PaSSion oF LuV *kriyaaansh* SS ch17 pg138 5'apr - Page 59

BLUNDERS:

1. ok in fone convo bw rey n swayam I had said tat Kria will pursue her dance training in LONDON nd den in last updt wer Kriyansh in d bedroom nd kria admiring their pics.. few pics I described in NEW YORK.. so sorry fr the blunder, I myself was confused cz I lost all my saved word docs. Nd before writing I dint check prev updts.. it will be LONDON only.. sorry guys fr causing confusion😳

2. in last updts I told ther r 4 days left nd den she shud register in Delhi nd thn all d way to London.. nd its d same thr is no change in it. 'this 7 days il make it spl to kria' matlab 4 days of marriage celeb thn getting registerd in delhi n frm der all d way to NEW YORK.. si untimately 7 days to step into her dreams. Hope u get it now.😳

Hope now all doubts are cleared. Jus ask if u hv any doubts.😃

Ok now dis is d last chapter.. chapter 11 but its has 8 parts hmmm naah 8+1 parts 😉😉 read further to know more 😳

1. THE SURPRISE: CHANGE OF WORLD

2. PARTY SHARTY: MASTI DHAMAL and ROMANCE

3. THE ENGAGEMENT: FIRST STEP TO NEW WORLD

4. THE MEHNDI: THE COLORS TO NEW LIFE

5. THE SHAADI: THE STEPS INSIDE THE NEW LIFE

6. DELHI DARBAR: THE ROCKING ENTRY TO DREAMS

7. TRIP TO LONDON: TAKING OFF TO DREAM WORLD

8. LIFE: the one year anniversary..

9. Now dis part is actually not sure wethr im posting or not. This is OS part.. hahahha yes I myself writtting an OS fr my own SS lol.. don't worry not decided nd not sure! It will depend on ur evil minds! Its something wich few of the members wer asking me to ryt.. can u gues it? a highly romantic thing! C'mon I knw u can guess it ryt! *winks* *ahem ahem* abi b samaj nhi aya? Toh jaane do no more hints!! Hehehhe ok the condition fr dis part is nothing but SPAMING! U shud spam thread! To watver extent u want.. either make me post it on the 150^th page or make me do a new thread. If I hv to do a new thread thn I will updt few more parts along wid the OS adding to which a 'HAPPIES ENDINGS' will be posted. If I post the OS on 150^th page thn the OS will contain 'HAPPIES ENDINGS' and no extra parts! Sorry hav to be lil strict! Hehhe! So its upto u! if this thread dosnt go so far thn forget the 9^th part! I will post HAPPIES ENDINGS as the 9^th part! Now decided by urself. Nd fr dose tubelights who still dint understand wat is the OS abt 😆 its nothing bt FIRST NITE of KRIYAANSH! ☺️😳 Deko pehle hi warn kar rhi hoon! First nite means I will post it too higher extent of romance soo saari besharami ki hadhe paar hogi. 😛 Hence decide! U want to or no? 😉 I don't hav any prob! Ur d readers and u shud decide wat u want nd my pleasure will b giving u wat u wish for.😳

And thse 8+1 parts will be posted evry aternate days.. I don't know the length of the parts as I hav sequence in mind. I need to get it executed. U will get pms to dis SS.. ok I think all doubts are cleared.. so lets start wid the part 1.. and if u want it evry day thn spam dis thread to tat extent tat I shud b insisted to post the parts..

Accha ab BASHAN KATAM! 😆🤢

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CHAPTER 11: PART 1

THE SURPRISE: change of world

(kria lukng @rey) Sm: kria andar chalo wo b ayega thodi der mei..

K: matlb?

Sm: uffo! Kitne sawaal poochthi hoo?? CHALO!!! Chup chap!

Kria pouted looking at rey.. rey chuckled nd gave a flying kiss..

She nd her old frenz went inside the house while rey stood leaning to the car along wid the gang who wer also happie and smiling.

Kria again looked back at him before she disappeared inside the house..

Sw: ok gals! Its tym..

Sh: tym fr wat???

Nil: party wo b bach-e-l..

Vicky shut nil's mouth wid his fingers.

Vi: matlab t ty tym fr party guys! Party karna hai na? aakir in dono ki shaadi ho rhhi hai..

Ne: hmm ya neha also enjoying d party..

Vicky n ni stare at each othr, they went to say somethn but seeing gals excitement they changed their expression of DEVDAAS!!

Swayam seeing dis chuckled and called rey.. who was still dreaming.

Sw: iska kuch nhi ho skta!!!!

Sw: sh Sharon wo um gals kria k paas kyu nhi jaate??

Sh: wt do u mean by 'GALS'??? tum log nhi arhe ho?

Sw: hum? Hum hum kaise aa skte hai? hu hum hum toh rey rey ke side se (holding rey's shoulder and smiling at him)

Sharon raised her eye brows nd rey was confused. Vicky n nil got excited! Finally in dono ki dimaag ki batti jal gayi LOL

Vi: ma matlab! HUM DULHE ke side se hai! h hen hena guys?????

Amar+ barat: haan haan haan s sahi keh rha hai yeh!

Nil: haan hum du dulhe ke side hai nd tum gals ki kria ki watsay GUYSSS???

All boys started jumping nd all gals FUMING and passed over a disgusted look over them! Poor rey was still confused. While swayam whispered about bachelor party nd rey noded.

Rey nodded..

Rey: sh Sharon he is ryt! Deko tum sab log kria ke taraf se shaadi attend karoge toh meri side koun lega?? *baby face*

Sharon was a lil convincing, rey n swayam chuckled.

Sh: hmm yeha ur ryt rey! Tum sab rey ke side se aao we will b on kria's *smile*

Boys GRIN.

Gals wid a lil sad but excited expression go inside kria's house..

Sw: btw hum rahenge kaha? Nd wers ur mom nd dad?

Rey smiled

Rey: hop in d car

All sat nd rey took over a turn nd enterd a BUNGLOW (the same which kria alwz dreamed off)

All was mesmerized seeing the beauty of bunglow amidst the wonderful nature.

Kria enterd the house..

All her old frenz + gals nd her mom sat in the living room wid a big grin on their faces.. kria ws still confused on wats going on..

Kria: WAIT KOI MUJE BATAYEGA KI WATS GOIN ON???????

Sm: gues!!!!

Kria: huh?????

Sh: c'mon give a try! Deko tum apne purine gar mei wapas agayi ho..

(kria's old frenz: annie, nisha nd kanika)

Annie: c'mon hum b toh yahan aaye hai! anvi toh nhi ayenge na? ther must b some S P E C I A L na?????

Kria still not able to realise..

Sh: ok hum hints dete hai

Neha: hum sab tumare gar mei ikaatte hue hai aftr rey proposed u!

Kria: haan toh?

Sh: *calming down* and hum yahan kuch celebrate karne aye hai!!

Rinni: something very spl..

Kria: kisi bday?????

All: ARRRGGGHHH KRIAAA!!!!!!!!

Kria pout!

Vish: okay one more clue! Its something great for a GAL's life!

All stare at vishaka fr wat she jus said! Vishaka nd girly things?? LOL!!

Vish: y ru all starring at me? Nd kria guess karna.. :s

Sm: meri beti itna idiot hai meine socha nhi tha! Usne propose kia hai tumei and still u r nt able to gues! Huh

Kria shocked seeing her mom's reaction! Her mom don't mind??? Her mom knows evrythn? *kan fusion*

Kria strts thinking of wat happnd few days ago.. her dream training, her mom's ans NO, thn the trip, rey, lost in jungle, his care, the proposal nd now dehradoon! *clicked*

She blushed still not sure..

And also she remmbrs wat rey had told her before cumin to the trip, the day when she was upset tat her mom had said no.

'kria trust me! I will lite up ur life wid all happiness! Nd make all ur dreams and lil wishes cum true! Let them be silliest bt ur evry dream will be true!'

She again blushed and turned' she smiled at everyone. Not able to think wat to say? Wat to say fr her stupidness?? Wat to say abt the situation? That she is getting married??

She smiled at everyone and excused herself to the room!

Smriti: I think she understood!

All went silent nd then BURSTED OUT LAUGHING ROFLING

She stood in her room and called rey

Rey was abt to enter the house he stopped looking at her name flash in his fone. He did expect, he chuckled

Re: guys u move inside mom n dad will help u, il b back

Vi: *ahem ahem* privacy n all haan!?

Sw: vicky! Usse baat karne dena! Hum fir baat karenge! Bachke kaha jayega yeh?

All laughed hard! Rey was irritated!

Rey: hello

Kria: hmmm

Rey: hhmmm???????

Kria: rey yeh s sab k k kya hai?

Rey: hmm kyun tumei kya lagtha hai? kya ho skta hai?

Kria: rey!! Aap aise baat kyu kr rhe ho jaise kuch pata hi nhi hai? I knw yeh idea aap hi ka hoga shaa''

Rey: *smile* shhhaaa wat?????

Kria blush.

Rey: sharmana band karo n ans me'.

Kria: REY!!!!!

Rey: kyu accha nhi laga? So tum mujse shaadi nhi karna chahthi? *pout*

Kria *surprise+blush*

Kria: MEINE AISA KAB KAHA????? (hyper mod)

Rey laughed sweetly at his baatcutter.

Kria: so u want to marry me!! *wink*

Kria: iska jawab meine alrdy de diya hai..

Rey: thn wats d problem?????

Kria: nhi wo yeh sab itna jaldi aapne..

Rey: first off all its 'tumne' nd secondly aaj ho ya kal shaadi toh hum dono ki hokar rehegi! Nd u knw muje tumse alag rehne ki adat nhi daalni hai! so I thought clg toh katam hogayi ab ek new life shuru karna ka waqt agaya hai..

Kria: *silent* *breathing faster*

Rey: if I knw u very well thn tell ur heart to run slowly warna tumare mooh se ek shabd b nhi niklega nd fone ki bill b badegi agar hum aise hi silent mode per he toh.. *chuckles*

Kria laughs..

Kria: rey I love you!

Rey: love u too'

Smriti: HAI BAGWAAN aaj kal ki ladikya!!!! Maa ke saamne hi?? Fone pe hi romance??? Hai bagwaan kaise din agaye!!!

Kria's fone falls down her hands but luckily Sharon catches it..

Kria's cheeks deep red :P

All strt tickling her.. Sharon takes the fone nd move out.. while kria n her mom stay in the room.. kria hugs her mom tight..

Sh: hello (kria's voice)

Rey: he.. (swayam takes the fone)

Rey: WAT R U DOING??? (p.s rey aware tat its Sharon)

Vicky n nil shut rey's mouth.. swayam clears his throat nd speaks in rey's voice..

Sw: hellooo.. kya hua kria?

Sh(at once): nthn..

*tandi tandi hawa dono ki baalon ko udaati hai*

Sw: I love you..

Sh: love u too..

Both open the eyes wider.. (bcz they wer in a dreamy mood, nd by themselves they said it! not intensionaly may b tat is called as 'voice from heart')

Swayam and Sharon togthr call out each othr's name realising its nt rey n kria..

Rey understood nd laughs hard!!!

Simmi rinni neha nd rest of d gals also laugh hardly while Sharon move out blushing hard..

Swayam strts stammering while all the boys bounce on him ROFL.. rey also join them..

Kria: maa kya yeh sab sach hai? (sleeping on her moms lap)

Sm: haan sab kuch sach hai..

Kria: so strange!! Dreams do cum true..

Sm: shyad! But sabki nhi'. Sirf unki jo deserve karte hai nd who determine to achive it!

Sm: and jinki pyaar sirf kehne ki nhi balki uss pyaar mei kar dikaane junoon hot oh saare sapne sach ho jaati hai.. *smile*

Kria get up..

Sm: rey tumse bahut pyaar karta hai.. nd muje pata hai wo tumei har wo khushi dega jo tum deserve karti ho..

Kria *cries*

Kria: do I deserve him???? Kabhi kabhi lagtha hai jitna pyaar wo mujse karta hai utna mei usse nhi karti..

Smriti laughs

Sm: agar tum uske liye apne dance ke sapne bul skti ho, agar tum uske liye apne mom se lad skti ho, toh tum b usse utna hi pyaar karti ho.. bas tumari aur uski pyaar jatane ki tareeka alag hai..

K: MOM

Hugs her mom tight

K: AAP WORLD KE BEST MOM HO!!!!!

Sharon sees dis from far nd weeps silently, kria sees her nd calls inside..

Smriti sees her nd says

Sm: kya hua beta? Tum ro kyu rhi ho? (wiping her tears)

Sh: kya mei aapko ma bula skti hoon?

Kria was hugging her mom from back.. nd smiling..

Kria: ofcouse she is all urs!

She says it moving towards Sharon, Sharon hugs smriti nd thn all three hug.. aftr sometime all gals join the hug..

Kria: THIS IS D BEST SURPRISE EVER!!!!

Rey and rest of d gang enter the house..

He greets his mom dad..

Rey loves his mom n dad bt not as much as his frenz..

Rey in his room..

RD: Reys' Dad, RM: Reys' Mom (il use dis short forms)

RM: rey?

Rey: oh hey mom ..

RM: u knw tumei kush dek kar im very happie..

Rey: hmmm..

RM: so all set..?

Rey: yess!!!

RD: rey! Tum usse bahut pyaar karte hona?

Rey turns to his dad,

Rey: Apne aap se zyada..

RD smiles..

RD: toh wo b tumse sabse zyada pyaar karegi! Here u go (hands ovr him so cover)

Rey: wats dis??

RM: kholke deko..

Rey opens it ther wer few keys nd thn ticktes

RD: mei yeh tumei baadmei b de skta hoon bt ur happie now so abi se isse le lo..

Rey: yeh sab?

RD: ismei do gar ki chabiya hai, one in LONDON nd one in MUMBAI.. two separate house fr u nd ur wife.. *wink*

Rey: but separate gar Mumbai mei kyu?

RM: deko hum dono hardly india mei rehthe hai.. so it's a gift from our side to u.. tumare saari frenz ki gar b aas pass hi hai Mumbai so u can keep in touch wid all. Nd London jaa rhe toh u will need a house so take it..

Rey: thnkx mom nd thnkx dad..

He hugs them both..

Nd jus thn his maasi comes in

Maas: rey beta..

Rey sees her nd runs on her arms..

Maas: howz my child?

Rey: GREAT!! (showing muscles!!) *grin*

Maasi laughs.. nd rey's mom n dad leave d room, rey smirks..

Rey: maasi im so happie to cu!!! (hugs again)

Maasi: me too! soo finally found a lucky gal! I want to meet her..

Rey: yess! Finally! I love her so much!

Maasi: I cn c dat! Uske liye tumne kya kia hai I hv understood well.. she is lucky,

Rey: no im lucky to hav her! She is an angel fr me!!

Maasii: aawww my child! Tum itna bade hogaye ki teri shaadi ka wqt agaya I cnt belive..

Sleeps on massi's laps..

Rey: mom n dad aapke jaisa kyu nhi hai?

Maasi: har ek apne tareqe se pyaar jatate hai beta.. see they hav given u so much!

Rey: yeah evrythn except love!

Maasi: uske liye toh mei hoona..??? haawww u don't need me anymore? So bad!!!

Rey gets up!!

Rey: maassiii!! (kisses on her cheeks!) ur my sweetheart! Mei aapko kaise bul skta hoon?

Maasi: hehehe okk.. aaj se ur world is changing! Get prepared! Now u shud tc of her nd she urs!.. sooo abi se usse 'sweetheart' bulane ki adat daaldo! Warna wo mujse jalne lagegi :P

She said while going out of the room..

Rey massaged his hair cutely wid million dollar smile! nd strtd blushing!

maasi came back to rroom nd said

maasi: ladkiyon ki tarah sharmana band karo

rey sees it while maasi runs..

hope u liked it.. next part will be posted asap.. depend on ur spaming skills *winks*

I wrote in a hurry nd a bad mood, sorry If it had too much of drama..

And any doubts nd confusion feel free to ask..

Wid love

Nams!

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

Awesome jsut loved it !!!!