FF: Achilles' Heels | Chapter 14 Page 120 (04/14)

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caged23

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

All the chapters are brilliant. Cant wait till it all connects. Please PM em your updates

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arta

@arta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

a bit confused for what may have happened in the past and what shyam have done in your story ... i'm to curious to read further

p.s good luck with your exams

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Angel13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

very curious to know the story furthere cont. ff

thanks for pm

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Vika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Damn I'd say that was a filler update!!! Waiting for the story to move forward.. mhhh so she loves him and he still loves her...did he find out about shyam?? well... lets what you have got in store for us... Lovely update and thank u for the PM...

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Firebolt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

If your filler chapters are this good I wonder abt the actual chapters! Good job!

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blue_sapphire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

WOW...what a nice update after a long time!!!really loved it...if u call this a filler chapter then i am looking forward to your other updates!!!keep it up...and update soon!!!

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Beautiful update...i loved every line...especially khushi's feelings...waiting for the next part...

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asumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

for starters - yay!! an update!!! and that too a really good one!! :)

there are sooo many unsaid things and questions swirling in my mind!!
what when were why who? damn you HAVE to update it sooner! :D :D

you said this is a filler! it dint look like- in fact it was good- it showed many things changed ( reason not known, but they did change) but at some point- they are still the same. their anger- love equation was very well put forth!

superb update!!

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Ishi

@Desai09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Pear Bitwa e a karat rahi ho tum.. Vo Serial ma bhi CVS log humko latkayat rahi or yeha tum bhi humko latkayat rahi.. Ye galat howat rahe bitwa... Dis is not phair...😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally u updated n updated a lovely part and left us all wondering what is it that Arnav can't share with Khushi... 😭 😭

But fab update.. Loved this part..

Will be waiting for next update.. Please update as soon as you get time..

Thanks for the PM..