Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) - Page 34

Edited.

so now let me dissect the update,

it was wow, seriously. but i felt bad for Shilpa cz every time Armaan make her feel something and then the feeling remain suspend somewhere, somethings incomplete between them.

poor girl is having hard time in controlling her heart. 😆

Canteen scene was cute, specially the food talk 😆

muski and sapna played a great roll in update, but muski entered on a wrong time 😳

the last dialog scene meke my heartbeat skips 😳

i so want to know whats next for us in coming update.

simply loved the update.

waiting for weekends/

Originally posted by: prrk86

awesome so so cute

Originally posted by: blessed4

Beautiful part !! hope they both realize their feelings towards each other soon...pls continue soon

Originally posted by: MaNaLoVeKaSh

awesome update

Originally posted by: KaShAdmirer

Ahh finally i'm here.
first thankyou so much for the dedication.
i'm feeling honourd to have your excellent writings as dedication.
seriously the note above update make me grin so wide,
just then after knowing about your coming absence in coming weeks make me sad, but its ok next update will compensate for that.
all the very best for your work.
one thing more
i really enjoyed reading this long part.
I had sports in uni but i was reading this, & believe me i enjoyed update more then watching sports =D

Originally posted by: KaShAdmirer

Edited.

so now let me dissect the update,

it was wow, seriously. but i felt bad for Shilpa cz every time Armaan make her feel something and then the feeling remain suspend somewhere, somethings incomplete between them.

poor girl is having hard time in controlling her heart. 😆

Canteen scene was cute, specially the food talk 😆

muski and sapna played a great roll in update, but muski entered on a wrong time 😳

the last dialog scene meke my heartbeat skips 😳

i so want to know whats next for us in coming update.

simply loved the update.

waiting for weekends/

Originally posted by: dildirani

OMG I am cursing myself for not reading this FF when the first time you PMed me >.< im seriously regretting not reading this before ... I was randomly going thru my inbox and saw ur msg written 'update' im like hmm i think I know her... So I decided to read the entire FF from the beginning... And when I started reading it I couldnt stop! It was like I need to know whats gonna happen next . I was too eager, too anxious about it. I read all the chapters in one night when I had college at 10 in the morning 😃Dude! You rocked this FF! It is the most sweetest FF I have ever read on ArSh. Please try to update soon, at least after 4 days, 7 days seems forever to wait... Your FF made me so crazy that I visualize everything in my head when Im in college or sitting alone doing nothing😆😆 You see how much ur FF has affected me? 😆

I loved each and every sentence , word by word of what you wrote. How they first met in the snow. The part when she says she broke his bottle made me cracked up 🤣 I literally let a laugh out on that part that my sister looked at me thinking I have gone nuts 🤣

Loved how he defended her from her family, how they both confront each other. The way they both are feeling for each other. And omg loved sapna's scene , she was teasing Shilpa to the core 🤣 Its funny how u mentioned about facebook , that was so random cuz you never mentioned it before when he captured her pic 🤣 I was like Shilpa 'the doctor' even HAS a facebook?🤣 But it was funny , I enjoyed every bit of it AH! Im so glad I read this man..

Please update soon! <3

Originally posted by: DulceAmor

Hey hun, it's lovely to see your comment here. 🤗 First of, can I just say wowww to the fact that you read it all in one night! 😲 I am speechless...it must have taken you a while cause some of those updates are on the lengthy side. But OMG I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it so much that you wanted to keep reading it all in one go. 😳 I am delighted that you have taken the ff to heart! I had this idea for quite some time before I started to pen it and it was a case of the story kept building and building in my mind till I had to write it down. I wasn't sure if anyone would like it, so whenever I get positive feedback it really makes me glad that I decided to write it after all. 😳 I can't tell you how wonderful it is to hear that you have liked every update and that I managed to make you laugh at parts. Sapna is great, isn't she? I'm so happy everyone is liking her because I always have fun writing about her. I wanted her to be a proper bff, the kind that you rely on and gossip with and who never leaves a chance to tease you. Haha, I was thinking of how every time someone takes a pic on their phone they always say 'that's going on facebook' so I added that in there. Glad it made you laugh. 😆 I hope the rest of the ff will continue to entertain you as much as these chapters have. I have a lot of the story left to tell and I'm quite excited for certain parts of it, so here's hoping it will be a fun journey for you all. 😳 I will definitely be updating tomorrow, but unfortunately for the next two weeks after that I won't be able to write as I'm going to be really busy on a work experience placement. As soon as it's over I will get back to the ff, though, and I'll try not to make you all wait too long for an update.

Thanks again for your lovely comment! 😳

LOL it took me 2 hours to read everything. im a very fast reader 😃😆 I remember when I was in 7th grade my teacher always used to tell me to read slower 😆 I had to read it all in one go cuz I was so anxious to know whats gonna happen next. Sapna is superb in ur FF man like seriously ..her naughtiness to her charmness towards shilpa and armaan is so adorable esp towards shilpa they make such lovely pairs as friends :) oh yeah that happens a lot when you have a facebook account 😆 my sis always threatens me with that 😆 I can't wait for your next update.. please make it longer as longer as u can ..maybe as a treat for all kashians 😃 you know how much we deserve it right? 😆 NO WAY! 2 weeks? :( darn! chalo now that you have already punished us by saying 2 weeks then now it better be LONGER! As in "LONGER LONGER" 😛 Cant wait for tomorrow 😃

Originally posted by: dildirani

LOL it took me 2 hours to read everything. im a very fast reader 😃😆 I remember when I was in 7th grade my teacher always used to tell me to read slower 😆 I had to read it all in one go cuz I was so anxious to know whats gonna happen next. Sapna is superb in ur FF man like seriously ..her naughtiness to her charmness towards shilpa and armaan is so adorable esp towards shilpa 😳 they make such lovely pairs as friends :) oh yeah that happens a lot when you have a facebook account 😆 my sis always threatens me with that 😆 I can't wait for your next update.. please make it longer as longer as u can ..maybe as a treat for all kashians 😃 you know how much we deserve it right? 😆 NO WAY! 2 weeks? :( darn! chalo now that you have already punished us by saying 2 weeks then now it better be LONGER! As in "LONGER LONGER" 😛 Cant wait for tomorrow 😃

Dude don't thank shank me man, we're friends tho we haven't talked with each other like personally, but we did as comments 😊 So no more thank u shank u :P🤗