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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: MsCeylon
Loved the chapter
their secret hiding place in the orphanage was nice
the hen party - "where are the chickens?" 🤣

well the precap sounds scary
I really don't want Arnav & Khushi separated under any circumstance, pls... pls... pls...

YAY! you fould khushi's chickens thought funny!😃

thanks for the comment😳

Edited by -Zara- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Banginbengali
First n formost I feel like a celebrity has given me shout out!! 😆 *takes a bow* lmao...n yayyy you updated...God I've lookin out for your PM all week...eventhough I remembered you sayin that you'll update on Thursdays!!! N what a freakin update ...brilliant Zara it was so innocent n fun!! 👏 I was blushin the whole time!! 😳 Lol

When Salman n Kareena were biddin goodbye I fealt so bad 😭...but I know they'll be happy with their new parents!

N wow I was so surprised that Anjali was the one that thought of the bachelors party 😲...that was a shocker!! Aditya always adoring Anjali...awww! N wow...what a freakin bachelors/bachelorrete party!!! 😉.. yay Aman is back...missed him!! Lmao at Minnie n Ferny how cute...n WOW Cassanova seriously he's just 😆..lol... Khushi is such n innocent...I can't believs she actually believed them when they said they were lonely n hot 😆 lmao...her playin blind man bluff I was crackin up so hard lol!! Nk singin hes a jolly good fellow lmao!! OMG hes to good!!

Arnav when he found out about Khushi.Cassanova.n strippin god to funny!! Lol n how he stalked up to her...n Khushi tellin him to play the game to n that she was havin fun at her party...lmao...n Cassanova is gonna surely get a beatin by Arnav lmao!! 😆

Uff Arnav takin Khushi up n ohh so private room lol...God the chemistry you wrote for them was foggin up my phone...lmao!!! God they are so HOTTT!! 😳 N Khushi is so innocent...n Arnav great restraint from him Bravo, bravo!!! 👏 Their kiss was so filled with emotion n yes Arnav she will be yours in everyway 2mrw...(hopefully if Zara would like it to be 😉) lmao...ohhh Aman how I missed him...what brotherly love...n Khushi sayin that Aman is her bro so Arnav can't fire him was so adorable..n Aman relaxed seeing Khushi!! Arnav watchin his sexy wife n Aman shakin his head while Arnav is smirkin...God gotta love'em!!!

Okay the precap is freakin me out 🥱...I knew you were gonna bring Shyam 😡...but I wanted to deny it as much as possible...please Zara let him be punched by Khushi's hubby, friends, bf, n bhai...plzzz!!!! Im beggin...anyway hope all works out!!!

Sorry for the late reply..had to go out with my mom!! Rockin update, thanks for the PM...n can't waite for the next update!! ⭐️

Okay I think I wrote a lil to much..forgive me..I can't help it!😳

Yayay! your long comment! wooo! you said you wrote too much? 😲 Its PERFECT!!!😳 thanks. i enjoy it to the max. thank you. love how you have caught nearly every single part, telling me how much you love it. thank yousoo much. for writing so much i shall tell you directly a tiny part of the SR coming up. *cough cough* khushi didnt't know what a strip tease really meant, but arnav is going to show khushi EXACTLY what a strip tease is.😉 love you for the long comment. thanks again😳

xxx

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Ann

@ipkkndank

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

Love the update dear

that's awesome two parties =D

And i'm sure casanova is half dead =D

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#274

who is HIM!? I hope whoever it is dosen't hurt Khushi!

Edited by nazibah - 13 years ago

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asumi

@asumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

like not working! damn that silly button! :(

fun- sweet update !!! Arnav and his possessiveness! just amazing!!!

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

lvd the update i mean it was cute as ever...

aman is bak...lvd it

i just lvd d party...seriously casonova n herriate are a unique couple...

anji is naughty...

omg khushi is too darn naive...

i was right abt shyam...

gosh...plzzz...i hate dat snake...

thanx 4 pm

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

Wow zara. The bachelor and hen party was fun. Khushi is so innocent. Do not say we have the creep in your story. Please. Thanks for the pm.

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Safiya

@ssafiyaa

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Fabulous!!! 👏👏👏Just amazing and awesome and great and hilarious and captivating... I dont have enuf words to describe this FF.. I am sooo glad that i had a chance to read it!!

I started reading it y'day and kept on reading late into the night till i could read no more..!! My hubby sittin next to me thot i'd gone completely bonkers when he saw me smiling and laughing and blushing and rolling abt in front of the laptop!! 😆 😆

Since this is my first comment i wanna tell you abt ALL my favs parts...

1st part: last line.. where arnav claims her as his from d very start... "as mine..." 😳

Her reaction on being on a plane... THIS THING IS FLYING!! ARE YOU MAD!! WHAT IF WE FALL OUT OF THE SKY!!! 🤣 Nd then men in suits called "penguins!!" Only khushi cud have made such a comparison!! Nd of course her imitating Arnav.. "i'll chew you up and spit you out.." 🤣

I was so sad whn arnav left khushi at d orphanage the 1st tym, tryin 2 sneak out but sumhow khushi was sneakier as she was already in d car... 😛

Ooo... nd whn she sees him in a towel... 😆 her pure nd beautiful eyes... little does she knw at tht point tht shes gonna see sooo much more... 😉

Nd shes sooo cuteee at d photoshoot! i love how jack says she a bit loony nd keeps calling for "arnavji" not realising its Asr himself... 😆

This was d best line of all... "why is it called a catwalk.. why not dog walk!!!!" 😆

Nd d angry bird ASR.. 🤣 A stuffed bird reduces arnav to talking to himself, getting jealous of d toy nd even keeping score... ASR 1, Arnav 0!! 😆 Khushi snatcher!!

I adored NK in ur FF, i just thing hes utterly cute nd a genius.. D cold water shower was hilarious.. 😃 Nd at d dining table... "Nanav! r u lookin for sumthin. u keep rubbing ur foot on mine..!!!!" 🤣 i died laughing... Nd then d aunty thinkin arnav was gay!!!

D few parts with La were frustrating.. Cudnt wait till her exit, nd what an exit it was! Tht home-breaker became beghar!!! 😃

Their separation was painful... Loved how SJ turned up 4 khushi when she needed him... Hes d sweetest!! Nd khushi showed arnav, when she took matters into her own hands nd walked away...

Arnav realisin just how much he loves khushi is just awww.. how he wants it all with her, how she has completely chngd his views!!!! ❤️

D orphanage kids were cute, callin arnav "jejaji".. Nd thn d vampire bit! 😆 Running around d eiffel tower 🤣 gosh! tht cracked me up! thy r both so silly nd stubborn!!

Fernando and arnavs convo.. Awesome, how he realizes the importance of marriage... "arnav looked in aww at how easily fernando said it as if it was his right. it was his right. ... realising the true meaning of giving a relationship a name. it is important because she is. khushi is."... These lines were just sooo well written... Neva had ny1 xplain it like tht before... 👏

Enter cassanova.. Is he fab or wht?!!!! 😛 " m not a muscly guy... just coz u dnt have the charm and cheek tht i hav... a three way is... so ur considering.." Love how he gets on arnav's nerves! Nd how he evn gets arnav to loosen up, i cud just imagine the whole part where thy stole the feather and arnav laughing all the way... 😍 Nd d mafia bit.. Arnav just needs a chance to start kissing khushi.. 😉

Oh shucks! i havent mentioned aman once thru out this whole tirade... D part where she asks to call him bhaiyya.. Tht sums up their relationship.. Aman has been just like a big bro all along, even yellin at arnav when it come to khushi! 😊

The idea of a wedding with all their close frnds togeda.. Sweet! nd how arnav called them all evn cassanova who is more khushi's frnd thn his, showed he really cared nd wanted 2 make it special for her.. nd also he cudnt wait 2 get her in bed!! 😉 But becharaaa.. All plans dwn d drain! Nd to top it off he has 2 wait longer with d elaborate wedding!!! 😆

Arnav kumari gupta... AKG!!! 🤣 Khushi, khushi...

NK is bck wit more masti.. Nd now he has cassanova nd fernando nd SJ to team up wit!! 🤪 For some reason i love NK's reaction to finding out thy got married in secret.. i have a soft spot for him.. 😃 Nd d violins, "dont get angry nanav! we were just setting the goodbye atmosphere for you and khushi.." great just great!!! 😆

OmG! Bhaang peeke dono besharam ho gaye... especially arnav.. "go away nani we r bzy"... 🤣 "y do u police ppl have 2 break d party"... nd khushi shamelessly giving kisses..!!!

Lard governor reduced to wearing sarees nd tryin to meet his lady love chupke chupke.. Shows tht there's a higher power.. NANI! 😆 Haha, arnav cudn handle all d heat alone so he dragged d oda 2 in nd put d blame on thm!!!! 😆

Lastly d hen night.. made awesome by khushi's oh so obvious question... "hen night? where are d chicken?" 😆 "thy were hot so thy took their clothes off.."

Also love the way their relationship progresses throughout the whole thing.. arnav's protectiveness, jealously ... Nd khushi being her caring self, feeding him, taking care of him... Nd when things start to sizzle up... It was just yummm!!!! 😳 My fav bits being.. SJ's pool... THE kiss 😉 ... The proposal, it had a touch of asr, wht with talks of proposition nd occupation.. but it was perfect!!... Elevator scene.. hot!! 😳 ... D sauna... *phew* Arnav devilish side coming out.. "room isnt hot enuf" 😳... Nd d wedding night.. Trust khushi to want tht too to hav an indian touch with sindoor nd magalsutra 😛 Cant wait for d actual "suhagraat"...

M done with my rambling now, hope i didnt bore you much... 😛

Looking forward to future updates, m gonna be stalking this FF!