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Originally posted by: snigdha143
Part 13
Krisha were on der way to college.Sharon:kriya dont tell d matter to any1...Kriya feels lil disappointed.Kriya:kyun??Sharon:mein sabko shaam surprise dena chahthi hoon...so party ke baare mein bathayenge par not dis one..Kriya:ok...(in mind)par mein tho rey ko already call kiya.They reach d college.Kriya rushes to fire exit saying dat she had some work.kriya:thank god rey nahi ayi...time 9.30 hain ab tak nahi..She waits for almost 45 mins.She goes out.She finds rey talking to vicky.She gets angry.Rey notices her moving on.He manages to escape from vicky.He calls kriya but kriya walks off.He speeds up n catches kriya's hand n takes her to fire exit.Kriya:rey mera hath chodo mujhe jaana hain.Rey:sorry i know tum mujhse naaraz ho pls kriya im really sorry.Kriya:mein kaisi naraz ho sakti tuj par..tumko jo accha lagta hain wo hee karegana waise hee raho..Rey:kriya actually mein...Kriya(interrupting):mujhe tere explaination nahi chahiye...pls leave my hand rey let me go...Rey forwards his hand which was bleeding infront of her.Kriya closes her eye as gets scared seeing d blood n d injured skin.Rey:mein college abhi pahuncha hoon...accident hua rasthe mein.Kriya:pehle nahi bata sakthe.(tieing her kerchief around his hand to stop bleeding).Rey:bathane ka tym thodi na mujhe diya baatcutter..Rey feels a drop on his hand.He raises her head to face him n she was crying.Rey:kriya pls mat ro...kriya(in tears):kithni stupid hoon mein samajne ki koshish bhi nahi kiya n dekho kaisa laga...Rey wiping her tears...Kriya:sab meri wajah se...tum bhi slow nahi chala sakte..Rey:meri galthi nahi thi wo ladki ka thi...direct scooty se side mein hit kiya..ladki haina isiliye chod diya..Kriya:dard ho raha hain..Rey:nahi...kuch bathane bhulaya.Kriya:shaam party hain sharon ke ghar mein...Rey:aur??kriya doesnt want to leak out as sharon has said not to.Kriya:kya aur wo bathane ke liye hee bhulaya.Rey(2 himself):kuch tho chupa rahi hain baatcutter.I will find out.Rey comes closer to her.He pins her to d wall n blocks her with his hand.He pulls her by d waist until der lips were so closer to each other.Her heartbeat starts increasing.Shivers were spreading across her body.Rey:kriya mujhe patha hain tum mujse kuch chupane ke koshish kar rahi ho..wo kya hain??Kriya couldnt lie to him.Their closeness need not give her a second to think of a lie.kriya was looking at rey without blinking.Rey:kriya..mein tumse baat kar rahi hoon.Kriya:wo mein aur...There was a loud sound n kriya was back to normality.She pushes rey's hand n was above to go.Rey(wantedly):ouch it hurts...kriya comes back to see whether she hurted rey's hand again.He holds her hand tightly.Rey:kriya pls bathao...Kriya:aaj shaam thak wait karna hee padega..party mein patha chalega.A sweet smile comes over kriya's face n rey leaves her hand.He stares at kriya until she goes.He was smiling too but his smile vanished soon.Rey:smile dekh kar poori topic chod diya...pata nahi yeh baatcutter kya jadoo chala rahi hain muj par.To be continued...Precap-party abhi baki hain!!!!!!!!!Dont 4get to like n comment.
Small update... not fair... next time... huge😃 one...
Part 13(continued)
Krisha head to home after classes.They both start getting ready for d party but it was entirely different.Sharon got ready soo fast n she helped kriya in her dressing n looks.Kriya looked gorgeous n so did sharon.They came out for welcoming der friends n relatives.Reyam comes first unusually.Rey was looking bloody hot n kriya sexy as ever.Swayam was looking so cute n sharon gorgeous.
Sharon:tum dono ithna jaldi aur sabse pehle..first tym.
Swayam:mein tho late hee aane wala tha iss rey ke wajah se..
Kriya was looking at rey n he had a soft smile on his face.
Sharon:tum dono waha jake baito hum abhi aayenge..
Rey:ok..jaldi aana.
Kriya greets d whole gang n they all go for reyam.They wer having a friendly chat
Nilesh:sharon party tho hain par kyun??
Sharon:its a secret..sabko jaldi patha chalega
Rey was only looking at kriya n kriya notices it.He comes n sits beside kriya while every1 were busy.
Rey:tum bahut acchi lag rahi ho..
Kriya blushes
Rey:tum mujhe kuch bathane wali thi..
Kriya:rey abhi nahi..
Rey:kriya pls...(holding her hand)
Sharon:guys party shuru hone wali hain chalo...hum dance floor ko jate hein.
Rey holds kriya's hand n kriya follows him.He takes her to d dark cornered side where no one was present.Kriya was surprised by rey's behavior. He puts his hand forward.Kriya kept her hand in his but still doesn't know why.
Rey:Shall v dance??
Kriya:yahaan..dance floor??
Rey:tumhari maa bhi party mein hain ah..
Kriya:haan..tho??
Rey:tho??mujhe laga ki tum mera sath dance tumhari maa ke samne nahi karogi..
Kriya:dats wat d surprise is aao..
Rey:Jhansi ke rani ke sath mera surprise de rahi ho..im gone today seriously.
Kriya:rey kuch nahi hoga aao'
Kriya pulls n takes him to d dance floor where her mom was sitting nearby.Rey was busy looking at her mom.
Kriya:rey'mera mom ko nahi mujhe dekho.
Rey:kriya par..
Kriya:kya???
She takes his hand n keeps it on her waist also keeps her hand on his shoulders.
Kriya:rey..lets dance.
Rey finally feels comfortable n they start dancing for d romantic tune.He was lost in her beauty n charm.Each n every move made them closer n closer until der was no space left.
Rey:kriya kya ho raha hain..tum tumhara maa ke samne dance kar rahi ho..wo Jhansi ki rani bhi ithna interest nahi dekha rahi hain..
Kriya smiles.Her eyes were filled wid an extra happiness.
Rey:surprise kya hain baatcutter bathao na..im getting really tensed.
Kriya:surprise' surprise hee hota hain.Tumhe jaldi patha chalega'
Goutham rai prakash goes to d stage with a mic.
Goutham:may I all have all ur attention pls.
Everyone looks him including reyam.Krisha was super excited,they just hung up their faces on der boys.
Goutham:Sharon rai prakash n kriya ghai are fraternal twins n smriti ghai is my wife.We married officially before so many years n we met recently.This is a get together party hain n for welcoming d new relationship.I know it is really hard to believe for some people but dis is d fact.
Kriya was annoningly seeing rey who had been suddenly out of d box.She pushed him,beat him playfully until he became normal.
Rey:kya mein sach suna ya mein ears ko kuch pro aagaya..
Kriya:tum jo bhi suna wo such hain rey..mein aur sharon sisters hain
Rey:freak..im totally lost...ithna bada surprise.
Kriya:isiliye mein batha nahi paya..
Rey:those sentences r repeating like hell in my hears..my head is gonna burst out now(holding his head).
Kriya:tumhare liye ek aur surprise hain..
Rey:kya?????
Kriya turns opposite bcoz she wanted to make out everything she had done so far which she cant on seeing rey's eyes.
Kriya:mein dehradun jaane ka reason mein abhi tak nahi pataya..mein apni rude words se tumko hurt kiya i know but intentionally nahi kiya tum mujhe bhoolne ko kiya...actually maa mujse promise liya ki mein tumse kabhi nahi bat karenge..par wo sab ab matter bhi nahi karte kyun ki maa ne promise ko wapas liya..
Rey:mujhe ye sab patha hain par wo promise wapas nahi patha..tumhari maa bhi ek insaan hain.
Kria:rey stop it..she is my mom.
Rey:ok baba..shall v go for a ride.
Kriya:yes...
Rey goes n comes back on a bike.
Kriya:rey..bike??
Rey:mera gf hain ye..i love bike rather than car.Madam ji please baito..
Kriya sits on d bike.They start.
Rey:kahaan jayenge..
Kriya:patha nahi..tum jaha bhi chale i dont have any pro.
Rey:ok..
He increases d speed n kriya holds his shoulder for support.He rests her head holding his waist.She loved d moment she didnt want to miss it.
Kriya:kahaan jaa raha hain..
Rey:im kidnapping u kriya ghai..
Kriya:all d best.
They soon reach a place.He gets down n gives his hand for kriya.Kriya gets down n they both starts walking.
Kriya:rey ye place kithna dark hain(holding his hand)..
Rey:darna mat..mein hoon tumhare sath.Mein abhi aati hun..
Kriya was really scared she just stood up feeling lost.A sudden light falls on her.Now rey was infront of her with a flowers in his hand.
Rey:ye tumhare liye..
Kriya:thanks..i really love it..
Rey goes down on knees.He holds her hand n keeps a diamond ring on her finger.
Rey:I love you baatcutter..pls mujhe chodke mat jao..
Kriya felt like d world stopped n waiting for her next move.
Kriya:i love u rey..i love you so much.Tum mere liye kithna kuch kar rahe ho aur mein tumko hurt kiya(she flows into tears)
Rey gets up...
Rey:kriya..u r d princess of my life..i cant let u cry(wiping her tears)
Kriya hugs rey n they were in their world of love.Nothing mattered to dem...
Kriya:i dont want to miss u rey..not again.
Rey:tujhe kya lagta hain tum mujhe chodkar chala ja sakti ho..i wont let u go even if u wanted to.I love you...
Kriya was very pleased wid d words.She felt very secured in d arms of rey.Kriya breaks d hug n looks at rey n rey looks at her(oho...bg music).Now all d lights come after a moment.It was a beautiful beach n kriya becomes busy watching it.
Just then rey gets sharon's call.He was speaking to her from so long.Kriya gets angry.She pinches him.
Rey:ouch...
Sharon:rey..kya hua??
Rey:kuch nahi sharon...
Kriya understood dat it didnt work.She moves closer to him n keeps a hand on his chest seducing him.Rey dis time was totally lost in her twinkling eyes.
Sharon:rey..r u der??baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho...rey!!!!!
He forgets about d call.He leans closer to her expecting something from her.But kriya comes closer to rey, pushes him n stands away from him.Rey regains his consciousness n realises dat sharon was on d line.
Sharon:rey..
Rey:haan sharon bolo..
Sharon:rey tumko kya hua..abhi tak baat kyun nahi kiya..
He doesnt know wat to tell..
Rey:mein baat kiya sharon..tumhe nahi suna...
Sharon:nahi..shayad signals thoda weak hain.Mein tujhe badme baat kartha hun bye
Rey:bye(in mind) bach gaya..
He notices kriya who was still staring at him.He goes towards her n she moves back.She starts running n rey was behind her.At a moment he catches hold of her hand n they both fall with a thud.Kriya was on rey.Her hair was on her face n rey pins it to d ear.Kriya tries to get up n rey pulls her by his arms around her.Kriya was lost again by his hot body n charm.She loved his touch but makes her efforts to be free.
Kriya:rey mujhe chodo..
Rey:chodne ke liye thodi na pakda meine..
Kriya blushes.
Rey pulls her closer for filling d gap between dem.Their lips were in contact with each other.Kriya couldnt control herself any more.She keeps a hand on his cheek n kisses his lips.Rey was too suprised but joins d kiss too,the kiss longed for about 15 mins until kriya realised wat she was doing.Rey kisses her on d forehead n she lies down beside him.Rey holds her hand with his.
Rey:kriya ek aur hain jaldi uto..
Kriya gets up n leads d way.They move lil further nearby d shore where a table was arranged with candles n flowers leaving a wonderful fragrance around.There were two seats.Rey makes kriya seated n then takes his place.
Kriya:rey yeh sab kya hain..
Rey:candle light dinner...humare liye.
Kriya:waah not bad rey...tume girls ko acchi taraf se impress karna bhi aata hain...
Rey:im glad ur impressed..par mein rey nahi chabilal hun chabilal..yeh tumko nahi romaira ke liye he..
Kriya:Thanks chabilal...
Rey:arre madam thanks thodi na chahiye mujhe...aap dinner khao..
They have d dinner n rey gifts her chocolates.
Rey:Romaira will u marry me??
Kriya(seriously):Sorry i cant marry you..
There was a deadly silence hovering them.
Kriya wid a soft smile curved on her face.
Kriya:mein tujhe marry nahi kar sakta hoon...mein sirf ek insaan ko pasand karta hun wo he rey n i will marry only him..
They broke into laughter n rey was so moved by her words.
Precap-date to be continued..
I tried my level best to make it d longest update..
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Originally posted by: aditi061
Its amazing dear. Plz update the nxt part soon.