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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
so samrrat and gunjan are going for lunch
but before lunch samrat wants to buy ps3 for rohan so he took gunjan with him in the electronic sony shop
there when samrat was busy in the billing procedure he noticed that gunjan is seeing a sony handy cam
smarat bought 3 gifts
hmm i guess out of them one is for gunjan
the lunch was good
but ag called
lets see what happens next
plz cont soon and pm me



Thank you Ria for your nice feed-back.😊You described whole updates in very mannered way😳. Yes, Samrat bought 3 gifts... 1 for Rohan...n another 2...?? Please wait till next part...😳. Thanks for liking 'Lunch' dishes...😳. We'll try to continue soon..But,now MBYPH turn naa...😳so,Please little wait more.


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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 9 commenttt
well i have already read all parts
but comments baaki the...
ok here is my comment for part 9
bichara mera sammy kya bolega us tingu mingu ke
aage?? :)))))))))
bichare mere sammy ko Gunjan ke daddy bhi chor samaj
rahe haiii.. hey bhagwan ye sunne se pehle mein '
mar kyu nahi gaii loll typical filmy life loll
ha bhai name Samrat aur kaam chori kaa...
abhi chori ki kaha haii abhi to aapki beti ka
dil churana baaki haii sasur ji ,, i mean FIL
father in law...
Samrat was right mafia wale to wo log haii
:))) loll
yuk Samrat ke dad bhi na typics rich family guy..
humphh unhe kya pata unnka beta bahar kya kya
gul khila raha haii :))
Samrat's mom is such a sweet heart. yaar
she knew him so well.. God blessed Samrat with his
mom thnk goddd
finally Gunjan saved his Samrat
hayyy my sweet innocent angel...
Dupatta dene aaya tha... wah re Sammy teri
leela to aparampar haii kya black mailing ki haii
:)))))
so ab father in law ko pata chal gaya
aur ye tinku ka baccha...
my sammy was so sweet usne us tingu mingu ko
bacha liya
Gunjan's dad was so right... gunjan ne hi bigada
hai usse
omg tinku was so sweet kya sochta haii
bichare samy ko bhukkhad bola aur
uska mango clusterd to gaya lolll

oh so to be father in law ne to be son in law ko
dinner pe invite kiya lolll...
sansakari purush... loll aur wo kya chindi chor lol
i was asking the same friend ship kab huyi??
:)))))))))))))))
ohhoo mattar paneer bichare sammy ke muh me ppaani
aagaya hoga... lol

part 10
loll
chor apna real proffesion
wow loved tinku n gunjan convoo
omg tinku was thinking so wierd yaar
Sammy gunjan ko apni hotels ka chef
bana na chahta haii lol:)))
tinku tu bhi naa...
ohh so Gunjan ji Samrat ko bahar tak
chhod ne jayegii kya rasham haii loll
yeh sammy bhi na kabhi apni nautanki nahi chhodega
n one more thing Samrat doent need to wear
gud clothes to impress anyone...
usse to koi bhi impress ho jayegaaa

aww fir se tinku ki wajase ladaau...
n thnk god thik ho gaya..
aww my Gunji was so caring...
usne sammy ko raat ko bahar jaane se mana kar diya
n our sammy aww so cute fatt se maan gaya...
n bichara bola bhii ki wo sidha ghar hi jayega loll

loved tinku n Gunjan's convo...
mera bichara samrat kitne sapne dekh raha haii
gunjan ko le kar...
hope he will get hher soon...
bichara kab tak tarsega uske liye... lolll
part 11
liked bhushan family convo
tinku was so sweet...
loved sudha n Gunjan... best mother in law
i mean future
ishita n Gunjan convo was superbbb yaar
but Samrat n sorry ??? loll m also socked :)))
aur ye kya ishita bhabhi ne kya kaam de diya..
the great shergill ko uthane ka lolll
n our gunji.. knocked loll baby apna hi room hai
ghus jaa.. but fir aisa waisa mat dekh lenaa...
n Rohan omggg
Best of Luck Di... !! waise,Be carefull... Chachu kabhi-kabhi very small 'Short' mein sote hain... aur kabhi-kabhi toh unke bina hi...
loll :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Gunjan was like what short ke bina loll?
bichari was praying ki aaj to samrat ne kuch pehna ho lolll
loll kya reaction tha Gunjan kaa... Sam mr shergil
sam loll kya kar rahe haii
MJHT ki yaad aagayiii
ye samrat bhi na kaisi baaten karta haii sapne me bhi lolll... Gunjan was like kisse baaten kar raha hai
ohhh
finally chashmish wowww
sammy sapne me apni chashmish ko chashmish
bulata hai great loved gunjan's ecpressions..
aur ye samrat bhi na bichari ko kitna tease kar raha
haii... gunji ne samrat ka benefit liya loll
yah Rohan was right... Samrat bina short ke bhi
sota haii lol aur clearification de raha hai ki
thnk god wo aaj short me tha loll
bichari dailuy uske room me jaati haii
lol sammy bhi na koi bhi chance nahi chhodta
tease karne ka...
n ab black mailing loll
2 conditons...
loved them totaaly yaar awesummm
n really plzz god sammy ki prayer sun lena...
raat ko sone se pehle Gunjan n uthne se pehle
wo uska face dekhe plzz god jiii...
part 12
really very nautanki Samrat...
he n his mom so cuteee

aur ab aaloo ke parathe fir se nautanki
ab wo parathe nahi khayega kyunki wo thande haii
wow Gunjan ko bola gaya guddd
howw man micro wave me garam kiye parathe baasii
hell ye kounsa logic haii sam...
sirf ye dekhne ke liye ki gunjan care karti hai ya
nahi itni nautanki... tuje to actor hona chahiye
the Samrat the great shergill
but but the great to ishita bhabhi hai humari...
par thodi buri bhii.. bichare samrat ki Gunjan ke
samne hi pol khol rahi haii.. loll
aur to aur uske cousin ke sath gunjan ka rishta..
lol sammy ka chehra dekhne layak tha..
but finally usne sach bol diya ki he likes gunjii...
aww finally my sweet heart gunji kitni care karti haii
mre samrat ko bhukha nahi dekh sakti...
wo parathe banayegii haayyy
hell ab to aur nautanki baaki haii lolll
wo akela nahi khana chahta loll
kya nautanki haiii yaar :))))))))))
they did their breakfast together haayyy
so cute awesum fabbb
so januable...
then serious matter
havan ke baare me kya bataya...
n mera buddhu smmy ne samaj kar maan bhi liyaa...
my sweet heart...
aur fir havan ka saman laana haii lolll
n the great shergill family ne ye responsibility
the great to be Gunjan Samrat Shergill ko de di great.
ha accha haii na ghar ke baare me sab kuch jaan legi to
future me problem nahi hogi loll...
aur to aur Samrat ko chance de diya gunjan ke sath time spend karne ka great ab to maza aayega hum tum
akeleee
dekhte haii kya hota haii olll
:)))))))))))
wah kya starting haii..mr.shergill kya aap meri bahen ko bula denge loll\\loved tinku...
n really loved their convooo
really enjoyed tinku n Samrat...
n kya story thi delhi ki yaar...
dairy milk n all tooo summm
fantastic fabulas yaar...
ye tinku bhi na latters faad deta tha..
kya sabak sikhaya haii yaar...
n Gunji slaped him lolll
kya story thi celebration ka chaakaar jyada nahi
chala lolll tinku sach me cute baby haii
n also caring towards his sister...
saale ne kya plan banaya tha... whitener se name
erase kar diya lolll
aur kya drama tha loll
i was laughing like hell.. aur ye sun kar samrat can
imagine his haalattt after talking panga with
tinku lolll
bichara sammy heart atteck aajaayega usse...
and then Gunjan... wo lafanga n bhukkhad..
loll really awesum fantastic part yaarrr
loved it n finally ek thread ke saaare parts ke
comments kar diya...
ab bachi 2nd thread...
well wo mein kal karungii... coz u damn tired
now meine khud updt kiya uski writing...
fir comments diye.. aur ye long wla comment.
n fir padhai.. aur abhi se thank gayi hu..
aaj to raat ko padh bhi nahi paungii me...
sorry jjosheph but will comment rest of tmrw night... as of nw feeling sleepy
so no padhaiii

bbye tc.. n again awesum FF yaar...
Love u
josheph S3
Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys it was once again amazing upd 👏 sajan's unofficial date ❤️ i enjoyed each and ever part in this upd whether it would be naughty samrat's trick to tease gunjan ,or gunjan's teasing session to samrat or sajan's understanding talk it was amazing to read i LOVED samrat and gunjan's respect ,care and concern for each other showing their understanding knowing each other more making each other happy i loved the way gunjan made him understand second side of coin in hari matter and he apologized realizing his mistake and hospital scene was touchy i loved he was there to support her when she was feared with dressing , gunjan in no time made special place in samrat's heart making him to love her with each and every moment they share and on the other side gunjan too stared knowing samrat real samrat who is not any business man for her but a good friend loved their bonding in this chap can't wait for next part thanks for pm do upd soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update n sory for so late comment .Luved sajan convo now they r taking widout hestitation n they r understanding each other thanks for the pm
Edited by Shreya30456 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wao nice start of update in new thread with such sweet and simple sajan update it was reallly cute ,sweet and simple jst like sajan i really enjoye reading it the car scene where sam was excited to see his sckool was such a normal thing becuz school lyf is something frm which we are really attahed so when the sckools story start it never end 😊 nd then the whole journey with such sweet scenes the lil nok jhok between them about fare was really cute really lyk the way gunji get irritated 😛 then hospital scene it was reaally a big suspense about gunji house prob bt i know its a big part of story and will reveld slowly and then first aid scene was cute sweet and funny sams reaction and gunji glare was really funy duringhe scene as well as in the car😆 and the resturant scene was great where sam feels guil of behaving like this with hari ji and turning fm funny to mature the pov of sam regarding him was really awesome and then here began the sajan frnd ship 😉 😊 the update was reaallly fantastic
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ektaa..

Eeekkksss !!! :O :O :O Me 1st ! 😎 🥳 🤣 🤣

Wer is the Update?? 😒 Mera Xcitement Poora DOWN kr diyaa 🤣 🤣
Ur SO Lazy Khadoos ! :X 😳 🤣



Where is Comment TL😡 😡 😡?? 'Lazy'...?? Who Dear...??😡 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

amazing update it was just wonderful full of sajan loved each n every scene👏👏sajan r sooo adorable 😍 beautifully written👏 cont soon n thanks for the pm



Thanks Rukma for appreciating this 'SaJan spl.' part. We are feeling GR8 that,you liked it..😳 Thanks.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 13------>

Dearest friends Joseph Sonia Soham Swati Firstly Once again Sorry 4 late comment ( reason you know na I told you in Pm)😳...sorry...APHG Part 13 update was just rocking and Fully out standing...bahut mazza aaya read karkey...I enjoyed it a lottt...superbly written each n every part of update and beautifully presented...I loved reading and visualizing each scene...Awesome work S3J👏...Start was just amazing..Samrat standing besides his car waiting 4 Gunjan n lost in thoughts and dreaming about how his life would be with Gunjan after marriage 😍 Wow!! what a marvelous scene...loved samrat thoughts about his married life with Gunjan and then entry of Tinku Wow!!...Shown at the right time which made the scene more interesting..
Tinku_sam part was just superb and their talk wow interesting 👏👏...Itna interesting tha their conversation that I couldnt stop laughing..they both r just 2 much😆😆...when tinku called sam n he didnt respond and when tinku said Oye hero kanpur mein hadltal hai kya😆😆😆😆...treatment adhura chod kar aaye ho 🤣😆😆...Top floor khali hai..yahan unchi buliding nahi upar kya dekh rahey ho Omg!!😆😆😆 Omg Tinku is just too much he is so naughty...😆😆U wrote the scenes so well S3J that when Tinku said these words I could visualize the scene n tinkus expressions whole scene showed Tinku was pulling sam leg and was enjoying teasing him ..I could even Visualize samrats Expressions and when sam responded 2 tinku by saying merey kanpur , and mera top floor I couldnt stop roffling 🤣as in shock of what Tinku was saying sam forgot what he was saying called his Dimaag Top floor 😆😆...but he corrected himself n replied again😊....Man what awesome scenes👏👏...Tinku is naughty but he is very sweet n innocent the way he said 2 sam he can't go inside as he has promised his DI THESE words showed his innocence n also showed his deep love and respect 4 his Sis Gunjan...when sam was making his plan n was smiling the way Tinku said COLGATE smile kyoon de rhey ho😆😆😆 mein apni Close smile se happy hoon..😆I just burst with laughter...😆😆😆😆🤣.and Tinku is also very intellingent when samrat decided 2 behave sweetly towards him and was being friendly towards him he immediately realized that sam had some motive behind it ...n his response 2 sam was just wow!!😆😆...His response showed he knows Samrat very well and his warning sam 2 stay away from His Di and later when tinku made sure sam agreed 2 all his conditions before going 2 mall with his Di n didnt call his Di Chashmish ..this all showed his love n protectiveness towards his Sis...loved this protective nature of tinku 👍🏼...and Sam reaction 2 tinkus condition 2 not call his Di chashmish n his thinking in his MIND chashmish blounga 😆...and His thoughts on Tingu mungu n merey honey waley bachoon ki maa ko le na jaye Tinku OMG!!😆😆...Poor sam he couldn't tell tinku how he felt 4 Gunjan n he was calling Gunjan Chashmish PYaar SEY as Tinku was already guessing samrat had some feelings 4 his Di n if Sam has confirmed it Tinku would never have let Gunjan go with Sam and I think Gunjan he nahi Jaati So Sam said SORRY 2 Tinku ...BUT His saying SOrry was sweet as Sam did it 4 Gunjan's Happiness😊...N When Tinku called Samrat LAFANGA OMG!!😆😆Samrats reaction were just Superb😆😆...He just kept on n on saying in 1 way or another Mein LAFANGA nahi hoon and Tinku was Yaa meney kahan kuch kaha aap Hyper kyoon ho rahey hain 😆😆😆😆😆🤣....Poor Samrat this was the second time he was being called lafanga 😆1st ISHITA his Bhabhi now tinku 😆😆😆😆...Usko shock par shock lag rahey theyyy when Tinky said he wasnt even a decent Lafanga 😆😆...Sam reactions were written so awesomely that I couldnt stop my laughter when Sam kept on defending himself...He didnt even realize Tinku was just pulling his leg😆.Oh! Tinku😆😆...Very well written scene S3J👏👏👏👏 .I couldn't stop roffling when tinku mentioned Chandu 2 scare sam n teach him a lesson😆😆...🤣...he is so naughty...😆...actor choosen 4 chandu role awesome choice...👏👏...the story of chandu was definitely mind blowing ...Poor chandu...😆...U know 4 a second I was thinking S3J was Tinku just telling this story 2 scare Sam or was it the truth 😕But then I realized itni long story Tinku nahi bana sakta and he was enjoying telling it so This must have Happened and There was a Guy named Chandu tinku n gunjan knew ..But me still confused Chandu thaa na?😉😕...But I loved Sam reactions during this part also and Tinku knew when Samrat will ask about Gunjan reactions his words that he knew Sam will bring his DI up now showed Tinku knows sam well enough by now .Loved Chandu story n it made samrat realize if Samrat is SMART Tinku is Smarter...and WHEN Tinku said mein uss waqt 9 yrs ka tha CHOTA THA Now I am 11 yrs and I am BIG OMG!!😆😆😆...9yrs small hai n 11 big 😆😆..U know S3J U EXCELLENTLY showed this thing that 4 small children 2yrs growth in age is a big thing and as they think they have grown up now...😊😊...AAB tinku ko kaun Explain karey ke is still a kid 😊...yaa Kid who is very smart but still an innocent kid who gets hurt n feels pain when His Di is hurt or is in pain...the way Tinku became emotional n had tears in his eyes thinking about Gunjan's pain n hurt showed How deeply he loves his sister n samrat actions n reactions learning about Gunjans hurt in leg n his comforting tinku by saying he will take Gunjan 2 get dressing done his these reactions were very sweet and Showed he cares 4 gunjan very much ..No Matter how much Tinku n samrat Argue one thing which they share is their love n deep caring 4 Gunjan and they both want her happiness ...Loved this part and very beautifully described tinku n sam emotions👏👏... .U know Tinku Humesha Sam sey panga leta hai n enjoys it also because samrat reacts so cutely n he can judge easily how sam will react 😉 ...Infact Sam bhi koi kam nahi he also takes panga with Tinku..infact around Tinku Samrat also becomes a kid n forgets he is grown up man ...😃...Joseph I agree with you Samrat -Tinku r like Tom n jerry.😆.😆Both love fighting and arguing and both wants 2 win over the arguement No one wants 2 back off But If Gunjan asks something from them they both fulfill her wish .😊...Poor Gunjan doonno ke middle mein phas jaati hai she can't understand 2 stop whom first and how 2 make them stop fighting as she knows both so well n knows DONNO he kam nahi hai TINKU --SAMRAT......Loved the whole part also the one where samrat made sure gunjan came 2 pooja and the way he threatened tinku cutely 😆 and Tinku couldn't guess Sam would never tell Tinku-Gunjan parents anything😉😆....aacha hai nahi gues kiya otherwise Tingu-mingu humerey sajan ko unoffcial date par nahi janey deta😉😊...I also like it when seeing tinkus expressions n sad face sam made sure tinku was not left alone by calling ROHAN and making them patch up n making sure they played together...😊😊...But Sam doesnt know Rohan n tinku always fight when they r together 😆...lets see 4 how long they play together peacefully😆...This part Kiss wala Sam words 2 Gunjan Ooo☺️...this scene made me remember MJHT n SAJAN DAYS😍...Beautifully written each n every scene👏👏👏👏...Gunjan-ISHITA -SM part was beautifull Gunjan excitement 4 making ladoos was sweet n her putting her arms around SM was so so sweet n lovely scene...it showed Gunjan love 4 SM n ISHITA...and hoe close she is 2 them and it showed that she wants 2 help SM in every possible way she can n loves helping SM n ishita also and thinks of them as family and it showed whatever Gunjan DID was from heart DIL SEY ...and ISHITA mentioning unofficial date by mistake and the covering it and making sure SM didnt tell Gunjan about YAMINI was excellent written part ..this made SM wonder why is ISHITA didn't let her tell about YAMINI but 4 now she has forgotten it I really want 2 see whether SM remembers this n asks Ishita and how will SM react hearing Sam feelings 4 Gunjan?? really want 2 read this part .😊...But what makes me wonder is will SM help Sam as she knows SD will not agree??😕😕......LADOOS made by mouth water ..YUMMY😉...which ladoos is GUNJAN MAKING.??? BUNDI ke OR BESAN KE ?? or some other ones as she said she has cut fruits 4 LADDO??😕😕...WASEY I LOVE BESAN KE😉😊...

ARNAV ---Arnav BRO (AB) part was interesting ...I had guessed that as ABro wife was staying in her parents place so their was problem between them n reason told by Him 2 arnav made me feel their is 2 sides 2 a story ...and arnav bhabhi ke side ke bhi story hogi and I also felt Gunjan family r very sweet n innocent n lovely people and they will never take their Gunjan's cousin side if she was in the wrong...I think their is more 2 this story But WHAT????😕😕..and whether this story about Gunjan's COUSIN true or not ?? n if it is true I am sure GUNJAN n her family doesnt know this...I loved it when ARNAV defended Gunjan n her famliy it showed he is a Nice person and he is 4 now taking his bro side as his bro n family needs him...BUT I feel STORY mystery abhi baaki hai and ONLY S3J knows the full past story😉 ......

S3J I loved the FUll UPDATE of PART 13 very very much ..I HAD AN AWESOME TIME READING IT ...EXCELLENT PIECE OF WORK...each part each scene was superb...enjoyed it ..Tinku -SAM part was just fantastic..loved it the most ...👏👏👏👏👏👏...AWESOME WORK Soham SONIA Swati JOSEPH S3J...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...

I will reply on MBYPH PART first then will read PART 14 of APHG n reply SOON...THANKS 4 giving me time 2 comment on both FF update and Thanks 4 understanding my situation n 4 replying 2 my PM Thanks my lovely friends S3J SOHAM Sonia Swati joseph ...🤗...once again SORRY 4 late comments...😳...

WILL reply soon on other APHG part 14 n MBYPH FF update...PLEASE DO PM me whenever you update MBYPH n APHG ...

Love your good friend
Gunjan😊😊...


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hey S3J
sry will nt able to comment
as my finals are on 26th... abhi abhi pata chala ... :((((((9
will comment after dat sryyy

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