'm. Just updating in ten minutes.


Originally posted by: asmaju


u take mobile to school.
hmm i dont take it to my coll itself

Maybe it's allowed, in their school. 'Cause the same is with me, I also don't take it.



Lol. Bas 10 mins.


Originally posted by: asmaju


deka shaffy isko baat karte karte idea aata hai...


Lol, yeah !! Cool na ?


Originally posted by: surbhi_d3

i liked d theme, all of us, d kriyaansh fans rily wanted dis t happen..rey should get to noe everything abt it..plzz update and do pm me!

and u haven't added a name to ur ff yet?

Thanks a lot dear !!Correct, we till now are praying kissi tarah se bas ussey sach pata chal jaye. But these CVS. I'll update in ten mins.
Nah, I'm thinking about it. Do suggest if you know any. 😃



Edited by Angelic_Aditi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice concept dear plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Aditi

<font color="#9966ff" face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="4">Posting in 10 mins.😃</font>



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha



ha asma...n aditi tu itni intelligent h

Arey nahi. Woh toh by chance. 😛


Originally posted by: asmaju

Accept the requests.

Almost saari kar li. I'll check again now. 😊


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha



agrhhh!!!! aditi 1st chapter ke liye hi demand...ab ye atyachar h

Arey di, devil hun na ! 😛


Originally posted by: asmaju


bada wala update chathiye. no compromises.

I'll try to give my biggest. 😃


Originally posted by: asmaju


mereliyea kaise acha hai?????

Aapko itna type nahi karna padega na. 😉


Originally posted by: crazysky

its awesome waiting 4 1st chapter

Thanks. Updating in eight mins. 😊



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju


hey it was page 12 no cheeting.

Aw, bhool gayi. Really sorry. Chalo, ek page se kya farak pad raha hai ! 😛


Originally posted by: sauravkathuria

i got a pm but no update

tht is not fair
u shud update asap

Cause I have not updated till now.
I'll update in six minutes. 😊


Originally posted by: sauravkathuria

yaar ye writers k demands bahut badh gayi hai matlab ab 1 st update pe 13 ki demand hai to aise to humne padh li FF
update plz

Lol ! Don't worry. Second demand toh choti hai. Only 11 pages. 😛


Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

yipeee!!!!!! i m goldie nw

Congies di ! 😆


Originally posted by: sauravkathuria

wen u frst requested to spam i thought i can post sumtnhg meaning ful and we will be done
but as it is going i can thnk of nothng but nonsense like this

No worries. Spamming mein toh anything and everything works.
I'll be updating in 5 mins. 😊


Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

concept acha hain.. continue kar...

Thanks. Just five mins. 😃


Originally posted by: The007Shivani

loved it aditi and love u too and i m sure u will do well and do i have to tell u to pm me?

Thanks a lot Shivs.
Well not really, but this time you have to add a new id to your buddy list. 😳


Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever

Nice concept dear plz update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
thnkew aditi
n ab ye 6 mins kb khtm hoge
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Posted: 14 years ago

***

So guys, here I am with the first episode of this FF. Before beginning I want to give you all the key.

This color will be used for present.

Italicized sentences mean thoughts of the respective person.

And this color will be used for flashbacks.

Shutting down my mouth, here you go with the update.

***

Chapter 1 : The unforgettable night -

( It will be full on Swayam ka point of view. )

I wish one person would see through this smile and help me survive the storm because my biggest problem is having a big heart and caring too much. I miss you. :'(

Everyone was in the rehearsal hall. Weaklings and Dazzlers chatting together and Rey lost somewhere. Everyone noticed this but din't comment as whenever they brought up this topic, Rey would shout and leave. Swayam also noticed this. Yeh abhi bhi waise ka waisa hi hai. He went up to Rey.

( P.s. ' Rey has not told him anything till now. )

Swayam : Rey, what's the matter dude ?

Rey : Uh, nothing. Excuse me.

He got up to move away, but there entered RDX.

RDX : Um, hey guys.

Everyone stood up and answered.

Everyone : God Morning Sir !

Swayam : Sir aap yahaan kaise ?

RDX : I need to talk to you.

Swayam : Yes sir !

RDX : Kria ne aap ko kuch bataya ?

***

Swayam went to past, thinking about his and Kria's talk.

Kria ( on phone ' hoarsely ) : Hello.

Swayam : Hello.

Kria : Swayam main .. main K .. Kria

Understanding hit him and he realized that she is crying.

Swayam ( panicking ) : Kria kya hua ? Tell me ?

Kria : Relax Swayam. Swayam ..

And now she couldn't hold back her tears. She spoke through them.

Kria : Swayam do you mind if I come up ?

Swayam : Of course not. Be fast, I'm waiting.

Kria : Oka

And she hung up.

( I'll not say anything about how Kria came there and all as it's from Swayam's point of view. )

After 10 minutes, Swayam heard his door bell ring. He got up from his bed, went down and got the door.

As soon as he saw Kria he got tensed. She looked sad and her eyes were red due to crying. Swayam led her to his room. He closed the door and turned behind.

Swayam : Kria what's going on ?

Without saying anything, Kria hugged Swayam tightly. This worried Swayam even more. He put his one arm around her shoulder and pats her head with the other one. After complete ten minutes of silence Kria gained control and tried to come back to the state of being normal.

Kria ( Still hugging him ) : I'm a bad person. A very bad person. Mujhse bura koi nahi hai.

Swayam : Kria, what the hell are you talking about. Tell me.

Kria : Nothing

Swayam : Ab tum mujhse ' apne best friend se bhi cheezein chupaane lag gayi ho ? Aur jhooth bolne lag gayi ho ?

Kria : No, no. Swayam, tum bhi mujhse nafrat mat karo. I can't tolerate this. Please aise mat bolo.

Swayam pulled her back to see her face.

Swayam : Kria what are you saying ? How can I hate you ? And no one hates you.

Kria ( lost somewhere ) : Everyone will. One already does.

Swayam : Kaheen yeh Rey ki baat toh nahi kar rahi ?

Swayam : Kria, kaheen tumhaare aur Rey ke beech koi problem ?

Kria ( shocked ) : Mere aur Rey ke beech koi problem kyun hogi ?

Swayam : Kria tell me. I need to know. Don't try and hide anything. I already know everything going on between you both. So, please tell me if there's anything wrong.

Kria ( whispering ) : going on nahi .. going on toh tha ..

Swayam ( horror-struck ) : What ? Kria you both din't ..

Kria : Yes, I broke up with him ( saying each word slowly )

Swayam : Kria why would you do this to him ? You know how much he loves you. Kria please, please think about it. Agar koi problem hai toh, tell me. I'll help you. I promise. But, please don't come to this decision.

Kria : Nothing can be changed now. And this was all I could do. I have to do this. I'm a bad person.

Swayam had no clue about what she is talking.

Swayam : Kria tell me from the beginning.

Kria : Swayam, I'm going.

Swayam : Itni jaldi. Wait main aunty se baat ..

Kria : Main Mumbai chod kar jaa rahi hun .. I want to tell you something but promise me, you wouldn't tell anyone. Please Swayam.

Hearing this Swayam left her. He stood a little far away. Kria reached to him and hugged him tight. Now, Swayam also had tears in his eyes.

Swayam : Kria, how can you go like this ?

Now Kria narrated the whole *Elems se pehli night ka scene*

Kria : Swayam, I had to break up with Rey. Main ussey sach bhi bata sakti thi. Par maine nahi bataya. Agar main unhein sach batati toh who mujhe bhool nahi paate. Aur main dobarah kabhi waapas toh aungi nahi. So, please I beg you. Please don't tell him the truth now. Maine jaan mujhkar unse jhooth bola hai. Taaki who mujhse nafrat karein. Aur mujhe bhulakar life mein aagey badh jaayein.

Swayam : Kria, this is wrong. Tum yeh sahi nahi kar rahi ho. Please don't do this na. Please.

Kria : Chodo na Swayam. Ab toh main jaa rahi hun. Can I spend my last time with my best friend please ?

Swayam : Of course. Wait I'll call everyone over..

Kria : No. I need an exclusive bff time and moreover, I don't have the courage to face them all.

Swayam : But, Kria. You gave up everything for them. At least they should now about the truth.

Kria : Swayam, I trust you. And I expect ki tum yeh kissi ko nahi bataoge. It's only between me and you.

Swayam sighed but nodded. He wiped off Kria's tears and she did the same.

Swayam : When are you going ?

Kria : Tonight. ( checking her watch ) I have one-and-a-half-hour to be with you.

Swayam : That's not much. Now let's not waste a single moment and let's enjoy our last time together ?

Kria nodded and they both enjoyed their night. Eventually time came for Kria to leave. Swayam went with her to the airport.

Swayam : Are you sure, you don't want to tell anyone.

Kria : A hundred and one per cent sure.

Swayam : I'll miss you Kria. Wonder humaara tumhaare bina kya hoga.

Kria : I miss you already.

And she again hugged him. As she was about to go in for security checks, she turned and said,

Kria : Swayam, please mere dil aur meri dosti ka dhyaan rakhna. Please. ( P.S. ' Guys, the credit for this line goes to the writer of the SS ' We Are Destined and that is nams di ( nams_arsha ). I really loved the line and so, I used it here. If the writer minds it, do tell me and I'll remove it. No offence. )

Swayam nodded. Without a word more, Kria turned and ran in the gates for security check. Swayam was left standing their ' without the person who made him what he was today.

***

A tear escaped his eye which didn't go unnoticed by Rey and RDX, while the others didn't see it. RDX came and gave a side hug to Swayam and slowly wiped the tear before anyone else saw it. Everyone didn't understand this action but also didn't comment.

RDX ( to Swayam ) : Control.

RDX ( to all ) : Guys, Indiafest will be held in Goa, and our college will participate in it as well. So, the name of you all is registered and you'll be leaving tomorrow.

Everyone hooted.

Neha : Neha so excited. Pata nahi Kria when returning and we practicing. It's been ek month. Aise how unwell she becoming ?

At Kria's name, Rey's whole body went to shock.

RDX : That reminds me ..

Swayam stopped him and shook his head. Again, only Rey noticed this. ( Actually the angle at which Swayam was caused these reactions to be invisible for the rest of them. )

RDX : I have to. So, guys welcome Preeti ( fictional character ).

Swayam fell on the ground and started crying loud. Everyone was shocked. Neha went to him and hugged him.

Neha : Swayam ?

RDX : Neha, wait. Swayam, you knew ?

Swayam just nodded his head symbolising a yes.

RDX : Don't worry Swayam. You're strong. You'll handle this. And if you go weak who will calm the others. Common, control yourself.

Everyone was confused.

Everyone : Preeti ?

RDX : Yes, the new lead dancer for Weaklings and the new AGS of our college. She'll be taking Kria's place.

Now everyone was shocked.

Sharon ( coming forward with wobbling legs ) : What do you mean sir ?

RDX : Guys, Kria is no more a Louian. She's left the college.

Hearing this Vishakha broke down and a tear escaped her eyes. Simmi and Rinni were shocked to see this. They hadn't expected such a reaction from Vishakha.

Rey : How is this possible ? She didn't even care to tell me once ? Kya itna change ho gaya sab kuch ? How could she do that to me ?

Swayam got up and hugged Rey. Rey hugged him back and started crying and everyone became more confused.

***

To be continued.

Lol, I know thoda confusing tha. The ending part. But everything will be cleared in the next episode.

Didn't get time to edit, so please avoid mistakes. 😃

I'll give the next part by today itself. But yes, on page 24as I said.

So, do hit the like button and give your valuable comments.

Thanks.

PM's are on their way. Will be sent in ten minutes. ( I need to make the PM list. )

Cheers !

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Edited by KriyaanshFF - 14 years ago
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Great chapter cnt w8 4 da nxt 1

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