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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc FF...
read all part in a go...
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww...sch a nyc update...luvd it...bechare swaron..phans gaye...
Lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update as usual and thanks for the pm :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read part 10 it was amazing girl u r too good and love this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow the chapter was amazing loved it and thanks for the pm and continue soon
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Awesome one !!
Continue soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
cant wait for the next part...
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Part 12

It was early morning.Kriya's cell starts ringing n sharon gets disturbed by d sound.She wakes up kriya.Kriya still in sleeping mood.
Kriya:kon ithni subhah pareshan kar rahi hain..
Kriya lifts d call.
Kriya:hello...
Smriti:hello beta...guess wat??mein mumbai aa gayi rath sumwat 2.30 ko..
Kriya:toh mujhe kyun nahi bataya ab tak..
Smriti:tum so gayi hogi na isiliye..ok beta..jaldi ghar aa jao.
Kriya:maa luggage bahut hain aur sab so rahi hain..pls maa yahan aao na mujhe help karne ke liye.
Smriti:tumhari frnd ghar ka address bathao mein aati hun.
Kriya tells her d address,cuts d call n sleeps.Smriti comes as said n rings d bell.She was standing near d door wondering whose was dat giant house.Every1 gets disturbed except krisha bcoz der were sleeping upstairs.Cleaner goes n opens d door.
Cleaner:madam kon chahiye??
Smriti:kriya..
Cleaner:wo madam so rahi hain..mein usse utathi hun.Aap sofa mein beto.
Smriti:ok..jaldi bhulao.
Smriti sits on d sofa watching d beautiful house.Goutham raiprakash comes out to check who came.He was wearing his night wear.He doesnt notice smriti who was sitting.
Goutham:cleaner kon aayi??
Cleaner:kriya ji ka mom.
Smriti finds d voice similar,she gets up at d instant to see d person.Goutham becomes so happy on seeing smriti.He feels like he was still 25(annoying bg music ).Smriti has no bound to happiness,she almost had tears in her eyes.
Cleaner wakes up kriya.Kriya gets ready n was coming downstairs.She gets shocked on seeing sumthing and dat was goutham n smriti's hug with tears in der eyes.She loved d movement but she runs upstairs.She wakes up sharon who was sleeping.
Sharon:kriya kya hogayi??
Kriya:sharon jaldi aao..
Sharon atlast wakes up,gets ready n moves down.They were still hugging.Krisha were on d spot.Sharon looks at kriya for her to explain wat was happening.There was deadly silence surrounding them.Smriti saw krisha n comes back to reality.
Sharon:yahan kya ho rahi hain mujhe koi batayega..
Smriti moves forward n holds sharon's face wid her hands.She felt strange bcoz of dat new love.
Goutham:kriya aur tum twins ho..tumhari maa hein wo...
Every1 had tears flowing in der eyes.Kriya goes n hugs her dad.Sharon hugs her mom.Sharon was unableto digest a main fact dat kriya was her sister.Krisha were staring at each other.
Sharon 2 herself:jiske sath mein ithni rudely behave wo meri sis hain..
Goutham:ok tum dono jake ready hojao..
Kriya:dad..hum chalna hain..
Goutham:tumko kya laga kriya mein tum dono ko jaane deti hun..nahi.Tum dono aaj aur ab se yahi rahogi.V will b togethe forever.
Sharon:nice idea dad..hum sab yahan hee rahenge.
Krisha wer having a cheerful smile.They both leave for der room for their parents to have a gud tym..
They both get ready while goutham sends some people to smriti's home n shift evrything from der.Krisha get ready 2 go to d clg n comes downstairs along wid d bags.
Goutham:bahut acchi lag raha hain tum dono..
Smriti:meri bacche jo hain..
There was only happiness in d house.They were having d breakfast.
Goutham:aaj shaam bahut bade party rakhenge..tumhari friends ko bhulao.
Sharon:wow dad..u r too fast.
Kriya:hum bhulayenge sab ko..
Kriya:dad dance hogi??
Goutham:haan zaroor hogi..humari family dance mein tho hee special hein..
Kriya:par mein dance nahi kar sakti hun..
Goutham:kyun..mein tho suna ki tum bahut acchi dancer ho..
Kriya:maa ne mujhse promise karvaya..
Goutham n sharon looks at smriti wid a questioning face.
Smriti:ok..tum aaj se dance kar sakti hoon..promise wapas liya..
Kriya goes n sits beside smriti.
Kriya:thanks maa..tum bahut acchi mom ho..(with a faint voice)kya mein rey se baat kar sakti hoon..
Smriti had an entirely different expression on her face now but smiles after kriya keeps a baby face.
Smriti:ok..
Sharon:kriya jaldi aao..hum jaana hain.
Kriya:ek min sharon..mein mera pen bhool gayi leke aati hun..
She goes upstairs running.She takes her cell out n calls rey.He lifts d call in his sleep.
Kriya:hello rey..
Rey:hello kon...
Kriya(angrily):mein hun kriya..
Rey:(his sleep flies away)good morning baatcutter..aaj kuch tho special hain tum mujhe call kiya..
Kriya:haan..wo batane ke liye call kiya..mein chahthi ki mein tujhe sabse pehle batha sakti hoon..
Rey:ithna spl kya hain??bathao na kriya..
Kriya:abhi nahi..mujhe fire exit mein milao sharp 9..k?
Rey:ok baatcutter mein jaldi aati hun bye..
Kriya:bye..

Precap-rocking party.

Guys,i didnt want to stretch goutham n smriti meeting bcoz i would hav made it worse just hope it wasnt dat disgusting..

I know i made d part short..but i promise u i will make d next one bigger...
Edited by snigdha143 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nyc part hope reality me b aisa kuch ho jae
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Posted: 14 years ago
yipeee!!!!!!!!!! family sth aa gyi...sister sth aa gyi...n kriya apni mom ke promise se b free ho gyi nw DIL DOSTI n DANCE only...only kriyaansh romance 😳...n party...yipeee...n thnx 4 pm n update nxt soon

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