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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome finally smriti takes back her promise...update the next part soon n thnxx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes the part was small but with many important twists and i am happy that at least here kriya can dance and talk with rey thnx for pm and plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
just luv ur update pm me when update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update pm me plzz for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 13

Krisha were on der way to college.
Sharon:kriya dont tell d matter to any1...
Kriya feels lil disappointed.
Kriya:kyun??
Sharon:mein sabko shaam surprise dena chahthi hoon...so party ke baare mein bathayenge par not dis one..
Kriya:ok...(in mind)par mein tho rey ko already call kiya.
They reach d college.Kriya rushes to fire exit saying dat she had some work.
kriya:thank god rey nahi ayi...time 9.30 hain ab tak nahi..
She waits for almost 45 mins.She goes out.She finds rey talking to vicky.She gets angry.Rey notices her moving on.He manages to escape from vicky.He calls kriya but kriya walks off.He speeds up n catches kriya's hand n takes her to fire exit.
Kriya:rey mera hath chodo mujhe jaana hain.
Rey:sorry i know tum mujhse naaraz ho pls kriya im really sorry.
Kriya:mein kaisi naraz ho sakti tuj par..tumko jo accha lagta hain wo hee karegana waise hee raho..
Rey:kriya actually mein...
Kriya(interrupting):mujhe tere explaination nahi chahiye...pls leave my hand rey let me go...
Rey forwards his hand which was bleeding infront of her.Kriya closes her eye as gets scared seeing d blood n d injured skin.
Rey:mein college abhi pahuncha hoon...accident hua rasthe mein.
Kriya:pehle nahi bata sakthe.(tieing her kerchief around his hand to stop bleeding).
Rey:bathane ka tym thodi na mujhe diya baatcutter..
Rey feels a drop on his hand.He raises her head to face him n she was crying.
Rey:kriya pls mat ro...
kriya(in tears):kithni stupid hoon mein samajne ki koshish bhi nahi kiya n dekho kaisa laga...
Rey wiping her tears...
Kriya:sab meri wajah se...tum bhi slow nahi chala sakte..
Rey:meri galthi nahi thi wo ladki ka thi...direct scooty se side mein hit kiya..ladki haina isiliye chod diya..
Kriya:dard ho raha hain..
Rey:nahi...kuch bathane bhulaya.
Kriya:shaam party hain sharon ke ghar mein...
Rey:aur??
kriya doesnt want to leak out as sharon has said not to.
Kriya:kya aur wo bathane ke liye hee bhulaya.
Rey(2 himself):kuch tho chupa rahi hain baatcutter.I will find out.
Rey comes closer to her.He pins her to d wall n blocks her with his hand.He pulls her by d waist until der lips were so closer to each other.Her heartbeat starts increasing.Shivers were spreading across her body.
Rey:kriya mujhe patha hain tum mujse kuch chupane ke koshish kar rahi ho..wo kya hain??
Kriya couldnt lie to him.Their closeness need not give her a second to think of a lie.kriya was looking at rey without blinking.
Rey:kriya..mein tumse baat kar rahi hoon.
Kriya:wo mein aur...
There was a loud sound n kriya was back to normality.She pushes rey's hand n was above to go.
Rey(wantedly):ouch it hurts...
kriya comes back to see whether she hurted rey's hand again.He holds her hand tightly.
Rey:kriya pls bathao...
Kriya:aaj shaam thak wait karna hee padega..party mein patha chalega.
A sweet smile comes over kriya's face n rey leaves her hand.He stares at kriya until she goes.He was smiling too but his smile vanished soon.
Rey:smile dekh kar poori topic chod diya...pata nahi yeh baatcutter kya jadoo chala rahi hain muj par.

To be continued...

Precap-party abhi baki hain!!!!!!!!!


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Edited by snigdha143 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the part.

plz update the next part today itself
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsumm part dear...n thnx 4 pm n update nxt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice... update today itself...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome snigdha..👏
Rey:smile dekh kar poori topic chod diya...pata nahi yeh baatcutter kya jadoo chala rahi hain muj par.

aww...how cute 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update loved it and thanks for the pm and now chapter 13 was also amazing and udpate soon cant wait so eager

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