SS: Part 3 Avenging Angel (Raizada family secrets)

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sweetoooo

@sweetoooo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

plzzz next part fast asap!!!!!!!!😍

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Nik

@TheNikil1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

loved the way you delved into Arnav's past which is currently hazy...plz do continue..really want to know how Arnav and Khushi have their private encounter

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Alisha

@ExquisiteSanz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

😊 What a twist amazing how you thought of that Khushi a Princess im gobsmacked I dont even think the cv could come out with that. You surely should show our os to them who knows your stories might become reality the new story line of ipkknd. Amazing please do update soon and PM me for part 4 wont be able to sleep until i read part 4 loved the way you included images could imagine it in my head.

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Rita

@Rita.C

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Mary

loved it.. Will wait for more.

more than 2 words? :)

Sometimes I am brief in my comments when i dont have much to say (trust me you dont want me to have much to say, sometimes I go on and on!)

but this was good. I am a little uncomfortable about being uncomfortable about Arnav being poorer than Khushi (hehe - clearly some really sad stereotypes going on in my head) but love it anyway. want to see how you pull that off well, keeping ASR's strong, powerful persona intact while keeping Khushi's innate strength intact.

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chocolate15

@chocolate15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Wow that was just awesome a wicked twist seriously when will part four be out by|? im so excited i really cant wait!!!ahhh

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

WOW! Mary Iam so stunned...what a twist!
First thanks for the PM, second of all the twists this was the best that i have read and the way u have written it...is so simply superb. Loved it. Do continue soon and PM me.

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arnav21

@arnav21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Yaar its a fabulous piece of work . Its nice . Ya as u said its dramatic , bt i hve trust in u tat u cn sketch it vry wel. Hats of to u , tat u tk so much effort , refering history before writing . A 100 claps for ur effort. I cn understand hw disappointin wen after so much effort we write , ppl dont tke time to just to type two words of appreciation its vry bad . I kw i too gt a poor response 4 my post - IPKKNDHILIA . dnt worry u hve a magic in ur writin dnt give it up . Keep writin , tink tat ur imroving ur skills . As alwys i lov ur writing , i wil keep readin . Tanx 4 pm .