The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed*

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

edited on pg 34

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kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

😊suja pls continue soon

eager to read nxt part

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Tich

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

that was just so amazing..

touching would be the right word..

you wrote it so beautifully...

i think i cant desribe it in words properly but yes emotional and beautiful are the words..

waiting for the next

do continue soon dear..

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: crazymayurian
this is amazing
luveddd it

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Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: mayuloveu
wow di amazing. I cant describe in words. mayank's pain is described so beautifully. its heart breaking

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: aysha1989
Feeling bad for both of them...
Nice update...
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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: avani_sharma02
i am speechless...step nupur took was rite...she stood before mayank and poured her heart out...mayank is being stubborn in not accepting the fact that he still loves nupur and cares for her...but i hope that now soon everything will get settled and mayank will understand nupur and accept her in his life...as mayank is not complete without nupur...😳.
WISH U A VERY HAPPY HOLI...!!!!!!!!!!😊

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you are right ... mayank is not complete without nupur ... dono milte hai tabhi to Mayur bante hai😊

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: clustersofstar
mayank ko nervous breakdown ho sakta hai
beautifully written suja👏

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brilliant idea dear 👏

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Awesome !

Originally posted by: .Divya.
the pain in them was quite visible... Nice update Suja... Update soon 😊

Originally posted by: shria19
Very very nice update😃
continue soon:)

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Totally beautiful update suja apu...
I loved how nupur questioned back to him this time...She made him feel that how much he loves her...otherwise things wudnt effect him this much...
Enjoyed it totally...
Now just want mayank's final realization and confession...Aab bohut ho gaya yeh ladai jhagra...
Cont soon...

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I ll continue it ... sach me bahut ho gya ... ab jaldi se sab kuch sahi karna hai 😊